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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: chavvi16

she was talking to maan not her papa right man she doesnt look and talk does she this will be so funny for sure
man these two are funny what do they keep doing
so maan saved geet's father isnt that sweet but what actually happened with him do disclose soon
cheers for pm see ya soon



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mel420

that' s not part to stop not fair is it maan or that man😕 briliant update




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: soma.gurti

awesomeee update...ab hoga maaneet fight 😉😛👏



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



Geet is so sweet...she is praying to God for keeping Maan safe...but God gave her return gift for her humbleness that he saved her father's life by sending same Maan to him...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...



woww kiran you did it .. i was waiting someone to find this connection point between maaneet. 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

lovely

continue soon
i cant wait



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Monika 🤗...thank u for the awesome update and PM...Geet is so cute...loved the convo between Maaneet 😆...poor Maan had to leave from there in the rain...thinking the person who he helped is Geet's father...so he is going to stay in their house now...our jhalli Geet was talking non stop without seeing who it is...waiting to see her reaction...plz continue...TC 😊






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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 3

she dropped her vegetable bowl with open mouth n open eyes. she was looking to that one, shocked. After few minutes when she gained her lost sense, words came out" aaap"

haan mai. aur tumhaare yaha guest ka welcome iis trah se karte hai kya" maan said crossed his arm across his chest.

geet ' mehmaan (guest)?? woh kon hai

maan - kyu, tumhaare saamne khada hai

geet - aap ..aap mehmaan(guest) kabse ho gaye..aau..aur aap mere ghar me ..she looked around .."awww mere kitchen me kya kar rahe ho. " she asked bedeviled. " babaji, .. itni raat me ...mai akeli ladki... papa bhi ghar pe nahi hai... ab mai kya karungi..kahi ye mera picha karte to nahi aaya..hayee babaji, ab mai kya karu. iis dust ko yaha se kaise bhagau" she thought little scared, making weird faces ..Fiddling her duppatta.

Maan was looking her with amazed and confused eyes."ye ase Shaklee(expressions) kyu bana rahi hai " he thought. "oo..achha.. iiska matlab mai sahi tha" maan said to her smriking.

Geet- kya sahi tha

matlab ye ki jab maine tumhe pahli baar dekha tha tabhi samjh gaya tha." maan said while walking toward leaving room.

kya..kyaa samjh gaye thy aap" geet asked following him

" yahi..ki tum iis duniya ki nahi ho" maan said sitting on sofa

geet mouth opened

" apna muh band karo.. makhi (insects) chali jaayegi. aur haa mere liye pani aur coffee lana" maan said picking newspaper from front table. geet was confused shocked irritated scared angry all at the same time. She dint move from there.

"tumne suna nahi maine kya kaha ..ya sirf tum bolna jaanti ho sunna nahi" maan said turning paper page stretching his leg on table, making him more comfortable.

" oyeee hello..aap hai kon aur andar kaise aaye." Ohh now she asked most important question. she asked with bold face which she was trying hard to make but failing hard

" kardi na bewkufo wali baat." he stood up putting paper on table and started walking to her." tumne khud darwaza khola..khud mujhe andar aane diya aur mujhar puch rahi ho mai andar kaise aaya...wah' tumhaare dimaag kit oh daad deni (praising) paregi ' he was now very close to her. Looking in her eyes which had fear now with closeness of a stranger.

geet ( selftalk) - dekh geet ghabra mat. kuch nahi hoga. bas himmat se kaam le. aur waise bhi ye itna bura nahi lagta..hai na...haan. tu bas himmat rakh. babaji ..." she was thinking and giving herself strength when maan was smirking looking her scared face. "ab tumhe pata chalega miss ki maan singh khurana se ulajgne ka natija kya hota hai" he thought.

maan- oo ladki..tum fir so gayi kya.

now geet came back." han...nahi mai jagi hu..aapko coffee chahiye naa. abhi laati hu. aap tab tak baithiy na.." she said with very calm and cute smile on her face, which was still close to him.

maan ( st) - iise achanak kya ho gaya. ye itni shaant aur muskura bhi rahi hai" he was lost with confusion when he heard " aree aap abhi tak khare hai. please baithiye na. aap toh mehmaan hai na. mai abhi aapke liye coffee laati hu. " geet said and left for kitchen.

maan was sitting in leaving room totally conmfused with her changed behavior when geet called from kitchen. " achha suniyeee..aap bahut thak gaye honge na. asp asa kijiye thoda fresh ho jaaiye. washroom uper right side me hai " maan only could utter " hmm..thik hai " and went for getting fresh with lots of confusion. he thought " isse ho kya gaya hai. abhi toh itno gusse me aur daari hui thi. ye achanak se kya ho gya." while geet was smiling hard.

he went upstairs and found room where was attached washroom. He went inside and started washing his face without locking door when he heard some click sound. He turned and shocked to see the door was closed. He run there. "Oo' oyeee open it'Open the door damn it"' oyeee pagal larki..darwaaza kholo'"he shouted his lung out. He was hell angry.. Started walking back n forth.. Thinking..Making plan how to go out from here.. ohh The Maan Singh Khurana was locked in a washroom ..What the hell!!!

Geet was very happy. She was patting her shoulder for making her enemy trapped. "Good geet ..shabash .. kya dimag lagaya hai.. ab pata chalega uus dust ko Geet Handa se ulajhne ka natija.. bada aaya tha mujhe order karne ..ab peeyega washroom me baith ke coffee" her complete set of teeth was visible ..She was jumping congratulating herself. She went to room and knocked washroom door " hello.. koii hai andar "

Maan- OYEE' darwaaja kholo ..warnaa'

Geet- warnaa'warna kya haan..bolo..bataiye..warna kya.. aap mujhe andar se kha jaaoge kya" he was laughing ..

Maan- wo toh tumhe pata chal hi jaayega.. bas ek baar mai bahar aa jaau.. fir tumhe pata chalega mai kya karunga " he was angry irritated everything and geet was making it worse

Geet ' haan.. haan.. who toh mujhe dikh hi raha hai aap kya karoge.. Washroom me locked ho per akar nahi gayi abhi tak' mujhe order dene chale the na.. ab kud fas gaye'

Maan- oyeee pagal larki..Maan singh khurana se uljhne ki galti bhul se bhi mat karna warna '

Geet- aur Geet handa se bhi uljhne ki galti mat karna ..warna'

Both were showing eye to eye without looking each other.. But both could feel it.




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Heyyy how was this. please bless me with lots of lovely comments. i wait n read n love each n every single word of it.

Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yay me first...
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Yeh dondo toh tom and jerry ki tarah ladhtey hain...
continue soon
Edited by mansi.tripathi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update
oh god both of them cn nvr stop fighting lol
update soon
waiting eagerly

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