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Originally posted by: harmeenchawla

awsm dear

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Originally posted by: geetsrir.maan

aww the update was shooo lovely loved maan's arrangement for geet...aww the jealousy in starting was shoo good...👏


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wow fab update yaar
ha ha aag dono taraf bara bar lagi hai
n loved how maan got all things arranged for geet so soon

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part 19

Garima- hlo ab thodi der tum sab a jana thik hai..

Geet- gg.. hum a jayege..

Garmina leaves 4m ther.

N simran enter the room

Simran- sorry sorry sorry… vo mn late ho gae na..

Khushi- na g na… aap aur late..

Aree nahi.. engagement to kl hai.. aap itni jldi kyu a gaye..

Simran- sorry bola na.


simran's dress

Geet- usse kya hoga…

Nupur- khud toh full tyaar shyaar ho k a gae… hunn

Geet- vaise achhi lag rahi hai

Simran- are yr.. I was to come soon.. bt this…. She hits on karan's arm who was standing near her..

Iski vajah se.. I came late..

I was coming dn he said we ll go together n dn tht dam traffic. Vt I can do.. she makes a puppy face..

Geet- ohhh.. inki vajah se..

Full teasing tone..

Simran gave a angry glare to shut her mouth..

Karan- oh ho… abhi all blame on me.. nt far haan.

Simran- kya not fair haan.. tune hi toh late krvaya..

Karan- rehne de.. jhooti kahi ki.

She made O shape mouth on word jhooti..

U call me jhooti

Karan- kyu the sunai nahi deta.. ya hindi nahi aati.

Simran- hunn.. I don't wanna talk to u..

Geet- oyee hello… ek toh late ae.. n upar se u r fighting ovr here…

Vts this haan

Simran- sorry jaanuuu..

Geet –chAl chAl maska mat maar zada…

both hugs each other..

dn nupur n khushi too joined dm n biggg hug..

karan- oh hello.. stop ur drama.. aur niche chalo.. all r waiting.. n engagement aaj hai nt 2moro.

Geet- tu chl.. we r cmng…

Karan leaves 4m thre..


Nupur- ab hum bhi challe madam???

Khushi- oyee.. mje na darr lag rha hai

Geet- kyuu…. Aruu the kha jayega kya

Khushi pouted her lips.. kya yr.. I told u many times don't call hi aruu

Geet- oh ho.. I forgot.. only u can call him 4m this name na..

Khushi gave a smile…

Karan came downstair..

Ther was full hustle n bustle in the hall..

The hall was beautifully decorated..

All realatives , guests , friends were chatting, gossiping with 1 another..

They r enjoying the atmosphere..

A vry low sound soft music was playing…

Tht creates a vry romantic atmosphere too…

Arnav was standing n having drink, bt seeing his face it can be judged tht he is too nervous.. maan was standing with him n mayank also joined them..

All were jst talking usual..

Karan came there..

Karan- ohh hy maan…

N both hug each other..

Maan- hlo..

Mayank- u knw him..

Karan- yupp…

Mayank- waooo….

Karan- he is my frnds's bro.. so I came to here home many times..

Maan- bt u here???


Karan- vo its my frnds engagement na..

Maan- oh I see…

Maan- mine too..

Arnav was silent all time… n guldping his soft drink..

Karan- oh ho jijjj.. kya hua. Abhi se yeh haal hai.. vt will next haan.. its only engegemnt.. vt will happen aftr marriage..

Arnav- vt the….

I mean.. m okk..

Mayank- pehel apni shkal(face) thik kar.. dn we ll knw..

Maan- y r u getting nervous???

Arnav- don't knw

Karan- jst chill na…

Btw she is cmng haan.. so hold ur breath..

N man.. she is looking gorgeous…

Oyee mayuuu…

Mayank gave im a angry glare..

Tere vaali bhi…

Mayank- zada udd mat haan….

Suddenly the lights go dim… ther was lil dark n dn a light came on stairs…

Spot light was covering the beautiful 4 ladies…

They were standing on the stairs…

All together… geet, khushi, nupur n simran.

