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Part 20

They dint know that someone eyes was following them passing from there. " maan ??? " he whispered. Oo..toh ye maan hai jo yaha meri jagah leke rah raha hai. Lekin maan yaha aaya kaise?? Kahi use sach ka pata to nahi chal gaya. Lekin ye kaise ho sakta hai... wo toh delhi me hai. Aur humari toh baat bhi nahi hui kaafi dino se ... per agar ye baat nahi toh fir wo yaha kaise aaya. Mujhe sach ka pata jald hi laganha hoga warna kahi sara khel na bigar jaaye" he self talked and left from there.

he reached his guest house. Immediately he called his mother

mrs.khurana- Maanav beta kaha hai tu. bina bataye kaha chala gya tha.pata hai mai kitni pareshan thi.

Maanav Singh Khurana

maanav - mom.. aapko pareshan hone ki ab koi jarurat nahi kyuki humare, paresaan hone ke din ab gaye " and he laughed.

mrs.k - matlab...mai kuch samjjhi nhi beta

maanav - mom.. aap apne dimaag pe jor daalna chod dijiye.. kyuki mere dimaag ne kaam karna shuru kar diya hai. aap bas dekhte jaaiye ki mai ab kya karta hu.

mrs.k - maanav beta..tu kya karna chahta hai. mujhe to kuch samjh nahi aa raha. aur waha hp me kon hai beta..kuch pata chala

maanav - mom .. bekaar me aap tension le rahi hai. maine sab pata laga liya hai aur sach puchiye toh humara kaam ab aur aasan ho gaya. Ab aap bas dekhte jaaiye ki mai ab kya karta hu" he smriked and cut the call.

" Toh Mr maan singh khurana ..mere chote bhai sahab ...ab tumhe pata chalega ki mai maanav singh khurana kya chiz hai. bahut ghamand hai na savitridevi ...meri pyarisi dadi maa ko, apne khandaan ke usulo pe..jiske kaaran unhone hume ..apne bete aur pote ko ghar aur jayedad se bedakhal kar diya, ek zamin ka chota sa tukra dekar..jaise koi kutte ke saamne roti fekta ho. ab mai umhe bataunga, ki kaisa lagta hai jab kisi ko apne hi ghar se dhakke maar ke nikaal diya jaaye. kaisa lagta hai jab apna karoro ki jaayedaad hote hue bhi bhikhariyon ki tarah rahna pade. kaisa lagta hai jab apni hi sabse pyari chiz apne hi haatho se chin jaaye.

"Mai tumhe dikhaunga Maan..mai tumhe dikhaunga, kya halat hoti hai jab tumhara apna pyar tumse nazar fer le, mai dekgunga maan jab tumhaari sabse pyari chiz tumhaari geet meri baaho me hogi aur jab mai usse tumhaari aankho ke saamne apni hawas ka shikaar banaunga tab tumhari saari akar kaha jaati hai, kyuki tum chah kar bhi kuch nahi kar paaoge maan.. kuch nahi." he gulped liquid in one go and smiled evilly

"Mai tumhaare naam se, tumgaari geet ko dhokha dunga aur tum kuch nahi kar paaoge. Pyar karoge tum aur shaadi karunga mai. shaadi ke sapne uss geet ko tum dikhaoge aur suhaagraat...and he laughed..laughed as loud he ever would have done in his whole life . he took second glasss from table and drunk in one go... shaadi ke baad meri pyaari si biwi ke saari jaayedaad ka maalik hoga mai aur tum kuch nahi kar paaoge' Kuch nahi kar paaoge tum maan, jab wo tumhaari jaan, tumhari geet, tumhaare aankho ke saamne royegi, tarpegi ek khushi ke liye' tum kuch nahi kar paaoge. tum kuch nahi kar paaoge maan singh khurana kyuki ye maanav tumhe kuch karne layak nahi chodega. tumhe tarapta dekh mujhe chain aayega aur tab..pura hoga mera badla . who badla jiske liye mai aaj tak tarapta raha hu.. who badla jiski aag me tum jaloge maan singh khurana, aur who aag lagaunga mai, tumhara bhai Maanav singh khurana ... " he laughed loud and emptied whole bottle in one go. He called someone " uss maan ke har ek khabar mujhe chahiye. paise tumhe mil jaayenge" and he smirked.

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geet was sleeping but She was not in peace. Her whole body was aching. She was restless, frowning, moving her head in uneasiness like she was in deep nightmare. Suddenly someone hand touched her forehead and her wrinkles vanished. That hand caressed her hair and she felt calm. That hand touched her cheek lovingly and her body aches gone. Her uneasiness gone her, restless soul felt peace. She slowly opened her eyes. Moonlight was coming from side window with cold fresh air as it was to rain, making surrounding serene. She looked that person " aap " she asked more to herself. " haan..mai " owner of that magical touch replied .

"aap yaha.. sach me hai " she asked again living in complete daze. "hmm" and smiled. Geet smiled back with glowing twinkling hazels. Both were looking each other lost completely. He was caressing her cheek lovingly and she was feeling pleasure. After few minutes'

"Kyaaa'aap'aap sach me hai yaha" she got up finding her lost sense and sat on immediately.

