ajab prem kahani- prt20/pg56/ 27oct/ imp note pg57

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prt 1 of my ff-

its morning 6am...

maan wake up daily at this time n warmup n do his marshal arts.. after this.. its 8am he got ready 4 office

dadi- maan kaha hai aap?

maan- g dadi mn abhi aya

dadi- beta aap tyaar ho gaye

maan- g dadi.. mn roz issi waqt tyaar hota hu

dadi- par bete aaj to..

maan- kya dadi.. u knw me.. even u talk abt this...

dadi- bt aap kabi bhi is din ghar kyu nai rehte.. ese ukhde hue kyu rehte ho

maan goes away.. didnt answer dadi

HANDA HOUSE

geet yawning in her bed.. its 8am n she is late 4 clg as always... her mother rano came to wake her up

rano-bete utto

geet- hmmm... sone do..

rano- its too late baccha.. getupp.. she pulls her duvet... n made her sit on bed

geet- hmm... geet eyes close.. n sying goood mrng with her sweet voice

rano- good mrng bachha... chal ab uth ja.. late ho jayega varna.. dekh 9 baj gaye

geet frnshup n gets ready...she wore a babypink clr top with blue jeans... looks flowless... as alwzz...

on dining table.. she cames n sy gm. to her family... n sits to have her breakfast

sudenly phone rings...

geet- hellooo

khushi- oyeee hello ki bachhi .. kaaha hai tu??? bhool gae na.. aj jaldi ana tha...

cuts d call.. have half bread n half glass of juice.. her mom asking her to take care...

geet- byeee

geet doesnt say anythng n rush towards collage..

MAAN REACHED OFFICE ON TIME... his wowest entry.. looking dashing with gogles...tht black car..his personality... d way of walking.. all was omg!!!!!

as he entersd every1 saying gm. to msk.. maan didnt answer any1... jst moving his head..

maan- sasha.. cm to my cabin with mr.sethi's file call adi n pinky too

sasha- yes mk

door knocks... 3 of dm cm in... stands in front of maan..

maan- u knw this project is vry imp... i dont want any mistake.. got th

adi- yess sirrr... (stamering)

maan- pinky i dont want any mistake... prepre all thng 4 todys meeting..

3 of dm- yes sir...

maan strt doing his work...

maan- ab yaha se jane ka kya loge

adi- oo... sorrryyy sirrr...

adi, pinky n sasha goes n strt doing their work...

PRECAP- MAAN GEET KI TAKKAR...

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precap-

maan- be prepared 4 todys meeting, i dont want any mistake...got tht clear...

geet reached collage..

******************

geet in clg

mayank, khushi, nupur, simran were standing their n waiting 4 geet... with rolled eyes..

geet- kya hua tm sab ko mje aise kyu dekh rahe ho???

khushi- kya yr... tjhe kabhi bhi kuch yaad nai rehta

nupur- bye god.. bhulakad kahi ki..

simran- ab hm kya karenge.. hmara plan to ab flop..

mayank- yup... our plan is nw flop..

geet- hy guys... chill maaro yr.. itna kyu sochte ho... dont wory.. jab geet ho sath to kya darne ki baat..

nupur- oyeee... darr kaun raha hai...

geet- achha meri maa!!!!!!! tu to bilkul nahi darti... vo to bs tujhe acting karni hoti es liye coackroach dekhte hi bechare mayank k uppar chad jaati ho..

nupur with baby face at mayank..

geet= dont worry hm aj hi us 'T' ko maza chakayenge... tm chinta mat karo

( actually T n geet n other gang r rivals... it was like that... it was geet;s 1st day in clg.. as of ragging she has to slap a girl cmng 1st... unfortunately it wa T who was cmng.. so geet to kisi se darti nai.. so she goes straight n slap her tight... as the answer of thi s T also slap geet... 4m tht day both r enemeis.. always try to put other in trouble)

its 'T'... AS TANNY...

ALL WERE???????????????????????? BT KAISE????????????????

geet- bs dekhte jao mn kya karti hu...

*****************

geet - hy T...

T- hy geet... T got confused with her polite bahaviour towards her...

she replies as hyy geet...

geet- hy u were called by d princi...

T- okk thxx...

when T GOES.. GEET SMILED EVILY... AS IT WAS HER PLAN N IT WORKS...

as T enter's d princi office she saw a man ... a champu boy wearing glasses,, check shirt... as full on losser type n champu.. ( u can imagine as him lik e samrat in mjht when he tease gunjan)

T- may i cm in sir

princi- yes... cm

T- u called me sir...

princi- yes... vts this knownsence... vt m hearing abt u..

T- bt sir...

princi didnt let her to speak...

princi- hw could u tanny.. hw u can play with hearts of an innocent boy... y u told him tht u love him n wants to marry him.. bt ur mother doesnt wants this. tm kaise kisiko ese pareshaan kar sakti ho... uu raat ko msgs karna.. dn phone rings dena.. its so cheap... n bla bla bal...

T- bt sirr.. didnt...

princi- i didnt want this type of u... u r resticated 4m clg 4 a weak... i dont want any explanation 4m u.. u can leave nw..

geet n the gang was listening all this... standing outside princi's room.. with hearing this.. geet showed all her thumbsup.. tht deir plan works n T is resticated..

