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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratulations On The New FF
Awesome Updates
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys Sorry for not updating YESTERDAY..,..Anyways a few notices before we begin.. 1. No PMs will be sent for this as it is a daily update -like Geet was a daily drama..2. Secondly, if and when i update my other ffs.. then I might send a reminder for this update.. for those who missed a few updates..3. I will write one update.. which was pending from yesterday now and todays update later on.4. I will update possession tommorow and also will update Ek Anchaha Faisla Saturday.Episode 4
Geet watched as Vikram spoke to her telling her how much he cried when he found out she got married. How he used to talk to her picture all the time and everything. Geet smiled at him but she was scared because she knew how dangerous he was. Geet was 11 at the time and used to go to an mixed school. It wasn't until high school till the girl and boys school was segregated. Vikram at that time was 15. They were friends. Geet liked Vikram as a friend and he used to make her laugh and bring her flowers everyday. Geet didn't think much of it as she mostly hanged with her group of friends, Channi and Rajji. But she met Vikram everyday. . But one day when Geet did not come to school, the day her Dadima died, Vikram was angry as he missed her the whole day.
'Kaha ti tum kal' He asked digging his hands into an innocent 10 year olds hands. Tears came out of Geet's eyes. 'Vikram tum yeh, mera haat..' Vikram saw her tears and wiped them harshly.
'Mat rona, tum janti ho I hate your tears' He said. Geet smiled at him and said 'Kal woh dadima ka funeral ta..' Geet cried. Vikram understood. The following week, Geet was laughing in class waiting for class to begin and another boy was making her laugh. Channi and Rajji was there too. Vikram came in and saw Geet laughing and talking to another boy and it made him mad. He went in and punched the boy. The girls got up in shock.
'Vikram yeh tum kya?' Geet exclaimed in shock. Channi and Rajji looked terrified looking at Vikrams face.
'Tumari himmat kaise hue Geet ke tum kisi aur ladkey se baat karo. Tum sirf meri ho' Geet was scared at his antics. Same things started happening and Vikram started to become obesseive. It wasn't until one day when he smacked one ot the teachers for hitting Geet for not doing her homework did word get out to her parents and especially Daarji and Brij. She explained to them what was going on and she was scared of him and them she didn't know how to tell them. Daarji, at that point knew Geet was innocent and scolded her for not telling him earlier knowing his grandaughter was living in fear. He was also worried if word got out that his granddaughter was being harrased, his reputation will be at stake. He ordered Geet to be sent to a segregated girls school. Brij told Geet that she better be careful now and keep away from all boys and especially Vikram. Vikram parents's were seen by Daarji, who told them to leave town. Vikram went balisitic and screamed and shouted he didn't want to leave without Geet. But Brij didn't hear any of it and threatened him that if he comes near Geet he will kill him. Vikram then tried to attack Daarji but Brij got him before and he was sent to an asylum.
But Vikram's mental state did not go better in asylum, instead he went more obsessive for Geet. He wrote Geet's name all over the walls and spoke to her picture that he had. As he turned 17, he realised the only way out is to make everyone believe that he was well and thats what he did. He was out by the time he was 18. He then realised, he had to become a big man to get Geet's rishta and at the moment he was nothing. He worked hard for the next 4 years and by the time he was 22, Geet was 18 and she was married off to Dev. He went back to find out what happened to Geet and was enraged. He started searching for her in Delhi and finally found her on Diwali. He was happy and was about to go to her when he saw Naintara driving towards her.
'pata hai Geet, maine kitna kuch kiya tumhara liye, ek bara business sirf tumhari liye' Vikram smiled at her. Geet tried to smile back. But she was thinking of Maan all that time what will he be doing. Is he fine?
Maan meanwhile was reading Geet's diary. (I fast forwarded some parts to important days).