Maan- geet tumhe ek baat kitne baar me samjh aati hai. Baar baar ek hi baat kyu puch rahi ho.

Geet was nervous, shocked, embarrassed everything. She was struggling finding next set of words. "aa..aapp yaha kyu.. wo..wohhh maii " she was getting more nervous, started looking here n there

"geet..geet relax. Shant ho jaao " maan held her shoulder making her calm. He took her dupatta from beside and kept on her right place. Then she realized she was not wearing her dupatta in front of him. She looked down in shy. He raised her chin putting his finger under it " geet meri taraf dekho " she dint. He smiles looking her shaded color of face.. Few moment later she asked gathering her a little bit control " aap yaha kyu aaye.. inti raat me "

Maan- mujhe tumse kuch puchna tha geet . ' she looked him. " geet aaj kya hua tha. Tum ase kyu bhag rahi thi "

Geet- who..woh mai..maine aapko bataya tha na maan ..mai dar gayi thi' she replied and went to window hiding her inner turmoil from him

Maan- geet, ek baat batau, tumhe jhut bolna bilkul nahi aata.

Geet- aap kyu zidd kar rahe hai maan. Maine kaha na kuch nahi hua tha

Maan- thik hai geet. Mai janta hu ki mera koi haq nahi ki mai tumse kuch bhi puch saku. Mujhe tumhari chinta ho rahi thi , isiliye yaha chala aya. m sorr'" before he could complete she kept her hand on his lips and nodded no.

Geet ' nahi maan , plese asa mat kahiye. She said " maan ye haq sirf aapka hai. Aur kisi ka nahi " she thought

Maan ' toh fir bolo geet. Kya baat thi jo tum us tarah se bhag rahi thi. "He held her both arm and asked

Geet could not say anything. What did she say? She had no wit to describe what she saw, going against her own brother. So she went to balcony try to hide herself from his questioning eyes. maan looked her lost figure. He followed her. She reached there. It was drizzling now. He looked her worrying face and cursed himself for making her sad. He touched her arm from back and turned her to him. Her eyes were closed. Is she crying? Because of me? Maan thought. He could see her tears in rain also. He wiped it. His touch in cold rain did something to her. She trembled and looked down. And smiled a little. Maan felt relieved. Her eyes were still closed. " geet " he called her . "hmm " she replied.

Maan- geet agar tum abhi nahi batana chahti to mai tumhe force nahi karunga. Mai intzaar karunga geet us din ka, jab tum apna har dukh saari taqkif mujhe bata sako. I ll wait geet. " she opened her eyes and looked his black almond. It was full of trust, purity and something she could not word out but understood clearly. She smiled.

Maan- geet agar aaj mai tumse kuch maangu toh kyat um mujhe dogi. She nodded looking him with pure love

Maan- geet mai tumhe kiss karna chahta hu . she looked him shocked.


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They dint know that someone eyes was following them passing from there. " maan ??? " he whispered. Oo..ohh so he is maan staying here in place of me. But how is he here?? Did he know about my plan?. But how its possible...he is in delhi and we dint talk since so many days ...but if its not tha matter so how he landed here. I ll have to find out truth fast otherwise it wont be good for us" he self talked and left from there.

he reached his guest house. Immediately he called his mother

mrs.khurana- Maanav beta..where were you. How much I was worried for you son

maanav - Mom..i told u na you don't need to worry now as it gone

" and he laughed.

mrs.k 'What.. i coulnt understand beta

maanav - Mom don't think so much. As now my mind has started working better. You only see mom what I do now

mrs.k - maanav..son what are you saying. What uyou want to do now. m not getting anything beta.

maanav - Chill mom.. why are you taking tension. I found out everything.. and I am happy that now our plan would be mure successful. You only sit and watch what I do

" he smriked and cut the call.

Hmm.. Mr.Maan Singh Khurana..my sweet yonger brother..now you will know who is Maanav Singh Khurana. My sweet dadimaa.. you had have so much proud on your principles.. for this she kicked her son and his family out of their own house and property, giving a piece of land only. Now I will show you how it feel when you kicked out of ur own house.how it feel when to live like a beggers having big property.. how it feels when you lose your loved things.

"I will show you maan..i will show u, how it feels when your own love will turn face from you. I will show you maan when your beautiful geet will be mine in front of your bare eyes. i will see how u feel when I will force her and you would not able to do anything but only see like helpless creature. you would not do anything maan not anything." he gulped liquid in one go and smiled evilly

"I will cheat her by your name and you wont do anything.. u wont able to maan. You will love her but marriage. marriage would be with me. You will show her dream of beauty marriage but finally I ll break them. She ll be mine , only mine...and he laughed. laughed as loud he ever would have done in his whole life . he took second glass from table and drunk in one go...

After marriage I ll be owner of her property and you would be helpless maan ..helpless. when your life , your geet will cry in front of you , u will regret maan but wont able to do anything. You wouldn't do anything Mr. maan singh Khurana coz I wont leave you able to do anything. Then I ll be happy. Happy to see you in pain.. see you in regret. I ll burn u alive maan in disguise of my revenge. U ll burn maan..u will'" he laughed loud and emptied whole bottle in one go. He called someone " I need every info of that man.. u ll get ur money" and he smirked.