Khushi murmurs- hy devi mayii.. raksha krna

Geet- chup hoja… greeting her teeths… n media was also present ther..

As arnav's wedding…. Hmm engemnet.. n e is vry sccesful businessman.. so its normal 4 media to cover up all news regarding this..

N flashes were going,,

All strted cmng down..slowly slowly…

All girls were looking mind blowing.. like fairies descended 4m heaven…

All 4 of them giving competition to each other with their natural beauty…

Arnav's n khushi's eyes met.. they strted drooling on each other..

Nupur n mayank's eyes came in contact n dy lost in themselves… n jst starring each other..

Karan was also lost in simran.. she is looking dam pretty in tht dim light.. giving full view of her milky white skin..

Simran lowers her eyes lashes feeling embraced with his continuous gaze over him..

Nw the couple left.. hw they also cant lost.. dy were also lost… boths' eyes came in contact n their eye lok strted…

Mahii.. (bg)

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Maan notices her 4m top to bottom…

He didn't see her when the girls make her ready so he saw her nw.. n he was lost in her beauty..

her curves were visible through her saree…

n giving the full view of his milky white bare waist….

Maan jst heras the sound f her anklets.. "chamm chamm"

Geet was also lost in tht deep eyes… she is toh pehel hi lattoo ovr him. N nw his gaze over her… ufff…

She observes her fm head to toe…

Jst perfect… she murmur in her thoughts…

Dn again.. "omg.. he is making me mad.."

(stinna- frnds I knw its arshi engagement… bt the main characters of story r maaneet.. so more part will be of maaneet… so don't think.. m taking dm more.. its normal.. both r main in this ff.. so their part will be more.. n many other characters luv story is also going together… so don't think this also.. if I ll give less maaneet n other too… hope u understand my point)

When they reached down.. the lights become normal.. n sound of clapping strtd echoing in the hall..

All were clapping 4 the beautiful ladies…

N 4m top roses were flowing on them…

Arnav came forward… near to khushi…

Geet- oh ho jijss.. itni jldi bhi kya hai..

Arnav forwards his hand to kushi..

Khushi hold's his hand..

promising nvr to left this in life..

They will be together in evry path of their lie.

4m nw they will be tied together in a sacred relation..

Nw they will hav the right over 1 another..

They will luv each other till the last breath of their life.

They will stay with each other in evry happiness..

They will hold each other in evry sadness..

One will be others protection…

He promised her to nvr let any bad eye to see her lady love..

She promised him he will nvr let nay witch come around him..

They were talking with their eyes..


Their eye-lock broken when geet shook khushi n nupur arnav..

Geet- ohh foo.. come out of ur dreamland love birds..

Both.. arshi fell embaresdd.. khushi lowers her eyes lashes.. her cheeks become crimson red with the comment "love birds"

Nupur- oyye kya ho gya… Sharma toh ese rahi hai.. jaise pehli baar apne inko dekha ho..

Simran- chalo chalo…

N drag them to centre of the hall…

N both took their seats.. they were made to sit on the sofa…

Aftr introducing them to sm relatives..

Then suddenly the lights again gone dim…

A soft music played in bg,

Tune was going.

Geet came to arshi… make them hold their hands.. n drag thm to centre of dance floor…

Boh strted dancing… with each other matching the soft beats of song..

Mayank n nupur also came to dance floor..

Hw nupur can stay ther.. she toh will obviously dance with him na.. n mayank cant say no to him… so they moved 4 dancing..



Simran was standing ovr there.. karan came n ask her 4 dance..


Simran refuses…

Bt karan insisted her…

Simran- no.. I dont want..

Karan didn't listen to her n drags her with him..

Lolzzz geet left alone

(stinna- hw it can be… hmara maan hai na uske liye..)

PRECAP- dance…


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fab
hayyee maaneet latto on eachother
waiting for their dance
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Fabulous maaneet love for each other haiii haiii

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