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Posted: 13 years ago
nice u r doing really good
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: raingurti

.wowww lovely...I hope he will say my name is maan singh khurana...😉...btw abhi se touchy touchy feeling...😉




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Edited by geet.lover - 13 years ago
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Part 6

He was lost in her. when sudden sound from outside broke both dream world. They came back in sense. Geet saw he was staring her. She stood hurried. Got nervous. She couldn't speak a word and run away out. Stranger looked her fading figure till he could see.

After some time he came back in his sense. Where was he, he thought. He could see he was not in his house, in his room. he tried to remember past but couldn't. His head and arms were paining. He touched his head. it had bandages all over. He looked around. It was all unfamiliar. He tried to stand but couldn't, as he was weak, very weak, couldn't understand anything. Now he got tense. Where was he? What happened to him? Why was he in bandages? Who was that girl? He saw on table. There was milk glass. Why she took care of me ? Everything making him more confuse and tired.

" aree aap uth gaye damadji" mohindar said. He came here to check him." Ab kasi tabiya hai aapki"

Stranger looked him with confused face' mohindar understood his condition. " wo aapka kal accident ho gaya tha na mandir ke pass. Toh ham aapko yaha le aaye."

Now it made sense to him. He remembered his car was out of control. Suddenly a tree came and all went blank. "mai ...yeh.." he tried to speak but couldn't.

" aree aap fikar na karo ji. Doctor ne kaha hai aap jaldi thik ho jaayenge. Aap bas aaraam karo. Mai abhi aata hu" mohindar left saying this to inform everyone.

Stranger tried to remember what happened exactly. He was going to Patiyala office, for saving time he took shortcut. He was driving his jeep in full speed as he was getting late and talking on phone.

" maine tumse kitna baar kaha hai iin choti choti baato ke liye mujhe phone mat kiya karo"

" mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai. Mujhe ye deal chaiye kisi bhi halat me"

"tumhe ye baat pahle sochni chahiye thi"

"To Hell With Them. Do Whatever You Want. I Want This deal And That Is Final "

Suddenly he lost his control over jeep. He tried to balance but couldn't and clash to a big tree by side on the road. scrachhh.. A big sound happened and everything went blank. After that he found himself here. In this room.

Now he remembered everything. By thinking all past, Morning incident came in his tired mind. He found mental peace remembering them. a sweet smile curved him with thought, of that girl. She was beautiful. Cute innocent face . Her eyes .. her eyes were most beautiful gift, anyone can have from God " he thought. WHAT !!! what the hell !!! ye mai kya kar raha hu .am I thinking a girl . A GIRL !!! No'

his thought broke when rano came with mohinder and daarji .

" aab kesa lag raha hai aapko. taqleef jyada hai jya" rano asked.

nahi wo..pahle se thik hu ab" he replied.

" ji ek baar apne ghar walo se baat kar lijiye damadji. wo pareshan honge." mohindar said

hmm" stranger said. WHAT what he said !! damadji,, ye damadji kon hai" he thought with confusion. As he tried to ask when a short heighted man entered in room . he was doctor as mohindar told him last night to come here as soon he return back. He checked him. Changed his bandages. Gave medicines and left giving some instructions.


---------------------------FLASHBACK (2 days back)--------------------------


Somewhere, far from Hoshiyarpur

(It was same day when stranger met an accident)

It was a two floored building at some far, dense area. Building was well furnished. Seemed someone lived there.

A man in his 30s, with good height, fair skin, looked handsome, making out with a girl, in a room. when he got a call.

" where are you beta" a lady voice on other side. you should be at handas till now "

" ohh mom i m very busy right now. i am in meeting " said kissing to his girl.

" kya meeting, agar tum.ase hi karte rahe to humara sara kiya karaya mitti me mil jaayega " she shouted on phone

" ohh mom you dont worry. kuch nahi hoga. mai waha time se pachuch jaaunga" he tried to made her understand.

" thik hai lekin job hi karma jaldi karna "

" ok mom. Now i got to go. bye" he cut call.

" you really going tonight?? girl.asked

" who said"

" you, abhi to kaha phone pe"

" but who told you I don't speak lie. " saying this he laughed .. A evil laugh and resumed his work.

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In hoshiyarpur (Present)

It was evening. Stranger was much better now. He was sitting on bed with help of pillows on back.

" Damadji , wo aapse kuch baat karni thi" mohindar said.

" ye aapsab mujhe baar baar damadji q bula rahe hai. " he asked with little irritation.

rano sensed his anger. She called mohindar out of room. " jara suniye"

mujhe lagta hai unhe humara daamdji kahna achha nahi lag raha. shahar ka ladka hai. sayad isiliye"

"haa rano sayad tum thik kah rhi ho". After discussing they went back to his room.

"wo kya hai ..hum aapka naam nahi jaante na isiliye kaha. aapka naam kya hai beta." rano asked

My name is ...


Precap : Commissioner " Hum jaldi hi pata laga lenge "


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Hope I m doing good


Thank youuu very much for all your love & support 😃


Edited by geet.lover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..
again u made us wait..
my name is...
plzzz yaar who is he
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Posted: 13 years ago

wow bt wat's dis...again u left us on cliff

wat his name is??
Plz aisa waisa naam n ho wrna babaji bacha lena...

Nyc update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

nice update..

again u made us wait..
my name is...
plzzz yaar who is he



hehhehe bas kal ka wait shoba 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update n interesting too...😉...lovuuu pitungi tuje aj bhi nam bolne nehi di...aur ye commissioner kaha se aaya.😕
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wow bt wat's dis...again u left us on cliff

wat his name is??
Plz aisa waisa naam n ho wrna babaji bacha lena...

Nyc update



keep faith on geet's babaji 😛😛


Edited by geet.lover - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: raingurti

lovely update n interesting too...😉...lovuuu pitungi tuje aj bhi nam bolne nehi di...aur ye commissioner kaha se aaya.😕



oyeee livuu aaj bhar maaf karde ..kal pakkaaa bata dungiii

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