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Posted: 13 years ago

#571

hey dear,, why don't u write in English only...that will save ur time and u can give long update...actually I have noticed that updates get short after u started writing it with English version...all readers here understand English because to operate computer a person has to know English but most of them can't understand Hindi...so it is better that u update ur FF in English only...

so that fraud is Maanav...Maan's elder brother but because of some reason he with his parents are kicked out of KM by Daadi...he wants to take revenge on Maan...

Maan ask for a kiss...what will be Geet's answer...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm..

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MonaSWrites

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Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#572

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

hey dear,, why don't u write in English only...that will save ur time and u can give long update...actually I have noticed that updates get short after u started writing it with English version...all readers here understand English because to operate computer a person has to know English but most of them can't understand Hindi...so it is better that u update ur FF in English only...

so that fraud is Maanav...Maan's elder brother but because of some reason he with his parents are kicked out of KM by Daadi...he wants to take revenge on Maan...

Maan ask for a kiss...what will be Geet's answer...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm..

heyyy Kiran..thanks for suggestion dear.. and yes i know most ppl understand english here.. but there is few reasons behind i dont write it in english . actually .. i m more comfortable with hindi for maaneet dialogues..as i can give my feel in it and i really enjoy writing hindi dialogues for them. and one more reason is my english is not very good so i am not able to give soul in it.
i really really sorry for couldnt make long updates because i give daily updates.. and i dont have much time writing longer part after doing my office and households...but now i ll really try to fulfill yr demand.
m felt very happy and delighted that u wish for more n more... thank you dear 😃

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#573

awesome maanav is plaaning bad for geet

jab MSK he to geet ko kuch nai hone dega

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#574

just superb yr...
cute maaneet moments
plzzz dnt let that manav succeed in his plan

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#575

So he is part of the family he is his older brother man this is bad really really bad oh man just when you think all is going well for our love birds this has to happen
Well maan I hope to god you are ready man to protect the love of your life from that creepy brother of yours
Thanx for disclosing the mystery behind the person who is to marry our Geet
There is no way in hell maan will let Geet go away from him right hope so
Wasn't it sweet when we had maan asking after as to why Geet was running away from the place awww he so cares for her
He gave her a heart attack by asking her if he could kiss her wonder what she will say though
Congrats on completing one month of this ff
Cheers for pm