--DOR-- Thread 1 (Parts 1-22) - Page 30

Originally posted by: soma.gurti

hehehehehehe...superbbb part...suniye ji...bechara maan...heheheheheh...😆👏👏

yea koun hai?????aur kaha se aya???iski itne himmat geet ko apni biwi bola...😡😡...maan usse chodna mat...😡😡
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Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Awesome update..👏

Originally posted by: pinkybedi

😊Nice concept hey

Originally posted by: raingurti

oye lovu ye kamina kon h why did he mention geet to his wud be wife😡...maan don't spare him😡...superb update

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s t r i n g s o f r e l a t i o n s

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PART 11

Geet was very scared by all this. Who was that man' she thought. She never ever seen that man in her life then why she said her , his would be wife, she could not understand. Maan looked her pale face . He dint like it . He wanted to see her happy always. It was not that he had any feeling for her but he wanted to be her relax and bubbly always" he thought.

"geet" he called her . She looked him still her heart was beating fast

"geet.. do you know that man" he asked. Geet nodded no. maan found it fishy, if geet dint know him then why he claimed her his would wife." geet tum ghabraao nahi.. wo ab nahi aayega" she nodded believing on his words. Maan asked where is mohindaer. She said he had gone to other town for two days.

Maan- toh tum ghar me akeli rahogi

geet- nahi ..woh meera aayegi na ..raat me. " maan nodded. He was feeling very awkward by this silence. Every time geet made their meet very interesting that maan dint notice any awkwardness before but this time geet silence was something doing to him. Their silence was broke by a phone call. Geet picked up phone. It was mohindar.

Geet- papa.. she was nearly crying. Papa..wo..koi aaya tha.. ajeeb sa aadmi aur wo..woh.." first time words was not coming out from her mouth. Maan was seeing her plight. He took phone from geet and talked to mohindar.

Maan- hello

mohindar- maan beta ? Tum waha ?

Maan- ji uncle..woh mujhe yaha se kuch kaam tha to apse milne chala aaya..

mohindar- thik kiya beta.. per mai toh shahar se baaahar hu .. beta ye geet kyu ro rahi thi" he asked worried. maan told mohindar what happened. Mohindar got tensed.

Mohindar- wo..wo..beta .. maan kya aaj raat tum geet ke sath ruk sakte ho.. wase maine meera ko bola hai per tum rahte toh mujhe tassli(relax) hoti.

Maan hesitant first staying there, with geet at night, without any elder but he agreed guessing mohindar seriousness in voice. Mohindar said him he trust maan like his own son. So maan agreed. He ended phone. Geet was looking him , trying to understand what they talk but failed.

By this time she was normal. Maan felt by all what happened, it was something serious, otherwise mohindar would not requested him to stay their with geet. He wanted to find out about that man. He said geet to make coffee for him and he went on terrace to call his detective. He told that man feature to detective and to find out everything about him.

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Maan geet were having their dinner, still she was mute. Now it was enough for maan. He could not see her like this anymore. He remembered why he came here. So he started this time.

"geet"

ji" she looked him

"to tumne bataya..tumne morning me call kyu kiya tha"

"oo terii.. maan achha kiya aapne yaad dilaa diya mujhe. Mai toh bhul hi gayi thi ki kal humara function hai,,, maan aapko na mera ek kaam karna hoga.. who kya hai na, ab maine sabse bola hai ki aap mere bf ho ..toh aapko toh ab dikhana bhi parega na.. warna meri reputation ka kachraa ho jaayega.. aap sun rahe ho na maan mai kya bol rahi hu... " and here she starts again while eating

'hmm sun raha hu" he said... "per samjh nahi raha kuch " he thought

' haa..toh aap na ek kaam kijiye ga.. who aapko na hume..hume matlab mai , meera aur humaari jo friends hai na..unko collage drop karna hoga..woh kya hai na..asa nahi hai ki humaare pass koi aur jeep nahi hai per wo asa hua ki.. wo jo meera hai na..uska bhai hume chorne wala tha..per who to yaha hai hi nahi...woh to gaya delhi.. aur delhi me pata hai maan wo kya karta hai...uska waha bahut bara sa chai ki dukaan hai... aree maan pata hai aapko.. wo chai na bahut achhi banata hai.. aap chai peeto ho maa" ..no response... she again called " maannn" again she dind get reply. She raised her head and found maan was sleeping .. resting his palm on cheek.

Geet (st) ' ye loo.. mai yaha unse kitna urgent baat kar rahi hu aur ye hai ki so rahe hai.. wwase thak gaye honge na bechaare.. sone de geet sone de thori der.. jab jaagenge fir baat kar lungi...

she cleaned table again and again looking him. She smiled. "sote hue kitna pyaare dikhte hai na (I just love this line from show ).. oyee geet ye tu kya kar rahi hai... chup kar aur apna kaam kar samjhi" she blabbered herself and finished her work.

Now she went to maan " maan " she softly called his name. He dint moved. She poked his shoulder but still he dint responsed. "MAAnnn " this time she screamed in his ear. He jumped in sudden and in hurry pulled geet hand . She couldnt balance and landed on his lap, resting her palm on his chest. He looked her face. It was so close to him. He couldnt think ahead. It was like time had stopped there for them. Her soft palm was touching his bare chest. His hand was wandering on her slim waist, caressing it. They were lost . Maan forgot what he was doing. He was flowing in this beautiful moment. He started to pull geet toward him, pressing her back , slowly. She was not protesting, why she couldnt know. it was her heart wish too, her mind said. They were close,, very close. He was going to touch her lips... when suddenly geet screamed... "aaa maannn"

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Originally posted by: CutieTeju

You Dusht... U interrupted last one Maneet's beautiful moment...😆Nice update..😊