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Posted: 13 years ago





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Maan- geet mai tumhe kiss karna chahta hu . She looked him shocked.

geet mai janta hu tum kya soch rahi ho. Yu achanak tumse iss tarah.. per geet aaj mai tumse kuch kahana chahata hu. Geet mai nahi janta ye sahi hai ya galat, mai ye bhi janta ki tumhara jawab kya hoga. Lekin geet mai iss pal ko iss raat iss chand ko aaj apne zindgi ke sabse khubsurat pal ka gawah banana chahta hu. Mujhe nahi pata ki aaj ke baad mai tumhe dekh paaunga ya nahi, tumse mil paaunga ya nahi, fir bhi mai aaj tumse wo har baat kahna chahta hu jo mai aaj tak nahi kah paya." She looked him eager to listen his next words..

"I love You Geet"

'Rain stopped, everything stopped, hearing his confession. Moon came clearing clouds, poured his all shine. It was white, it was glowing, it was beautiful beyond heaven. He loved her, yes he loved her and he said. He said filling trust and faith in his heart n soul for geet, for His geet. For

MAAN KI GEET'

Geet was speechless. She didn't move. She was lost like statue but with full of life. It was her moment her beautiful moment her dream moment. She could not want anything more. She was blessed totally blessed of almighty's all good wishes. She dint say anything. Only looked him, in his black deep eyes with her deep hazels. Their eyes were speaking for them. They were lacking of words. Maan was eagerly looking her, to get any trance of anger or love or any emotion but she was blank. She was not thinking anything only looking him. Slowly her eyes became her mirror. It started filling with beaming pearls. It was coming out with full of colors in it and every color was only calling his name. only maan.. her maan. Only her maan.

"geet ..kuch bologi nahi" maan curiosity was on high now. He was not able to take more. "geet please ..kuch toh bolo." His eyes were looking her eyes to find his reflection but it was clouded. He couldn't see anything. He felt sad. " geet.. mai janta hu maine bahut jaldi ki shayad. Per geet mera aaj , tumse ye kahana bahut jaruri tha. Mera ye jaanna jaruri tha geet ki meri aane wali zindgi me tum hogi ya nahi. mai apne zindgi me fir kabhi jee paaunga ya nahi geet aur mujhe mera jawab mil gaya." she looked him confused." geet mai do din baad yaha se jaa raha hu."

Geet shocked. Looked him instantly with wet eyes. She was eager to say something but don't know why she was not able to. May be she had never ever in her life opened her heart in front of anyone. She was always been alone. Always be quite. Never got any chance to say her wishes to anyone. She wanted to sooth him, speak him that yes..Yes I also love you more than anything but could not. She could not word out her feeling to him. And now he is going..No' noo babaji please mujhe hosla dijiye ki mai unse wo saari baat kah saku jo wo sunna cahhte hai. Please babaji meri madad kijiye..please.." she closed her eyes let tears shed.

Maan misunderstood her. He thought geet was crying because of him. He got restless. He held her arm tight in disguise "geet mera irada tumhe dukh pahuchane ka bilkul nahi tha. Mera jo dil me aaya maine kah diya. Ek baar bhi tumhare bare me nahi socha. Mujhe maaf kardo geet. Please mat ro. Geet mai tumhare aansoo bardasht nahi kar sakta..please geet' he was being very restless seeing her plight. Here She was feeling more disguise on herself making him feel this way. But she was helpless.

Maan couldn't take more. He left her arm and turned. Geet felt something missing in her body. Oo yes.. her soul was missing. She opened her eyes to see him going. She could not take more. She called out "maan 'maan I love you.. but it was very low like whisper. Even though he heard.

"geet'" he whisper n stopped at his place. He could not believe. No..it was his illusion he thought. Again he started walking.

"maan I love you.. please mat jaaiye" this time she was loud enough to hear him. She was crying but with happy tears looking him stopped and turned. " mai aapse bahut pyar karti hu maan " now she had soul she had her life back..She was able to say herself to her maan. Maan smiled. She looked down in shy smiling, trembling knowing what she said. And now what would maan do. What is coming next. It was maan first wish. How could she deny.

Maan moved closer to her without blinking his eyes otherwise his dream would be vanished. she was fiddling her duppatta in anticipation. He came very close, mere inch far from her. He kept his hand under her chin and raised her face " geet meri taraf dekho " he demanded. Yes now he could demand. He had right. She did. She was looking in his eyes with love. "geet firse ek baar bolo " she nodded no in shy and again looked down. He was so happy. He raised his arm around her and took her in his arm, in his embrace. She was his, he was not able to believe. He was in heaven and yes, heaven was also with them pouring their best wishes on them. They were blessed. They were happy. They were Complete. They were MAANEET.

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ENGLISH VERSION

Maan- geet I want to kiss you" . She looked him shocked.

Geet , I know what u r thinking. Its so sudden ..i asked u , but geet today I wanted to say u something. Geet I don't know its right or wrong., I also don't know what would be ur answer, but geet, I wanted to make this night, this moon , this time, witness of my most beautiful moment. I don't know after this moment would I be able to see u, I ll be able to meet u again or not but I wanted to tell you everything of my heart..which I never could do" She looked him eager to listen his next words..