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geet was sleeping but She was not in peace. Her whole body was aching. She was restless, frowning, moving her head in uneasiness like she was in deep nightmare. Suddenly someone hand touched her forehead and her wrinkles vanished. That hand caressed her hair and she felt calm. That hand touched her cheek lovingly and her body aches gone. Her uneasiness gone her, restless soul felt peace. She slowly opened her eyes. Moonlight was coming from side window with cold fresh air as it was to rain, making surrounding serene. She looked that person " you " she asked more to herself. " yes..me " owner of that magical touch replied .

"you..are u really here " she asked again living in complete daze. "hmm" and smiled. Geet smiled back with glowing twinkling hazels. Both were looking each other lost completely. He was caressing her cheek lovingly and she was feeling pleasure. After few minutes'

"watt'are you really here" she got up finding her lost sense and sat on immediately.

Maan- geet..how much time you take to understand something. Why r u asking same thing again n again

Geet was nervous, shocked, embarrassed everything. She was struggling finding next set of words. "you'you why 'I m ..mean " she was getting more nervous looking here n there

"geet..geet relax. Be relax " maan held her shoulder making her calm. He took her dupatta from beside and kept on her right place. Then she realized she was not wearing her dupatta in front of him. She looked down in shy. He raised her chin putting his finger under it " geet look at me " she dint. He smiles looking her shaded color of face.. Few moment later she asked gathering her a little bit control " why u came here that to this late night "

Maan- I wanted to ask something geet . ' she looked him. " geet what happed today..why u were running like this"

Geet- who..woh I told you na maan..i was scared" she replied and went to window hiding her inner turmoil from him

Maan- geet, let me tell u one thing..u cant lie geet.. please don't even try.

Geet-why are you being stubborn maan. I told na nothing would have happened

Maan- its ok geet.. I know I hv no right to ask you anything. I was just worring about u so came here without thinking..m sorr" before he could complete she kept her hand on his lips and nodded no.

Geet ' no maan.pls don't say like this She said " maan..its only ur right to ask..no one else " she thought

Maan ' then tell me geet..tell me why r u running like that. "He held her both arm and asked

Geet could not say anything. What did she say? She had no wit to describe what she saw, going against her own brother. So she went to balcony try to hide herself from his questioning eyes. maan looked her lost figure. He followed her. She reached there. It was drizzling now. He looked her worrying face and cursed himself for making her sad. He touched her arm from back and turned her to him. Her eyes were closed. Is she crying? Because of me? Maan thought. He could see her tears in rain also. He wiped it. His touch in cold rain did something to her. She trembled and looked down. And smiled a little. Maan felt relieved. Her eyes were still closed. " geet " he called her . "hmm " she replied.

Maan- geet I ll not force u for anything. I ll wait for th day geet when u ll tell me ur all problems and worries " she opened her eyes and looked his black almond. It was full of trust, purity and something she could not word out but understood clearly. She smiled.

Maan- geet.. if today I ask u something..ll u give me. She nodded looking him with pure love

Maan- geet I want to kiss you . she looked him shocked.

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Hope I m doing good

lots of love for making my journey this beautiful. love you all from my open heart

friends..today i hv completed one month not as date but i started this ff on SAWAN 1st day it was lord Shankar day & today is last day of this holy month and i wanted to celebrate this day through my ff . Hope you ll love today's part

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Edited by geet.lover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
so that evil is maan's big bro...omg😲...n omg again shock😲..maan wants to kiss her angel geet...lovely update👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update.. maan wat u want to kiss her.. now lest see wat geet syas
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz dent let anything/ anyone come in b/w maan n geet...plz plz...

awesome update...

loved it to d core...

thank u sooo much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
me want another update erghhh hate maan' s bro yucky
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Edited by geet.lover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update dear but dont bring that maanav between maan n geet
plz plz yaar aisa mat karna

continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Monika 🤗...Congratulations for completing 100 pages and i month of this FF...u are doing an awesome job 👍🏼...really appreciate your effort in giving us regular updates...coming to part 20...so that man was Manav...and he is Maan's elder brother...omg he is so evil 😡...plz dont let him come near our innocent Geet 😭...Maaneet scene was so sweet...loved the way he consoles her and gives his support...i am hoping he will be with her forever like this 😍...and what a request...he wants a kiss 😳...no wonder she is all shocked 😆...plz continue...TC 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update dear
plz a request dont let geet be done naything by that bas***d maanav
i mean nothing what he is thing of fulfilling hsi lust dont lett this happen plz its a request
i hate this rape thing so i hope u will not do it
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Originally posted by: abinash079

lovely update dear

plz a request dont let geet be done naything by that bas***d maanav
i mean nothing what he is thing of fulfilling hsi lust dont lett this happen plz its a request
i hate this rape thing so i hope u will not do it



Dont worry Abinash.. i will keep it in mind.
thank you soo much taking so much interest in my story

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