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sumaiya

@RishbalaAsyaMG

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Guys

ITs me again.. Before you read this FF.. Please make sure u add EAPPOSESSIONPMS for pms! I will send pms now and again.. but since this is a daily GHSP update.. PMs will not be sent.. but I do expect likes to go on
EK Anchaha Faisla- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2913333/ek-anchaha-faisla-2-discontinued-till-july-2013

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1535667/ff-manneet-animosity-thread-2 and Possession

Right..basically.. I am not doing a new story.. This is taken from the serial Geet Hui Sabse Parayee instead.. and Its from the part.. where Maan says I Hate you and Geet turns around and says mere hone ya na hone se farak pardha hai.

November 8th 2010.. is the episode aired date..
So right after Geet turns away walks away from Maan (SO PARTY PART DOES NOT HAPPEN) This is right after the Diwali party

Part 1

Geet walked out the Khurana Mansion in tears as Maan stood there as he remembered the last words that Geet said to him. 'Mere hone se ya nahi hone se farak pardha hai' As much as he wished to deny the fact he could not.
Geet walked passed everyone Dadi, who tried to call her. Romeo who tried to get her attention and Tasha who passed crude comments.

Geet walked out into the rain and started walking unknown to her surroundings. She even bypassed Meera and Dev. Dev was lying unconcious and Meera was asking her driver to help him get him into the car. Geet continued walking unaware only hearing the words Maan said to her
'Hum dono ke beech ab koyi Rishta nahi hai Geet.' That was the first blow. Maan refused to acknowledge that they had any relation left. The feelings the love was all becoming slowly forgotten. Geet took another step into the rain.
'Main tumse nafrat karta hu' He declared to her. She took another step and and cried her eyes out. Her Maan finally hated her. She won. She won in her mission. Never did she know it would be so soon. Maan hated her.

'tut tut tut Geet' Geet turned around to see the woman she abhored and hated out of Prison.
'Naintara tum' Geet was shocked at seeing her there. She quickly put a hand on her stomach protectively.
'Aap ko kya laga, hume jail bej kar, aap aazad hojayenge' Naintara smirked at her walking around her.
'Nahi Geet nahi. Humne aus hi pal soch liya ta, hum waapas ayenge aur tumhara jeena mushkil kardenge. Lekin hum me pata ta, jab tak Maan Veerji apke pass hai tab tak hum kuch nahi karsaktey. Lekin, dekho ab yaha no koi Maan hai aur nahi koi farista tu aap ko hamse bacha sake' Naintara said.
'Naintara, shayad tum bolgayi ho, mere pass mere babaji hai aur woh hamesha meri aur mera bacha ka raksha karega' Geet replied determindly.
'aacha.. hum bi dekh letey hai kaise' Naintara replied crudely. She took out a gun and aimed at Geet.
'aap ne hamari zindagi barbaad kardi Geet. Aur hum aap se chain se jeene nahi denge' Naintara aimed the gun and pulled the trigger.
'Goodbye Geet' She laughed as she walked away, leaving Geet in a pool of blood. Geet stumbled back as she felt the bullet his her stomach. Her eyes widened in pain as she fell back Naintara got into her car and then drove at speed at Geet and hit her as Geet fell breaking the gate over into the river below. . Someone had noticed the whole confrontation and followed Geet and picked her up taking her. They covered her wound and took her to the nearest helipad and a hospital.

Maan was practising tai chi in his gym remembering all his moments with Geet. Her antics when she arrived at office, There love, there date, the truth and then the argument.
'NAHI, TUMARA HONE SE YA NA HONE SE KOI FARAK NAHI PARDHA SAMJI' Maan said imagining a hallucination at her throwing a block of wood at her.
'Rishta to hai, nafrat to sahi' Geet words in his head. Maan continued fighting with himself whlist practising taichi trying to overcome his feelings. His heart suddenly felt a lurch. Like something was wrong. Like Geet was in trouble. She needed him. He wanted to go. But then he told himself. 'NO Geet does not affect you nor does she need you' But Soon he would wish, he listened to his heart.