"I love You Geet"

'Rain stopped, everything stopped, hearing his confession. Moon came clearing clouds, poured his all shine. It was white, it was glowing, it was beautiful beyond heaven. He loved her, yes he loved her and he said. He said filling trust and faith in his heart n soul for geet, for His geet. For

MAAN KI GEET'

Geet was speechless. She didn't move. She was lost like statue but with full of life. It was her moment her beautiful moment her dream moment. She could not want anything more. She was blessed totally blessed of almighty's all good wishes. She dint say anything. Only looked him, in his black deep eyes with her deep hazels. Their eyes were speaking for them. They were lacking of words. Maan was eagerly looking her, to get any trance of anger or love or any emotion but she was blank. She was not thinking anything only looking him. Slowly her eyes became her mirror. It started filling with beaming pearls. It was coming out with full of colors in it and every color was only calling his name. only maan.. her maan. Only her maan.

"geet ..wont u say something" maan curiosity was on high now. He was not able to take more. "geet please for god sake speak." His eyes were looking her eyes to find his reflection but it was clouded. He couldn't see anything. He felt sad. " geet ,, I know I did hurry. But geet ..it was very important to tell this right today. Geet. It was important for to know would u be in my life or not.. it was important for me to know would I be able to live happy ever or not..and I found my answer geet." she looked him confused." Geet..in two days m going back."

Geet shocked. Looked him instantly with wet eyes. She was eager to say something but don't know why she was not able to. May be she had never ever in her life opened her heart in front of anyone. She was always been alone. Always be quite. Never got any chance to say her wishes to anyone. She wanted to sooth him, speak him that yes..Yes I also love you more than anything but could not. She could not word out her feeling to him. And now he is going..No' please give me strength to tell him everything what he wants.. please babaji help me ..please.." she closed her eyes let tears shed.

Maan misunderstood her. He thought geet was crying because of him. He got restless. He held her arm tight in disguise "geet..i truly dint want to make u hurt. I said whatever was in my heart , never thought about u.. m sorry geet. Plss don't cry ..i cant bear ur tears..please." he was being very restless seeing her plight. Here She was feeling more disguise on herself making him feel this way. But she was helpless.

Maan couldn't take more. He left her arm and turned. Geet felt something missing in her body. Oo yes.. her soul was missing. She opened her eyes to see him going. She could not take more. She called out "maan 'maan I love you.. but it was very low like whisper. Even though he heard.

"geet'" he whisper n stopped at his place. He could not believe. No..it was his illusion he thought. Again he started walking.

"Maan I Love You.. please don't go" this time she was loud enough to hear him. She was crying but with happy tears looking him stopped and turned. " I Love You Lot Maan " now she had soul she had her life back..She was able to say herself to her maan. Maan smiled. She looked down in shy smiling, trembling knowing what she said. And now what would maan do. What is coming next. It was maan first wish. How could she deny.

Maan moved closer to her without blinking his eyes otherwise his dream would be vanished. she was fiddling her duppatta in anticipation. He came very close, mere inch far from her. He kept his hand under her chin and raised her face " look at me " he demanded. Yes now he could demand. He had right. She did. She was looking in his eyes with love. "geet.. say once again " she nodded no in shy and again looked down. He was so happy. He raised his arm around her and took her in his arm, in his embrace. She was his, he was not able to believe. He was in heaven and yes, heaven was also with them pouring their best wishes on them. They were blessed. They were happy. They were Complete. They were MAANEET.

Precap - Dont know 😛
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Hope I m doing good

heyy friends.. thank you so much for all comments and likes.. I have only one request ..please please please all who read my ff please give likes and comment both.. my comments are reducing.. dont know what the reason .. seems i am not able to fulfill your wishes.. but i truly want to. so please give me suggestions too if you like.

thank-you-desi-glitters-7

Edited by geet.lover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww am speechless..the first confession of maaneet😍...sooo dreamy , so smooth , so romantic❤️...grttt update lovu...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: geet.lover



Thank u ANA... l m glad to get u again.. u were lost u know
but now m happy thanku soo much for liking my story


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u r welcome dear
i m always there for my friends
it was just tht i was away from if for sometimes but now m back
loved the new update also
and mostly maan s confessions was described and written brilliantly by u dear
keep up the good work
love u

continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update dear
u wrote the confession part so brilliantly
love u for that
plz do continue this way and dont let maaneet seperate from each other
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
wow both confessed 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg...ye maan ne kya maang liya😳😉
waise part 21 is awesome
loved the update
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear
finally the confession
continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Read all the parts ,loved it .
Maaneet moments were aweome
Ab ye maanav kya karega ,feeling kuch bura honewala hai bcoz title bhi wahi hint deta hai
Hoping every thing will be fine between maaneet.
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Posted: 13 years ago


wow what a beautiful confession...simple...sweet...

very beautiful update...

thanx for answering my last post...yes I agree that after daily job and household chores it is really very difficult to write long updates and u are updating daily also...that is why I suggested u so...as a North Indian I am comfortable in both languages...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww sooo baeutifulll its reallly a magical...finally they confessed:D

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