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I am overwhelmed by the response I got in the last thread
it was on pg 143 when I came in
and no update
hailla...
So I have decided to edit and add part 9😉

well on your request here is thread 4



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get to work girls till I am back


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Ch:1 (general introduction) 2nd April 2012
Ch:7 (Confused Geet) 23rd April 2012
Ch:9 (Journey to past) 28th May 2012
Ch: 10(i) page 2/ 5th JUNE 2012
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CONGRATS ON NEW THREAD...
UPDATE SOOO OOO OO OOON
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Posted: 13 years ago
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the last part will be in short 4,5 or 6 parts

so fasten your seat belts

here I go with the first sub part of the last part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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abhi bhi short short parts 4-5... 😡 shruti kitna tang karogee hame...

ek baar mai de kar chutti karo na ...
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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ye lo gi hum aagaye app ke pecchey peechey
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Originally posted by: reachsky2011

CONGRATS ON NEW THREAD...

UPDATE SOOO OOO OO OOON


dekey ab shruti hamra kya haal kartee hai
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Originally posted by: smj1977.shruti

the last part will be in short 4,5 or 6 parts


so fasten your seat belts

here I go with the first sub part of the last part

UPDATE DEDO NA YAAR...
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Ch:10 (i)

He turned her to face him, "you know why you did that" she said, "I cannot understand why" he cupped her face, "because you saw me in her" she rubbed her temples, "but why" he guided her hands and slowly removed his turban and then beard, her eyes widened in shock, he said, "because she is my sister and I Maan Singh Khurana am Munna"

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She looked at him in awe, she slowly touched his cheek and then hair, she blinked several times unable to understand what all this was, and her brain suddenly stopped working. She did not know what she should do, she again touched his cheek.

He grabbed her hand and pressed the back of her palm on his lips, she shuddered, he linked his one hand in her hand and moved his other hand to her hair, and closed the distance between them.

He lifted her other hand and placed it on his chest and said, "Listen to my heart beats Geet, they sing your song all day long, my heart beat sonly for you Geet only for you"

She placed her ear near his heart and closed her eyes, "sorry Maan" he interrupted, "for you Geet I am only Munna your love, call me Munna, I have been dying to hear my name from your lips" she looked at him not convinced, he said, "you know Geet when I got your letter, I just laughed at it, I was so sure you will recognize me the moment you will see me, that I failed to understand your apprehension, but when you did not I thought when I will touch you to slip the ring in your finger you will know who I am, but you were so cold that you did not even feel my touch"

She interrupted, "sor'" he placed his finger on her lips. "no, Jaan, no need to be sorry, I was wrong, I thought that only I was going through hell, but I never realized that you were going through a more dreadful hell, when on the SR you were blank I knew there was some problem, then I realized that Sur was my son, everyone said, Sur is so much like his mother but not a percent like his father, and then Jiju told me that he was your son, and I knew he was mine. I should say sorry Geet, what if you have prevented me from coming to you, I should have come to see you, Geet I failed, I again failed Geet, as a lover, as a father and now I fail as a husband, I am sorry Geet, please forgive me"

Her heart cried, she hugged him, "no Munna, no Munna you never failed, you never failed me, Munna, you just did what I asked you to do, it is me who failed, I did not tell you the most wonderful thing, I failed as a mother, I did not tell his father about him, Munna, I failed as a lover as I did not recognize you, I failed as a wife as I gave you only anguish only grieve"

He cupped her face, "no Geet, no you never failed, you are the one who showed me the light, you are my strength ' you are the one because of whom I am still alive"

She kept her hand on his lips, "Munna never say this again, who am I to become your strength, I myself am so weak so feeble"

Both cried and cried for long, when this self accusation session did not seem to stop Adi and Pinky came in with a cake and this forced them to stop grieving.

so encourage me with

you know what


LONG LONG LONG LONG COMMENTS

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hit the like tab ONCE

and love you all

Shruti

Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ME FIRST AGAIN🥳
FINAALY THEY GOT EACHOTHER ...
EACH BLAMING THEMSELVES...
LOVED IT...
SHRUTI AB AGEKI KAB MILEGI...😍
Edited by reachsky2011 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maansee

abhi bhi short short parts 4-5... 😡 shruti kitna tang karogee hame...


ek baar mai de kar chutti karo na ...


ok then wait for 4-5 days for me to type
shall I delete the posted part

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