Meera took Dev home, she knew or felt that Geet would be at Khurana Mansion. Dev was ill and she brought the doctor home too.
'Meera' Dev said lightly as Meera came back in after seeing the doctor off.
'Meera, Geet..Naintara...' He uttered and drifted back into unconciousness.
What did he mean Meera wondered. What about Geet? Naintara. Wait if Dev is out of jail? That means Naintara is as well. And Where is Geet?
She quickly picked up the phone and rang Khurana Mansion. At that moment Dadi picked up the phone.
'Dadima Geet aap ke ghar main hai kya?' Meera asked worried.
'Nahi Meera, Geet to doh (2) ghante pehle yaha se nikal gayi'
'kya, lekin Dadi woh abhi tak ghar nahi aayi' Meera said.
'Kya, main dekhti hu' Dadima said.

Meera left outside in the car to look for Geet. Whlist Dadima left to Maan's room and saw him just coming out the shower.
'Maan beta' Dadima started to talk.
'Dadima aap yaha is waqt kuch kam ta' He asked.
'Woh, Geet abhi tak..' She started.
'Dadima, Geet ke aap ko yaha beja hai kya?' Maan asked.
'Nahi Maan... woh Geet ka pa...' Dadima tried again.
'Dadima mujhe Geet ka koi baat nahi suni nahi kuch aasar karti hai woh meri zindagi main' Maan replied. Dadima left dishearted. Worried about Geet.

Meera went around the roads of Khurana Mansion when she saw a police car and police line a few streets away from the mansion.
Her eyes widened in worriment as she walked to ask the inspector.
'Jee yaha par' asked Meera
'Yaha par kisi ka accident hua ta.. yeh kuch khoon ke nishaan hai aur waha par woh koi gira hai..' But Meera wasnt listening to the inspector. she was looking at what the inspector had found.
It was Geet's bag, her dupatta and her earings.
'Sir, body nahi mili' A voice said. Meera looked down and saw a diver looking.
'yeh sab to Geet ka hai' Meera cried out.
'Geet?' the inspector said.
'Geet, my friend she went missing a few hours ago. Khurana mansion ke party ke baadh..' Meera said.
'Kuch logo ne aik ladki ko dekha ta yaha par...kya apke pass Geet ka tasveer hai' Inspector asked.
'Jee hai' Meera showed a picture to the eye witnesses.
'jee yeh ladki ti aur ek gaari auske taaraf se tez se ayi ti' The eyewitnesses did not see Naintara nor the gun shot as they arrived after Geet was shot and was trying to stay on her feet.
Meera was shocked.
'I'm sorry Miss, i'm afraid your friend is no more and this is what is left. and her body, our divers are looking but because of the heavy rain and current her body must have gone away'

PRECAP: Meera outburst at Maan.

Episode 2: Page 3
Episode 3-Page 6
Episode 4- Tuesday page 9
Episode 5 page 10
Episode 6 page 11
Episode 7 page 12
Episode 8- page 14.. MAHA UPDATE!!!!!

Episode 9 page 17

episode 10 page 19

Episode 11- page 21

Episode 12 page 23

Episode 13

Episode 14

Episode 15

Episode 16

Episode 17

Episode 18

Episode 19

Episode 20-Finale..After this.. A new short story will commence ..

Please vote on either

1. Short Story from Maaneet wedding--Naintara SHOOTS Geet.

2. Short story from Mannets honeymoon accident..=Dev Condition...

3. Short Story from Maan's memory loss after Party

4. Short Story from Maan memory loss Hotel Sequence

Edited by sweetysumaiya - 13 years ago

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love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

interesting starting...

thank u very much fr such a lovely ff...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

i am quite eagerly waiting for the next part...ur ff made me nostalgic and making me rem the old GHSP days😭

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nats0101

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Posted: 13 years ago

interesting twist in dtale..

luking fwd 2 it!!

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Deepa

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Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

part 1
wow awesome start dear...
interesting...
cont soon...