Office locked in
Satyanash, aaj Maan sir mujhe laga kalenge, Maine kitni galiya dee di aune.. Aur Phir
Aaj raat hum dono raat ko office main kaam kar rahey teh aur office ka darwaza bandh kardiya. Maine. Yeh to meri galti ti. Toh main aur kya karti, Maan sir ko yakeen dilana ta, ke main aunse nahi darti. Jis Insaan ne meri jaan bachaye aur hamesha meri raksha ki, main un par kaise shakh karsakti ho. Main zindagi se babaji se zyada Maan par barosa karti hu
Maan read that line and was shocked, that Geet trusted him more than life. He remembered that night and realised that what a funny incident it had been. But it made Geet open up to him more.
Dhabba night
Maan ne aaj mere saath Dhabba main enjoy kiya. Woh kitni aache hai. Itni bure nahi hai. Phir baarish hue aur main dance karni lagi barish main. Phir maine dekha kadoos gari main teh, baarish se shayad dartey hai. Lekin phir mujhe Dev aur dhoka ki yaad agaye.. aur main gham main Maan ko hug kiya. Kitna bara shock. Mujhe laga sirf Maan mere dil ka dukh door kar saktey hai.
Dargah Day
Aaj mujhe pata chala, kyun babaji mujse Maan ko dur nahi hone dete. Isliye, Mujhe Maan se door jana hoga warna..Mujhe pata chala I Love Maan. Main Maan se bohot pyar karti hu. Aur main aunke zindagi barbad nahi karsakti.
Maan returns day
Maan ko contract par larki chahiye. Lekin shayad meri aisa karne se Maan mujhe door chale jaye aur main yahan se. Main maan ki zindagi barbaad nahi karsakti.
Maan cried reading how much Geet loved him and trusted him. He was in pain. He looked at Geet's picture that he took on the engagement night.
'Geet, waapas ajao'
Meanwhile Geet followed Vikram as they took the cab to the nearest airport the following week. It was time to head off. Geet felt like something was going to happen. She felt that Maan was nearby. She turned her head and saw Maan. Her eyes were shocked. He was standing there with Adi. He was heading on the same flight. She turned to Vikram and saw his face full of anger.
'koshish bi mat karna Geet warna'
PRECAP: unusual feelings.. more diary entries.. 6 months to the future!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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vikram will not let her out of his sight now...

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi dear! Pary 3 was sad n emotional! Poor Maan! Hate Vikram! Geet cannot escape as she knws he is mad! Precap is interesting, well written
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Episode...5Geet turned to Vikram who looked at her with a foul mood. Geet's eyes had tears seeing Maan after so long. How much she missed him. How much she wanted to run and saw his Geet was alive. She knew he was living in a dark place of guilt.'Vikram please, mujhe Maan ko dekhna hai, milna hai please...' She voiced out her feelings. At that moment Maan felt a presence that someone close to him was near by. He held the taweez that Geet gave him in his hand and someone knocked into him dropping the taweez in the direction of Geet. He was walking that way when Vikram saw Maan. He grabbed Geet's hands and took her to the nearest disabled toilets. He pulled her hair making her face him. 'ainda se Maan ka naam tumhara zabaan main ana nahi chahiye samji. Tum ab sirf Vikram ki ho samji.. Damn it Geet. Main tumse kitna pyar karta hu tum dekh nahi sakti' He said in anger. Geet looked at him as he banged his hand in the mirror. 'Vikram' She grabbed his hand and saw blood. 