ajab prem kahani- prt20/pg56/ 27oct/ imp note pg57 - Page 21

Originally posted by: abinash079

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AJAB PREM KAHANI

PART 18

Maan's phone was ringing…

He picks the call…Maan- yaa.. okk… bring them upstairs … room in left. Okk..

Call ended.

Geet was standing their quite.. bowing her head.. smiling n blushing… her cheeks were crimson red.. hayeee…

Maan- u.. voo.. sryy .Geet- its okk..

At time 3 girls enter the room… The were having sm bags, boxes with them…Girl- hello mk… Maan- hy nisha.. n both hug a lil..Seeing both close geet's blood strt boiling…

Geet (st)- chi chii… dekho kaise chippak rahi hai.. chipkalli kahi ki.. hunnn..

Maan- here she is… u knw vt u hav to do.. I want evrythng perfect.. clear???

Girl- yes mk.. u don't worry… jst give me smtime… Btw… anthng special abt her??? In a teasing tone..

Maan- noo.. nthng like tht…

Girl- really???

Maan- I hav sm work.. so I shd leave..

Maan strting moving towards the door…

Geet called her…. Maan…Hayeee… maan was like uff… she said his name ever so politely… like no1 said this before…he found his name like a honey.. sweet like it… He turned..Geet- aap??? Yeh sab??Girls came n take geet with her near the dressing table..Didn't let maaneet to speak…

Maan goes 4m their…

Geet- yeh aap log kya kar rahe ho???Girl- hello mam.. m nisha…Geet gave her a fake smile… she is as jealous 4m inner 4m tht girl.. hw she was chipking to maan.. Girl- sunita.. come.. n strt fast… Tht another girl strted doing geet's manicure n dn pedicure..

Geet- aap mje btayege ye aap kyu kar rahi hai???

Nisha- vo hume mk ne kha hai.. we r here to got u ready..

Geet- vt???? She was shocked to hear tht.. maan n arranged them 4 her… awe… ye dusht itna achha kab se ho gea???

Geet- bt y he told u??? I can get ready by myself

Nisha- I don't knw abt tht… we hav to do this.. otherwise he will be angry on me.. so mam plzz let us do our work..

Geet nodded… okk…The apply red clr nailpaint on geet's nails.. her hand swere milky white.. n red clr was complimenting her… n they were so soft like a petal…

They dry geet's hair… n strting straightening it…Geet(st)- dhyaa se kroo chudailonn… meer khubsurat se chote baaal(hairs) khraab mat kr dena… she was making faces..

Girl- mam… vt happen???

Geet- nothing , gave a fake smile..

Geet wore bangles'.. n dn anklets.. she wera beautiful heavy hangings in her ears…

hope u all like the pics.

Nisha to another girl while collecting smthng 4m her boxes.. n were far 4m geet- hunn… y mk is doing 4 this girl??? Vt u thnk??Girl- hmm.. thre is obvious smthng fishyNisha- bt he said nthng like tht.. Girl- does he will tell u evrythng..Nisha gave her an angry glare…Girl- he never do this 4 any1.. else her sis.. dn y this girl..Nisha- hmmm…. Girl- Bt she is beautiful yr… she was seeing geet… her sexy white back could be seen..Nisha was fuming … n was all aag babula.. jaali machii saddii types.. jealous 4m geet's beauty…

Dy headed towards geet…Dy tie aa kamarband on geet's waist… really beautiful.. it suits to her waist…

Dy apply a lil makeup on herface as already she is vry beautiful.. her face doesn't need any artificial beauty.. she is indeed a beauty… beauty of heaven… Lil rose on her pinky cheeks.. mascara, eye liner.. n a touchup..

Thre was a knock on the door… Geet turn to see.. her 1 ear ring fell on the ground… when she turn… Thre she found maan standing n drolling over her beauty….

Nisha- its done mk… hope u like it..Maan gave no answer.. She was jealous seeing maan lost in her.. so all girl took a leave 4m there….