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music

@music_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow

please add me in ur pm list and please can u add english trans in [] i can manage to read hindi but it takes me lot of time to understand one single line please dear

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abinash079

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome start

good to see u started another FF but plz complete this one

as u have left many FF incomplete 😭

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi thanks 4 da intense update! Superb start! update soon n do pm me! Added ur new username!

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sumaiya

@RishbalaAsyaMG

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

Right guys, since this is going to be a very daily updated FF.. Pms shall not be sent!!

I will try to update this everyday by the time.. GHSP used to come on.. 9:30.. (i'll try INDIA time.. but UK time defo) Mon-Friday.. 9:30pm.. GEET hui Sabse Parayee.. Lost and Broken

As I didn't do one yesterday.. Fridays Let me give you Fridays update

Part 2

'MAAAN SINGH KHURANA' Meera yelled with all her might as she stept into Khurana Mansion at 3am in the morning. Dadima was awake tensed in her room. Maan was sleeping or trying to sleep by not thinking about Geet. His body was tired but his mind was overworked. The guards asked Meera to leave but the glare she gave them was enough. The anger they had never seen her in. The servants opened the door when she banged really loudly. They were shocked to see a drenched Meera with bloodshot eyes and anger.

'Meera madam aaap is waqt' (Meere you here at this time?) Nakul asked, tired awaken from his sleep. Thats exactly when Meera pushed him out of the way, making Nakul almost stumble and screamed for Maan.

Maan who was just about to doze off heard his name being screamed out. He got up and walked downstairs to see Meera standing there drenched in rain. Dadima followed Maan downstairs and was shocked.

'Meera, aap' Dadima asked seeing her state. Maan came all the way down. He felt like Meera was here with some news that would affect him so much.

'Meera tum' He asked.

She looked at him and smirked and then walked towards him and clapped.

'wah Mr Maan Singh Khurana, great' She laughed. 'Aap yaha chein se sorahe ho' (your sleeping here peacefully). Maan looked at her confused.

'Meera' Maan started.

'NO, ek shabt be mat bolna. Main yaahan aap logo ko invite karne ayi hu. Ek Funeral main' Meera said in bitterness. (Don't speak a word. Ive come to invite you to a funeral)

'Meera aap kya bol rahey ho, speak clearly' Dadima said.

Meera brought her hands forward and Dadima looked closely. Dadima was shocked.

'Yeh to Geet ka hai...' (This is Geet's). Dadima then looked at Meera. 'Geet milgayi aapko?' you found Geet then)

'Geet to nahi mili, lekin uski maut ka khabar milchuke' Meera replied angrily facing Maan. Maan was shocked. (Not Geet but news of her death)

He grabbed onto Meera and asked

'tum yeh kya kehrahi ho?' He asked. (what are you saying Meera)

'kyun takleef hui aapkp Mr Maan Singh Khurana?..Ha Geet Marchuke hai. Aapne ause mardala.' Meera replied. (why are you hurt hearing this. Geet is dead. You killed her)

'Meera...tik se batao.. Geet kaha hai' Dadima asked urgently (meera say properly where is Geet)

Meera explained what happened to Geet. How she was seen waking in a daze and how a car hit her and she ended up in the river and her body was not even found because it had flown away.

'Aap khatil ho Mr Maan Singh Khurana, nahi sirf Geet ka, par uska bacha ka bi' (your a killer not just Geet's but her babys too) Meera ended up in tears. Tears came out of Maan's eyes. His Geet was no more. No he could not believe it.

'why are you crying?. Aap to Geet se pyar nahi kartey? nah.. Geet se nafrat kartey hai na aap. Geet ke zindagi main mushkil di na aapne' Meera asked. 'Apko ek sach batana chahti ho... Geet to yehi chahti ti' (you don't love Geet. You hated her. You gave her troubles. Let me tell you the truth. This is what she wanted)

'Tumhara matlab kya hai Meera' (what do you mean Meera) Asked Maan in tears broken down.