'kitna khoon behra hai' She said trying to wash his hand in the sink. Vikram smirked 'ab mujhe yakeen hua, tum mujhe pasand karti hu, parva bi'. Geet looked at him shocked.Maan and Adi was on there way to London for a business deal. Maan knew Geet would never want him to hold back on any deals or business and be successful. They were seated in front of the cabin. Geet and Vikram towards the back. But Maan could feel some presence. He felt unusually weird. He felt like Geet was around him somewhere. But he dismissed it knowing Geet was dead. Geet felt Maan was here somewhere in the same flight. She tried to look for him but could not. Vikram held her hand tight.'Ab Geet hamari nayi shuruvaat' He smiled looking at her.Maan took out Geet's diary and read through the remaining days, how on the day of the disco and hug she tried to counter his feelings. She tried to push him away. How on the day when Maan saved her from her brother men she realised that maybe she should move on. How on the first ring day, she realised she had to know what is in Maan' mind. And then how she tried to tell him the truth. Then the engagement. Everything, about Naintara lying that Maan didn't believe her when he was in hospital. How she was shocked and knew Dev was his brother. Maan read through the whole diary and saw, unknowing to him, how much Geet loved him and wanted him safe and happy. He promised for Geet's sake he will.6 months later.Maan had become hard rock for everyone except his dadi adi and pinky. Everyone knew what he was going through. He tried to be normal for them How Geet would have wanted him. He also on that day opened an orphange, on behalf of Geet and his child, that would have been born today. Meanwhile, Geet gave birth to a beautiful girl named Sia. Vikram looked at Sia and gave her love as she was part of Geet. He smirked at Geet. Geet asked him to hold off marriage until her baby was born. Vikram agreed. He also never crossed his limits with her except one day. Geet grabbed a mobile with a unregisted sim and called Maan's number.'Hello...' Maan picked up the phone. Geet heard his phone and tears came out of her eyes. She wanted to speak. Maan felt like it was Geet as well but she was not alive. 'Geet' He whispered. Geet was shocked and put the phone down and took the sim out. Maan rang back the number again and found it was blocked. This was noticed by Vikram who came in anger.'Tumhari himmat kaise hua Geet.. ' He held her shoulders. Geet looked at him scared.'Vikram.. woh, I needed to hear his voice' She stumbled.'How dare you! Tumhe pata hai na, ause bulana hoga phir bi...maine aaj tak tumhe kuch nayi kiya taki tum ause bul jao par tum...' He grabbed her by the waist tightly and pushed her aganist the wall. He body sticking to her. Geet was struggling.'Vikram please.. mera bachaa...' He let go. 'ainda se aisa nahi hona chahiye' He growled. He then looked at her and her tears.'Geet please rooh mat. I don't like your tears.. chalo.. main tumhe ice cream khilata hu come on Geet' He said as a different person.Geet looked at Sia and Vikram. She thought of Maan, of how he wanted to be the first to hold her and how he would have wanted a girl. She looked at the locket on her hand. It had an engagement ring in it. The last memory of Maan with her.'Geet dekho hamari sia is so cute. Finally, Geet hum shaadi karsaktey hai' He smirked. Geet looked at him smiled slightly.'Vikram woh mujhe sia ko dood pilana hai' Geet fumbled. Vikram understood. 'woh aap nurse ko bula denge please' She requested. Vikram agreed and called the nurse. The nurse asked Vikram to wait outside.'Nurse, mana ke Vikram ne kaha ke woh is bachi ka pita hai.. par kya aap mere liye ek kaam karsakti hai?' Geet asked.'kya madam,''Please doh birth certificcate banana, ek main Vikram pita hai aur dosra main jaha pita Maan Singh Khurana hai aur Maan wala register karna' aur Vikram ko mat batana'The nurse who was there with Geet all the time during her midwife appointments, understood that something was not wrong with vikram and Geet. She had seen the obsessive streak in vikram's eyes. She understood and said it will be done.PRECAP: Meera comes to meet Maan and realises somethings. Vickrant Khurana in UK sees birth cerificate...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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even beeing in same plane tmaan didnt find geet
this is unrealistic can happen in real life
and why geet is bearing all this
i m seriously doubting geet's character
does she think that bas***d would kill maan does he has the power to do it
u have made geet look like a idoit


