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Madhuri53 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
My dear lovely daughter...today I missed you a lot🤣🤣🤣🤣
Madhuri53 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
142 pages finished
Chalo 2nd thread almost finished without update
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am overwhelmed and I don't want this thread to finish without an update so here is a RUSHED update, hope you enjoy it the RED part is from the movie

Ch:9 (Journey to past)

The lights were turned off and the CD inserted and home theater started, Pinky pushed me more to Maan's side when I questioned her Adi said, "I too want to sit near my wife" I tried to stand up but, my pallu was under Maan and above it Aryan was half lying on my lap and half on Maan, so I was forced to sit back.

Maa, Papa and Manchanda uncle were seating on other sofas and we 4 and a 1/2 people were sitting on a three seated sofa, I was so close to Maan that I started having goose bumps.


The movie started and as Kiran Kher said "Tere dil mein meri saanson ko panah mil jaaye,
Tere ishq mein meri jaan FANAA ho jaaye."

I skipped a heartbeat, at the same time Maan squeezed my hand as if assuring me.

The entry scene of Rehan made me smile "Na Shaher Dekho Na Biya Ba Dekho
Khuda Ka Ek Naam-o-Nishan Dekho
Bas Aankh Uthao Aur Rehan Dekho"

Maan whispered in my ears "Na Shaher Dekho Na Biya Ba Dekho
Khuda Ka Ek Naam-o-Nishan Dekho
Bas Aankh Uthao Aur Maan Dekho"

I just held my breath as I remembered the similar way Munna has whispered in my ears "Na Shaher Dekho Na Biya Ba Dekho
Khuda Ka Ek Naam-o-Nishan Dekho
Bas Aankh Uthao Aur Munna Dekho"

Then I heard his voice again, "breathe Geet"

Then as Rehan proceeded to say, "Tumhari Khubsoorati Ne Khuda Se Khata Kara Di
Kahi Khud Se Nazar Na Lag Jaye Soch Kar Tumhe Nazar Na Di"

Maan whispered, "par Geet tumhe to khuda ne nazar di hain na"

I could not understand what to think, I just fixed my eyes on the screen.

As the movie proceeded it was becoming very difficult for her to sit straight every poassing second was giving her the feeling that Munna was near her, she even started doubting, that has Pinky told Maan about Munna, maybe that's why he is behaving so much like him.

Then Rehan said, "hum se door jaoge kaise?
dil se hume nikalo ge kaise?
hum woh khooshboo hain jo sanso main baste hain
khood ki sanso ko rok paoge kaise?"

And Maan whispered, "tum to saanse bhi rok leti ho Geet, tabhi to dil se nikaal diya apne pyaar ko bhola diya apne yaar ko"

She wanted to run away she wanted to shout, but she was caged between these people, she sighed helplessly.

Then the scene came where Rehan makes Zooni feel him "Kya tum mujhe dekh sakti ho zooni

Nahin

Kaisi hain meri awaaz

Jaise toofan se pehle baadlo ki jaraz

Kaisi hain meri mahak

Jaise pehli barish ke baad mitti ki aha

Kaisa hain mera ehsaas

Jaise fakeer ke vesh main shahzaada"

Maan whispered, "phir poochta hoan tumse, tum to dekh sakti ho, mehsoos kar sakti ho, sun sakti ho, phir Geet kahan khata ho gayi batao"

As Zooni looked at Rehan but he did not pay any attention, she was like what is my mistake she said

Bhool karke humse koi bhool hui ho

To bhool samajh kar bhoola dena

Par bholaana sirf bhool ko

Galti se bhi hume na bholaana

Rehan suddenly stopped, She continued and said

Tere dil mein meri saanson ko panah mil jaaye,
Tere ishq mein meri jaan FANAA ho jaaye

As the words rang in Geet's mind she felt Maan's hand on her waist, she looked at him, it was dark the only light that came was from the TV screen, but she could clearly see his eyes, suddenly the TV was switched off, and Maan cupped her face and said,

Bhool karke humse koi bhool hui ho

To bhool samajh kar bhoola dena

Par bholaana sirf bhool ko

Galti se bhi hume na bholaana

Geet tum mujhe bhool to nahin gayi


so encourage me with

you know what


LONG LONG LONG LONG COMMENTS

the longer the comments the faster I will type

hit the like tab ONCE

and love you all

Shruti

Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
wow u included FANNA movie dialogue
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
haillla Shruti TERI ISHQ MEIN HUM FANAA hogaye..THank u somuch for update 🤗it was like ummm.. 😳
Serenity_me thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW...loved ddialogues fgrom fanna,,,but why tis short update😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update.. faana is on my favorite movie omg. but sad .. very short update.
pls update soon...
muskanp thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Was this a teaser????
😕
🤣
We have been waiting 4 so many days di
This is just not fair

Loved t update awesome👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally an update..but wht an omg update...
Mazza aaaya
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi shruti...

mee sad... u cann't write this as part 9 ... it is not acceptable...


ab window kaha se khul gayi tumhari...

madhuri see what shruti did...

i m feeling sad... saree mehnat par paani phir gaya...

we will consider it teaser again shrutii . samghi tum ...

so edit and write it teaser 2 for this thread...

ab itna to ho hi sakta hai hamre liye...

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