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Originally posted by: hermoso

superb update . chai ki dukaan and woh bhi bahut saari 🤣.great going .



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Awsome update last me kya hua...????? Hehehehe:p



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Man just when they were about to kiss, you ended it...not fair 😆



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---DOR---

s t r i n g s o f r e l a t i o n s

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PART 12


" Maaan... meri chai jal gayi" saying she run from there to kitchen. She stopped panting hard. Clutched her duppatta near chest tried to calm her running heartbeats. She was shaking with this sudden proximity with maan. She closed her eyes " babaji..ye mai kya karne jaa rahi thi … " she covered her mouth with palm to curse herself for going this much close to a stranger. She knows maan but still they were unknown to one another for going this far. "papaji mujhe maaf kar dijiyega ". she was in dilemma what she was doing. Her mind was saying its wrong but heart was still in trance of that moment. Heart was not ready to leave that beautiful moment because for him, it was purely right.



Maan stood from there and went to his room. Pushed his hair back in dilemma. "maan ye sab kya kar raha tha tu .. tu usse kiss..." he couldnot think more. It was strange shock for him that he gave this closeness to a girl that too geet... " but why not maan... what s wrong in geet... No..no..ye kabhi nahi ho sakta.. mai asa kabhi nahi hone dunga" maan was arguing with his own heart which was not ready to give way.



Both were lost and fighting with their own , as they dint knew what was happening outside of home. That man, whom name was Raghv, called some neighbors faking that mohindar s girl was spending night with a stranger. He was in rage to take revenge of his insult. And it was good chance for him also as mohindar was not in town. So he collected some men and women and started shouting outside. Some men was of his own gang who started to abuse her and mohindar. they were throwing stones and making violent sounds. Geet heard all this. First she could not understand what was happening but when sound went louder she frightened. She started shivering. Maan too shocked by all this. He run to see what happening and shocked to see all that. He went to see where is geet and shocked to see her sitting in kitchen at corner place, crying hard. " geeett" he run to her and hugged. She was very scared and terrified. He remember that day when he made her scare by that murder drama. He knew she was still a child with no boldness in her heart. Now he had to do something.



Outside all were screaming shouting (specially raghav s men) with sword, sticks,and guns. Some good neighbors were trying to made him understand that mohinader is not bad nature man but he was not ready to listen. he wanted to insult geet, as she insulted him, with that man (maan).



"geet..kuch nahi hoga..ghabraao mat..mai hu na hmm" he consoled her but she was not hearing anything. Her condition was very bad, she was missing her papaji this time.

"geet.. mai jaa kar dekhta hu "



"nahiii..please mat jaaiye maan.. wo..woh log bahut bure hai..please mat jaaiye " she was really in very bad condition.

"geet ..woh log mera kuch nahi bigaar sakte " he still was hugging her in his embrace like a child. But she was not understanding anything. Maan was her only support this time and she dint want to lose him. Maan was being helpless, keeping her in his arm, looking her cry and scared. Geet was not leaving him. She clutched him more tight, keeping herself more close to him.she was almost sitting in his lap, nearing to his heart.



Looking no any option maan called his securities and told him all this major situation. He told him not to bring geet or mohindar name in all this. He again took geet in his arm and caressed her to sooth . After some time securities came and handled crowd. Raghav and his men run away from there before police came.



After some time all were gone. Geet was still in shock but was much better then before. Maan supported her and brought to her room. She was missing mohinadar badly and by her luck he called. maan told geet not to tell him anything otherwise he would be worry. She nodded. She talked to her papa with very care, hiding her cry but at last it was hard for her. She started crying bitterly. Maan took phone from her hand and talked to mohidar and told him everything.



Mohindar was feeling very helpless. He could not come to her daughter to heal her. Maan was very worried by all this. He asked mohindar who was that man, who was claiming geet his fiance. Mohindar had no option now to hide. He decided to tell him everything to save geet.



Flashback



It was rainy day. A man with a young age girl (17yrs) were running, panting, aghast in forest of Shimla. Girl was badly injured and nearly fainted. Some how mohindar was making geet run, for sake of their life. It was getting dark and night before time because of heavy rain. someway mohindar found a house . They went there and knocked. A warm lady opened door . She saw mohindar and geet in this horrible condition, whereas geet was nearly to death. She hurriedly brought them inside. Mohindar laid down geet to bed. He was very worried for her.



By luck that house was of a doctor. Lady called her husband, who own run small hospital(who was doctor). He checked geet and worriedly said that her condition was not good. Mohindar , who was doctor as well knew this still he begged him to save her life. They started her treatment. Bandaged all her wounds and inject medicines. Geet was unconscious. After two days she opened her eyes. All felt happy. She started crying due to all pain and something which she was feeling inside her.



Mohindar came to see her. Geet saw him with blank eyes. Mohindar worried looking her empty face. He tried to talk her but she dint. Some days spent like this. Geet was completely mum. In these in between time mohindar started working as assistant doctor under owner of house. Slowly geet also started mixing up with them. Mohindar was happy seeing her coming in her normal. Mohindar and geet were new in that area so they decided to live there for ever, as mohindar had already source of income. That lady and his husband convinced them to stay in their house. As mohindar had no shelter still he agreed. so it was easy for him to work in hospital and took care of geet with help of a elder lady. They couple (house owner) started liking ans loving geet as their own daughter.

Slowly one year passed , mohindar came to know , that lady had a son, who was living in abroad, doing some business. One day , that lady came to mohindar and kept a marriage proposal for geet, with his son. She said she liked geet , to be with them forever, because they see geet like her own daughter. and it would be a perfect match also.


Precap : Past Continue


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