Edited by abinash079 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow amazing waiting for today's update
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Episode 6Meera was confused. Her confusion started the second day Geet died or well was told she had died. So many things did not add up. Dev held her hand and asked'kya hua Meera' He asked concerned seeing her lost in thought. Dev lived with Meera in canada, as all his property had to be sold off. He now worked in a small company as a manager and gave rent to Meera.'Dev kuch toh sahi nahi hai. Something is missing' She said.'matlab?' He askec confused. Meera started explaning her point of view and Dev understood.'shayad mujhe India janna hoga' She said.--Meanwhile, Vikrant Khurana, a senior doctor in London St Mary's Hospital, was walking passed a few rooms and saw a couple leaving with a child. He smiled he loved seeing new familes. Even though he left his own. He turned to the reception desk when he saw two identical birth certificates. He looked at both of them and was shocked.'Nurse what is this?' He asked. The nurse looked at him and explained what she knew. Vickrant looked at the name of the father Geet wanted registered and was shocked. 'Maan Singh Khurana, it can't be' He whispered. He decided to take the next flight to India to find out what was the relation between Maan Singh Khurana and Reet Handa. He needed to know why his brother was a father and who is this Vikram?---Meera rushed into Khurana Mansion only to find Maan lost in thoughts having breakfast.'Maan' She said.'Meera tum yaha' He asked confused.'Maan mujhe apse kuch baat karni hai...Geet ke bare mein' She said after a slight pause. Maan ears shot up about Geet. What about Geet.'Maan kuch bi sahi nahi hai. Dekho' She started to explain.'Agar Geet ka accident hua ta, phir waha khoon ke dabbe kyun hai?..She would have fallen straight into the water hai na' Meera said.'Aur phir, dupatta, earings aur bag.. woh Geet ke upar teh, phir woh floor pe kaise gire, it should have fallen with her right..Tik hai dupatta aur bag nikal sakta hai lekin earings.. aur woh bi dono' Meera said.'Aur ha..woh witnesses, aunnone dekha, par kuch kiya kyun nahi? Aur ab jo address aunnone police ko diya ta, woh galat ta' Meera explained.'Tum kehna kya chahti ho Meera' asked Maan.'Shayad..shayad Geet Zinda hai.. aur yeh kisi ki sochi samji chaal hai.. ya phir Geet ke khud apna maut ka joota natak nachaya.. Lekin mujhe nahi lagda Geet aisa karsakti hai' Meera exclaimed.'Naintara.. woh...bi us raat jail se bahal nikli aur Dev ne kaha ta ke woh Geet ka jaan ke piche pari hai.. Shayad Naintara ko pata.. ho. par pata nahi woh kaha hai' Maan said.'Shayad' Meera said.'We need to figure this out.. ho kya raha hai' Maan said.At that point Vikrant headed towards the door and saw Maan and Meera.'Vikrant..' Maan said happily hugging him. Vikrant hugged him back.'bhai.. mujhe pata nahi ta.. apke saath itna kuch hua' Vikrant said in tears as Maan hugged him. Vikrant found out everything from Dev.'Lekin bhai mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai..' Vikrant said.'bolo Vicky' Maan said leading them to the sofa.'what does this mean?' Vikrant said shoving a piece of paper at Maan.'Aur yeh Reet kaun hai?' Vikrant asked. Maan was shocked as was Meera. Vikram? who was he?
And Reet...why has she named Maan as father of her child?..
PRECAP: Meera goes to Hoshyapur to find out about Vikram.. and Vikrant shows Maan's Reet's picture.. Maan shocked.. Naintara is free and runs to Khurana Mansion
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...

meera's doubt is right...n vikrant came directly to solve it all...

hope maan thinks that reet is geet...

cant wait to know what happens next...
Edited by jyoti_l - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THIS IS GREAT
YOU HAVE BLENDED THE SERIAL SO WELL IN YOUR STORY
POOR GEET AND MAAN
MAAN WOULD HAVE LOVED TO HOLD SIA IN HIS ARMS
HOW WILL GEET GET OUT OF MARRYING VIKRAM

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