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Posted: 12 years ago

RECAP-

Geet- aree yr.. dekhte hai na.. kuch v pehn lu gi'

Nupur- u can take any of my dress yr'

Oh oh oh.. hw I forget.. miss geet handa doesn't wear any1's clothes..

Geet with puppy face'

Geet- let it be' jst go with the flow' at time vt I'll get I'll wear tht.. btw I called mom' she is doing smthng.. maybe arranging smthng..

Geet was going 4m corridor' nxt moment she found herself in a room'. Maan pulls her 4m her arm'

Geet was abt to scream when maan place his hand on her mouth' "chup bilkul chup"

Geet's eyes were close when sm1 pull her' aftr hearing the word' she slowly open her eye lids'

Maan removes his hand'.

"Tum????... vt u doing here???? N y u pull me??" geet said

"Kitne sawal puhti ho' chalo nw come with me"' n maan drags her to the centre of the room'.

"oh ho.. bt where???" geet said annoyingly..

Geet's eyes widen' seeing so mant dresses thr' she was shocked.. all the dresses were their. Anarkali suits, salwar suits, fish cuts, pajama suits, lehanga, gowns, sarre n many more variety'

All were lined up'. Her eye balls moves 4m left to right n right to left n dn to maan..





"Ye sab???? Kisi shop ki robbery ki hai kya????

N y u showing this to me????"

"Take tht 1 which u liked the most"'. Maan said..

"Vt me'. Mn aise kaise le sakti hu???? N who brought it here????"

"As I messed up ur clothes na' n u also help me in cleaning my clothes.. so its just a small present 4 u'"

"Vt???? 4 me' sachi????? Maan nodded.

Bt hw u brought this???? Today is Sunday n all shops r closed' n it seems these all r designer n r expensive too."

"yupp'. Nw tht is MAAN SINGH KHURANA.."

"achha ggg.." geet by making faces..

"okk nw stop wasting time'. Its too late' function will be strt at any moment' u choose'"

"bt I cant take it' I don't knw u.. hw ?? I mean.."

"u also helped me na' so think its my thanku to u"


Bt thanku toh I shud say na.. tht day u also saved me 4m goons.. n didn't said u thanku' though I knw u r a dusht danav in low voice bt maan hears it.. bt shd say thanku'

So thankuu very much 4 saving me tht day.. n smiles..

"my pleasure.. so it is decided u r gonna wear any 4m this.."

"No' plzz han.. u don't worry I'll manage." Geet said

"okk.. m nt accepting ur thanks' okk bye' n was going towards the door'

"achha okk.."

Maan with a winning smile'. Nw do fast' after this'

Geet asked wih her one ey brow up. Vt????

Maan- oh ho.. u choose 1st..

Geet- bt these r so many'. Hw to choose 1 4m dm.. all r soo pretty' hy idea.. u help me..

Maan- vt????? I don't knw anything abt this'

Geet- okk m nt wearing any of these.. n satnd other side wwith her arms crossed near her chest..

Maan- okk.. hmm' he goes through all the dresses'

Checking out all of them.. hy vt abt gown????? To which geet gave no never.. its engagement.. hw I can wear gown expression' maan nodded.. n check further'

Maan- Hy saree?????

Geet turns ' vt?? saree..???? With a shocking expression'


Maan- u don't like???

Geet nodded to no dn yes.. nahi nahi.. its okk.. with a fake smile'

hy babaji' inhe bhi saree hi mili thi.. kuch aur nahi bol sakte the.. mje toh saree carry hi nahi krni aati.. ab mn kya karu babaji' murmuring in her mouth..

maan came to her n asked.. vt??? Vt u talking n with whom???

Geet- no.. nothing..

Maan handed over heet a beautiful , elegant white saree'.

Geet- waoo.. white' its

Both said cllectively

" THTS MY FAV CLR"



Sftr hearing their joint statement a smile came on both's lips'

Okk.. I'll wear this' thanks..

Maan goes 4m thre'

Actually waiting outside 4 geet to come'

Mayank came thre..

Mayank- hy dued u here????

Maan- yup'

Mayank- u clothes seems clean nw' thts gud.

Maan- thank god.. n smiles'

Mayank- btw vt u doing here???? Outside the room??? R here' cm to function its downstar nt here yaar' challo.. n hold his hand' n was abt to drag him' maan stops him..


Hyy wait' vo.. u go m coming in 5 mins'

Mayank- kyu???? Kisis ka intezaar kar rahe hp kya??? In a teasing tone'

Maan- no.. nt like tht'

A sound came'. Mayak' mayank'

By god aj nahio chodugi isse mn.. milne toh do.. here she came'

Mayank got lost'. Seeing her angelic face'. Her hair flicks were cmng on her face.. he want to touch her face n tuck those barrier tht was nt allowing him to see her fully' to tuck the strands behind her hair. She looks more cute when she is angry n she spoke tht beautiful n her fav words 4m her mouth' bye god.. awe mayank was drooling over her.. his lady love'

Nupur- mayank.. tum yha kya kar rahe ho???? Mne tumhe kha tha k help me' mje market jana hai..

Mayank- t nupur aaj Sunday hai.. all market is closed.. n vt u want 4m market nw????

Nupur- vo na.. geet k paas clothes nahi hai' ab vo kya pehnegi?????