'yehi ke Geet sab sach janti ti. Ke aapne Dev ko Jail se Dadima ke liye nikala. Aap use shaadi is liye karna chahte te kyun ki aap aus se pyar kartey te aur nahi chahti te teh koi ause kuch kahey aur yehi ke aap Geet ke liye apne parivaar ke khilaaf hochuke. Aur Dadima ke tabiyaat. Sab kuch. Is liye, Geet ne aus din office main jaan buj kar apke ke saath jagra kiya. Takey aap use apni zindagi se bahar nikal sakey. Woh nahi chahti ti ke us ke waja se apka business ya aapka parivar ya aap suffer karey. Woh yeh chahti ti, ke aap use nafrat karey. Woh aapke liye yeh sab seh ti gayi. Apne dil par patthar rak kar' I(Geet knew the truth why you let Dev out of jail for dadima. and you wanted to marry her because you loved her and didn't want anyone to raise fingers. and that for her, you would stand aganist your family and the world. And Dadima health. Everything. She purposely had an argument with you. So you through her out of your life. She didn't want you to suffer nor ur buinsess or ffamily. She wanted you to hate her. She bore this for you with a stone on her heart)

Maan was shocked. Geet knew everything. She wasn't under any misunderstanding. She wanted Maan to let her walk out of his life. She wanted him to hate her. Why did she love him so much that she took everything.

'Kal Geet ka funeral hai. Aap aajana.. Geet ko acha lagega' Its Geet's funeral tomorow please come. Geet will like it)

Meera left. 'GEEET' Maan cried in pain. His Geet, was such a strong woman. at 18 she faced everything. 'Mera dil janta ta, Geet koi mushkil main hai aur main meri ego ke waja se ignore kiya' He fell on the floor in anguish. He cried in tears remembering everything he did and said to her. The words came back.. Mere hone ya na hone se farak pardha hai...

What he said to her... I don't want to breath the same air as you. I hate you.

Geet accepted that even. She died so he wouldn't have to.

Meanwhile in Mumbai where Geet was admitted into the hospital. The man stood outside silently waiting for any news.

'Doctor, Geet kaise hai'

'Difficult surgery Mr Vikram, par Geet aur auska bacha tik hai ab'

(YES IT WAS VIKRAM her stalker from GHSP.. brought him in early to add a TWIST)

Vikram walked into the room and stroked her hair.

'Geet, main janta hu, meri galti hai ke main tum se door chala gaya ta. Aur tumhare saat itna kuch hua. Aur tumhara parivaar ne tumhari zabarzasti shaadi karwaye.. lekin Geet main janta hu, tum apne bache se bohot pyar karti ho. Isliye, Main tumhara aason nahi dekh sakta. I Love you Geet. Ab main tumhe kahi nahi jane doonga. Yeh bacha bi tumhara ansh hai to mera bi hai. Geet tum sirf meri ho.'

'Maan' Geet mummered in her unconcious state.

'Nahi Geet.. ab Maan nahi. Main janta hu, tum Maan se bohot pyar karti ho, lekin tumhe Maan ko bulana hoga samji warna tik nahi hoga. Abse tumhara dil main sirf main Vikram ho. Samji. Tum ab muj se door nahi ja saktey. Ab aur nahi. Tum tik hojao aur ham apni shaadi karenge' Vikram kissed her forehead and walked out .

The morning rays came out. and Vikram awoke sitting outside with the phonecall.

'Hello' He picked up a call.

'Sir Naintara is in our captive lair.' The person on the phone said.

'Good, usne Geet ko takleef pochai.. tum bi usne takleef pochao.. give her electric shocks' Vikram said.

He turned and said 'Maan Singh Khurana, tumhe Geet ke dil se nikal na hoga' Vikram said determindly. He knew everything about Geet checking up on her. He then turned to the news and saw the accident higlighted on the TV.

'Miss Geet Handa died in a accident yesterday. Miss Meera Sabarwal residence has the funeral. Mr Maan Khurana, fiance has passed away'

'Geet marchuke hai.. Ab to meri liye aacha hoga.. ab.. Geet ko mujse koi nahi leja sakta' Vikram smirked.

PRECAP: Maan pain and Geet meets Vikram..

Next update monday!x