Geet blushed seeing him… she couldn't handle his gaze over her…She stood up n said . thankyou..This brings maan to present…

(stinna- hmesha geet ko dekh k kha kho jaate ho mk???)

Maan- my pleasure..Btw u r looking pretty..Geet with a smile n blush on her face… thanks..

Geet dn remember her ear ring.. she strt finding i.. she was seeing left n right on the floor..

Maan- vt happen???

Geet- vo.. I dropped my ear ring n nw its not finding… Maan too strtd finding…

Maan- tum is tarf dekho.. I'll see tht side..Geet nodded..Geet went to other side… Maan find it under the sofa…Maan- mil gya.. he said it happily like he hand found sm treasure tht he was searching 4m ages.. n nw he got tht…

Maan came near to geet…. Maan handed ear ring to geet… geet strted wearing it…She was struggling to wera tht.. bt she couldn't… she tried… Maan saw her.. came close.. geet's heartbeats become faster… dy ere loud… dhak dhak dhak dhak…Maan touches her hands… maan took the ear ring 4m her hands… Geet was having butterflies in her stomach… Maan made her wear tht ear ring…. So sweetly n caring…. Aftr made her wear… maan kissed sensually on her earlobe… uff geet became full tomato red with his touch.. maan came backward… Geet found his aroma nt near her… she felt disappoint… her heart don't want him far… her heart want him near like before.. like 1 min before…

Geet(st) yeh kha challe gaye??? She saw to her right.. where maan was standing bt nw he was going towards the door… She called her … bt he didn't stop.. her face became sad… he goes 4m thre.. leaving geet…

Then she found a tug on her shoulder… Tht brings geet to reality.

Mayank- oyee kha ???? kab se bula rahu hun.. sunti kyu nahi tu…

Geet- kya????

Mayank- kya???? Geet.. u hearing???? Khushi is calling u yr.. chal ab..

Geet- tum kab aye??? Vo kha hai??

Mayank- kon?? Mn tb aya jb tu apne khaylon mn khoye hui thi..

Geet(st) to her babaji- haye babaji… ye mje kya ho rha hai… y.. vo mje har jagah kyu dikhae de rha hai???? Aur kya kya soch rahi hum n.. chi chii… babaji.. help na.. kuch to btado..

Mayank- wave her hand… no response.. she was murmuring in her mouth..He came close to her ear n scream loud.. geeet….. Geet got shocked with this..Haan…

Mayank- kya yr… chal ab.. n drags her with him…

Actually when nisha called him.. maan was lost.. then nisha left… saying him bye maan came to reality… n he bid bye to her.. n goes with her to drop her out…

Aftr this mayank enter the room..He saw geet…Geet was lost in her dreamland…..

Khushi was not ready.. she was wearing her dress… bt her face was sad…Nupur was standing near her… Nupur was all ready.. she is wearing a heavy long (skirt) lehanga with walvet mahrron clr cholli n heavy work dupatta hanging on her either side…

nupur's dress

Geet came to khushi's room…. Along with mayank..Mayank saw nupur.. nw he got lost in her lady love…She was making faces while talking to khushi..Her hairs were flowing in the air…

Nupur saw both of them..Nupur- by god geet.. where was u?????Khushi turned to geet… nBoth were O shape…. Geet- kya hua????She saw mayank.. bt mayank was lost in nupur… he heard nothng… Geet shook her n bring him to reality…Mayank- kya???Geet- in dono ko kya hua ab???? Ye apne muh khol k kyu khadi hai???? She said this in his ear..Mayank- mje kya pta.. tumhari frnds hai.. u kn..geet gave a angry glare..

Geet- kya hua??? Muh bnd krogi dono..Aur khushi vt is this???? U r not ready??? Sagai krne ka plan change ho gea hai kya???

Nupur- geet..

Geet- haan..

Nupur n khushi- u r looking fabbb…

Khushi- stunning..Nupur- N this saree.. I thnk its designer…Khushi- really pretty…

geet's back is like this

Both were dumbstruck with geet's attire.. n her makeup.. really clean n also minimum…

(stinna- maan ne arrange kia hai, toh achha hi hoga na)

Geet- mn kya bol rahi hu.. aur tum kya???