Mayank- u don't worry abt her.. vo miss. Geet handa hai.. she knws hw to tackle with probs' u don't get hyper.. chill by caressing his hand on her face'

Nupur's eyes went to maan'. N suddenly shrug off mayank hand.. saying Mayank.. n indicating 4m her eyes tht sm1 is standing over here.

Nupur- aap????

At time a lady came thre'.

Garima- nupur.. vo khushi tumhe bula rai thi.. bte uske paas jao.. aur geet kha hai???? Tum bhi jldi se ready ho jao.. guests hav strtd cmng'

Nupur- g aunty.. mn abhi jaati hu.. aur geet.. vo uska toh pta nahi' saying this nupur leaves 4m thre..

Garima asks maan abt him..

To which maan replied tht he is arnav's frnd'

Garima also goes 4m thre taking mayank with him.. 4 sm work.

Geet wears tht saree' looks beautiful.. out of the world'. She is wearing a sleeveless blouse.. whose in back thre was only a stone' her hairs were straight.. she kept them in front'

She was struggling to tie the dori of her blouse..



Maan knocks the door.. geeting no answer he peeped ito he room'. Thre he saw geet struggling with tht dori' maan came close to geet' touches her hand' geet got shocked'. N turn suddenly'

Their eyes came in contact' thre was a small eye lock.. MAHIII.. MAHIII..

Maan turn her' n took the dori n ties it.. maan's fingers touches geet's bare back.. to which geet closes her eyes.. n was feeling his touch.. butterflies were roaming in geet's stomach' maan's touch was tickling geet' bt she was liking it.. enjoying it' a new feeling was cming into geet' a new sensation' geet loved tht feeing'.

Maan came closer to her ears' n whisper.. " u r looking too pretty.."

Maan turns her n made her stand infront of him.. geet's eyes were close' maan came near to her eyes.. he placed a small peck on her eyes.. to which geet blushed, he dn peck her another eye' geet's cheek become redyy'

Maan came closer to geet more' geet was playing with her saree' making patterns on her saree' her heartbeats were raising' it was beating faster n faster n loud'

Maan came near to her ears' "ur heartbeats r raising"

Aweee geet become crimson red with his omment' she was toh sharam se paani paani'

Maan was coming closer to er lips' wanted to take her juicy lips in.. wanted to feel her.. geet's eyes were still close.. their lips were inches away 4m eachother'

A sound came' "its done"

Geet open her eyes' n shoked to see maan standing infront of her'

Maan shook her' geet.. geet'

Geet murmurs.. "m I dreaming????? N vt I was dreaming' haye babaji.. ye kya ho rha hai mje' mn aur ye dusht danav.. nahi nahi.. vaise itna bhi dusht nahi hai ye danav' hayeee bachoo babaji.. kya soch rahi hu mai' n I was blushing.. geet handa n blush.. no way.."

Maan make wired face ' "vt she is doing???? Baar baar khud se hi baate krti rehti hai.. pagal khi ki"

He again shook her'

Geet ' haan???? N straighten herself' nahii nahii..

Maan- kya nahi???

Geet- kuch nahi'.

N strted to go.. she was going towards the door.. bt was still saying smthing.. was nt looking above, murmuring smthng in her mouth' she didn't sqw the table'

Maan- geet' vo aage'

Bt maan was late to speak' table hit geet on her knees'. N she lost her balanced.. she was falling on the floor.. she closed her eyes..

She opens her eyes to find herself in strong arms' maan hold her t the right moment n save her 4m falling' she was in his arms.. n again a aeyelock.. it was a long eyelock'. MAHII MAHIII VE MAHII MAAHII VE'.. MAHIII

The phone rang.. this brings both of them out of thire dreamland.. maan make her stand properly'

(stinna- hunn.. kabab mn haddi kahi ka)

Maan- dekh nahi chal sakti kya' ag gir jaati toh

Geet- mne jaan much k thori na kia'

Maan's phone was ringing'

He picks the call'

Maan- yaa.. okk' bring them upstairs ' room in left. Okk..

Call ended..

PRECAP- WHICH WAS THE CALL???? & WHOM?????

MAANEET MORE ROMANCE N MASTI N DANCE'

one request..

plzz tell me on which song u want maaneet dance..😃 m totally confused..😕


for my other writing..

tune to this.. my blog

_stinna dreamy paradise😊

Done with the update' nw ur turn.. give me long long cmnts'. Plzzz' ab toh har baar bol bol k thak gae hu'. Ab toh kuch achha vala response dedoo'

Thanks to those who read it'

Love u alll'.

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Edited by simrancuty - 12 years ago
nahtani88 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
aa great chapter dear...loving ur work...plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
by god what do they kjeep doing man
this is seriously the ajeebest love story of maneet but i love it
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Man are they cute or what
The amount if times they bumped into each other was unbelievable
But so adorable
Man these two and you will be death of us
Wow so he got her so many clothes well he is maan singh khurana na so that's possible for him
So many mahi moments for the two haiyye
Cheers for pm just finished all seventeen in one go
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Posted: 12 years ago
abb kya arahe hai geet k liye...maan toh gaya kaam se...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...
Geet dreaming 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab update
just loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
woww awesome Stinna ..
hayee re kitna bump karte hai ye dodno.. but i enjoy .. lage raho

loving this story of your.. very well done
Hugs For You
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
does geet was really dreaming or maan was teasing her like that

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