MG ff - Her Bitter fate Thread 2 link @ Pg 151 - Page 9

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update

loved it

Originally posted by: URME

I HOPE HE IS MAAN

I don't want GEET to use "SUNIYEE" for anyone else


I am waiting ...waiting for MAANEET moments.

I hate to wait like MAAN SING KHURNA😡😡😡


UPDATE SOON with lots of MAANEET MOMENTS😳😳😳

Originally posted by: raingurti

wowww bhut accha lovu...muahhh...ummm that sound distroubing me also...😉

Originally posted by: shruti_ms

maans parents dont seem to be very nice in nature

they seem to have an ulterior motive in getting geet married to maan

i hope maan is good at heart and can understand geet and love her

Part 5

In her daze she thought she heard some noise. She tried to get what was that. Few minutes passed and again she heard same sound but little louder.

"ahhh"

"oo babaji ye aawaz toh guest room se aa rahi hai. Shayad wo bahut taqleef me hai. Mujhe jaa kar dekhna chahiye" thinking this she went to guest room which was front of her room.

Door was little open so she entered slowly. Stepped toward bed. He was in pain she could feel it. Slowly she went there and sat on bed beside him. She couldn't think what should do. She was looking him. In that dark room only light source was form outside bulb which was on, in corridor of haveli. So she was able to see his face, not very clear but it was visible enough.

She looked him. To that stranger. He had bandage on his forehead and arms. He must be in so much pain, she thought. She engrossed in him. His eyes were closed; he had thick brows beautifully curved. He had female lashes but it looked more masculine on him. A sharp nose above a soft M- shaped lips. "He looks good..No no handsome" this is what she thought. She smiled little on her own thought. She was staring a stranger openly without any shy. She was amazed on her own. But she was doing it. Sudden she felt his curved brows frowned little. She saw his lips parted and some not clear, faded voice came out. " hhhmm"

Again it broke her daze. She cursed herself. Ooh God, what i was doing. i was staring at a unknown guy. Babaji , ye mai kya kar rahi thi .mujhe maaf kar dena". She closed her eyes in shame. But again his pained voice brought back her from her lost world. She couldn't understand what she should do so she raised her hand and started caressing his hair. Slowly, softly, without making him disturb, she was easing him. Don't know why but at that moment she felt this will ease his pain for sure. So she did . Caressed his deep black hair. And yes, she was right. It really worked. Stranger felt little peace, like something was removing his pain. He was getting calm now. geet was caressing his hair lovingly looking him. She was not thinking anything. She was doing what she felt to do in her little sense. Actually she had no sense at that moment. But it was beautiful, she thought. Caressing his hair was her right she felt. she was totally in trance. Now she came below. Touched his forehead. She jolted and stood quickly. " ooh God, he has fever. High fever. Geet tu kya kar rhi thi . use itna tez bukhar hai aur tune dhyaan bhi nahi diya. Ab mai kya karu babaji. Haa.. maa ko bulati hu" thinking this she run to rano n mohindar room.

She knocked door " maa papaji...maa.."

" suniye, bahar shyad geet hai " rano said mohindar inside room. " aa rahi tu beta"

She opened door. " geet kya hua . tu iss waqt. Tu thik hai na"

Geet- haan maa mai thik hu. Woh guest room me se aawaj aa rahi hai. Seems he is in pain"

"ohh.. rano you go to him I call daarji" mohindar said to rano.

"ji"..chal beta" rano and geet went to guest room while mohinder to daarji.

In guest room.

"Geet beta, thanda pani aur ek rumaal to leke aa"

"ji maa" geet left.

" daarji i had rung doctor but he is not in town. He had prescribed some medicine." Mohindar informed daarji. By then all were in room.. ' daarji, mai bazaar se dava lekar aatu hu ' saying this mohindar left.

Meanwhile geet brought water and some cloth. Rano started to keep wet cloth on his forehead.

Geet was standing next to bed looking him. She was feeling some pain in her heart like she could feel how much pain he is in.

mohindar brought medicines. Mohindar and brij fed him with difficulties as he was still unconscious.

It was past midnight now. " geet beta ..jaa tu soja. Mai hu yaha." Rano said geet to leave and take rest. Geet went . At door again she looked back once at him and left.

In morning

She got up early as she couldn't sleep whole night, thinking about him.

At early morning she remembered he had not had anything. last night also she couldn't able to give him milk. She took quick shower and went him with a glass of haldimilk.

She peeped; there was no one except him. Rano already left room in morning as she was hell tired. Geet came inside slowly with glass in her hand. At that time stranger was little awake. He smelled something beautiful. He opened his eyes but not fully. It was still half closed, dazed. He saw something white. Pure white. It was some figure he guessed with long hair. In hand there was something which he couldn't figure out. He felt calm. Again he closed his eyes thinking he is in heaven with a angel. He smiled little but it was not visible outside. He felt peace. In closed eyes he felt that angel is coming nearer. He could smell her. Angel sat on bed beside him. He was waiting for next. Suddenly he felt something warm on his forehead. It is her soft hand he guessed and he felt warmth of it. His smile got bigger. Now geet could see it. "is he smiling? Yes, of course he is. But why? Can he see me?? But how? his eyes are still closed."

She was thinking these when suddenly she shivered. Her body trembled with sudden contact as he was holding her hand. It was pleasurable, First time she was feeling this unknown touch. In her haze she closed her eyes. She couldn't see that stranger was looking her now as he awoke completely. Few moments before, He opened his eyes feeling warmth and saw the most beautiful scenario in front of him. His angel, staring him with dazed hazels. Her eyes were beautiful. It was big enough to loose anyone in it. He lost in her eyes and wanted to hold that moment for ever. For saving this beautiful moment He held her hand and he saw those eyes got shut. No. That is not he wanted. But now he could see her whole face. It was fair. Round .A pair of big beautiful closed eyes. A cute little nose. Beautiful pink lips, it must be sweet, he guessed. Small but sharp chin. Chubby cheeks in pink shades. She had long hair , brown and silky , he could guess it without touching. She was beautiful indeed most beautiful girl he had ever seen in his life.

He was lost in her.when sudden sound from outside broke both dream world. They came back in sense. Geet saw he was staring her. She stood hurried. Got nervous. She couldn't speak a word and run away out. Stranger looked her fading figure till he could see.

Precap : My name is ...

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