Nupur- oye 1 min.. tere kapde to khraaab ho gaye the na.. toh ye fir??

Geet- are ye chod na.. ese kya hua ab??? E sanka devi.. ab konsi prob hai??

Khushi- dekh na.. mera hairstyle nahi ho rha.. ye es nupur ne sab khraab kr dia…

Nupur- bye god.. kitna jhoot bolti ho… mne kya kia???

Khushi- tune hi kia haan…

Nupur- oyee hello.. tu hi boli thi… k mje puf bnana hai..

Khushi- to hu nahi bol skti thi, k tujhe nahi aata..

Nupur- vo mn.. mne try toh kia na..

Khushi- haan haan.. try. My foot.. deh abs are hairs khraab ho gaye hai.. hy devi mayiaan… kya karu..

Both were fighting like cats..

Mayank- iske liye mn tujhe laya..Geet-kya yr, mje bhi inmn fsa dia..Mayank- ab ti smbhaal.. mn challa.Geet- oye rukk.. bt mayank was all gone… Apni jaan bcha khisak gya vha se..

Geet- oye chup kro dono…

Both shut thir mouth.. like a gud girls..

Nupur- ab jldi kuc kr, agr aunty a gae na, toh shamt a jyegi

Khushi- dono khud toh tyaar ho gae. Aur mn. Jiski sagai hai, voh yha pe baithi hai..

Geet- ruk… kuch sochti hun.. Geet strtd walking.. left to rightKhushi- mila kya???Geet- kon???Khushi- idea???Geet nodded to no… khushi make a puppy face..Geet took a round 4m right to left thinking…Nupur- mila kya???Geet- kya???Nupur- koi idea???Geet- aagr tum dono chup krogi, tabhi mn kuch sochugi na….

Nw u both keep ur finger on ur lips…

Geet strtd thinking.. she sits on the chair…

She smiles… N went to bathroom.. bring a bucket 4m there… n a mug of water…Nupur- ab iska kya karegi???Geet- chup yr… hushi jldi bed pe letja..Khushi- par mje neend nahi a rahi..Geet- grhh.. jaise kha vo kr..

Khuhsi lied on the bed… geet make her hairs out of bed.. she kept the bucket under her hairs…Geet slowly pour sm water on her hairs…

Geet- nupur, give me dryer…Nupur gave her dryer…Geet slowly pour the water where her hairs were messed… n dried it…

Geet- give me straighter..Nupur gave it… she straights her hair… Dn make curls on the lower part of hairs… She was drying the hairs also…

(stinna- I don't knw anything abt it.. jst ainvayii write.. as I never did anything to my hairs.. if its wrong dn take it as writer's liberty)

Soon khushi's hair were all set… n was looking perfect..

Sn geet did makeup of khushi…

Nupur was doing vt geet as saying to her…

Khushi wears a pink clr lehanga…. Looking beautiful n it suits to her milky white skin… her stomach was bare n showing her milky skin..

khushi's dress..

Garima enters the room…Garima- tyaar hogae kya???

Geet turn the chair on whih khushi was sitting.. n said.Tan tannnaa,. Lijiye aapkibeti ek dam tyaar hai…

Garima's eyes become wet…She came forward n applied lil kajal beahind khushi's ear…Garima- meri pyaari bachii.. aj bohot pyaarii lag rahi hai..

Nupur- making golgappa face.. aur hum..

Garima- haan haan, tum bhi.. Dn she applied kajal on geet n nupurs's too…

Frnds want ur suggestion….On which song u want maaneet dance?????Do tell… n tell fast so tht I can rite the nxt part..

Tell hws this cuty update????… will be waiting 4 ur response.. all criticism is welcome…

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Thank you 4 reading..

Originally posted by: love2_soma

abb kya arahe hai geet k liye...maan toh gaya kaam se...

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thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

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