******************

maan is done with d conference meeting with his cleints.. he got tht project...

after his office work.. he moves towards khurana mansion (KM)

DADI- bete aap a gaye... jaye fresh ho ayea..

maan- g dadi.. n moves straight towards his room

dadi= maan aap aise kyu hai?????? aap hmse apne dil ki baat share kyun nahi karte.. aap pehle jaise maan kyu nahi ban jate... vhai mazak karna.. khelna.. aap use bhul kyu nahi jate????? tht day changed ur life.. (dadi thinking)

after having their dinner dy all went to sleep..

geet also go to sleep...

nxt day...

maan was in hurry.. he has to reach smwhere 4 his new project..

.(GUESS???????? which clg... obvious yaar.. geet ka hi hoga.. ismn sochne vaali konsi baat hai)

geet was chitchatting asusual with her gang.. without seeing here n there..

maan was also moving with adi n discussing abt their projecct.. so he also didnt see who's cmng..

n vt happend?????????????

dhadammm... both... maaneet ki TAKKAR...

their mobile phones slipped 4m their hands...

both r having blackberry mobile with same set...

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big hellooo to u all...

PRECAP- maan geet banged in one another n their phone slipped 4m their hands n fall on the floor..

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maan= m sorry

geet- oo m sry.. its my mistake...

both pick their phone

without seeing one another moves further...

geet continue her chat with her gang n maan also moves on to princi room

********

princi cabin-

princi- ooo hello mr. khurana.. m glad tht u r here..

maan- hello... its mine pleasure tht i m doing ur work afterall u r dadi's frnd...

princi- btw.. tea or coffee

maan- no thnks... so shall we discuss

princi- yaa sure mr.khurana

( actually princi is maan's dadi n dada ji's frnd.. n princi has to make a new building 4 clg.. so he choose khurana's to build tht.. unfortunately he was unable to cm so he called maan to the clg to discuss abt the project)

maan- okk... hand shake

princi- thnks 4 cming

maan- ur work will be done according to u...

princi- nice to meet u mr.khurana

maan- same here.

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geet was in canteen n was asusual talking with khushi, simran n nupur.. mayank is in liabrary...

suddenly d phone rings..

person (p)- hello mr.khurana... can we meet 2moro instead of tody..

geet- m sorry... i thnk its wrong no.

p- oo sorry...

geet- its okk..

call ended...

phone rings...

person- oyeee hello... kaha hai tu yr... aj kl milti hi nai...

maan- vt?????????/

p- areee... ye teri awaaz ko kya ho gea... bs yaar itna bhi mazak mat kar.. i knw u r tom boy bt teri awaz.

maan- hello... i thnk its wrong no,

p- ooo m sry... i thnk it was mistaken

maan- its kkk

call ended...

their phones r exchanged!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

both r having sm different calls... dy have 3-3 calls... dn bth remined of their mrng TAKKAR..

dy thought tht their phones r exchanged...

geet was having calls so she got disturbed with unknown calls...

khushi- tje kya hua..

nupur- or ye kiski baar baar vaat laga lahi hai.. itna kise bol rahi hai??

geet- guyss.. i thnk my phone is exchanged...

simran- bt hw????

nupur- aree haan... subah teri kisi k sath takkar hue thi na.. yabhi hua hoga...

geet- hmmm..

khushi- kya hmmm... aree yr to es mob se apna no. try kar.. tu bhi na ek dam jhalli hai..

geet tried her phone... busyyy

on other hand maan also tried his no. bt its also busyyy

( bewakuffu milega kaise.. one milaye ja rahe ho..)

both try their numbers many times.. bt it was busyyy...

khushi- kya hua?????

geet- pta nai yr.. kitni baar try kia.. par nai lag raha..

simran- par kyu??????????

geet- yehi to mne bola.. pta nahiii...

nupur- firse try kar

geet tried again.. bt still no answer...

geet- pta nai ye kon hai.. ek baar bs mil jaye chodugi nahi esi mai.. mere mob ka sara balance khatam kardega... itni der se busyy a raha hai... hayeee babaji!!!!!!!! pta nai kisse itni der se baat kar raha hai... babaji ek baar mje usse mila do.. sachii mn use nai chodugi ( talking to babaji by moving her head upwars)

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maan also got irritataed by tring his no. many times.. so he thought he shd wait 4 a while dn try...

geet also thought d same...

nw waiting 4 smtime both try their no...

BUSYYY

MAAN- HAD HOTI HAI.. ITNI DER SE TRY KAR RAHA HU.. PAR BUSY A RAHA HAI.. got to much irritated

khushi- kya hua abhi bhii nai mila

geet- geet moves her face saying no.. n made a grump face...

during this talk... maan try his no... n it rings.. maan got relief tht finallyyy it rings...

geet saw her no... n jumped with exitment.. tht its her no.. bt was angry too

geet - hellooo with her sweet n anfry voice...

after hearing this maan's heart skip a beat... he was so much attracted n was lost in her sweet voice..

geet- hello...

maan- no answe

geet- oyeee... kon hai?????????

oyee sunlo.. jo bhi ho.. ye mera mob hai.. khabardaar agar isko kuch kia bhi to... tumhe pta nai hai mn kon hau...

ek baar bs mil jao.. tumhe to mn chodugi nahi... mere mob k sare paise udaa diye.. haan

samjhte kya ho tm apne aap ko... dekh lo.. jitne paise tmne khatam kiye hai.. mn utne hi tmse vaapas lugi...

mujhe mera mon do.. chaloo jaldi se mera mob vapaas karo...

geet was talking n blaberring without stopping.. n maan was totally lost in her talk..

m a soft romantic mussic was playing on maan's bg(background)

KUCH TOH HUA HAI..

KUCH HO GEA HAI...

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SO HWS THIS PART?????????????????? DO CMNT PLSSS... WAITING 4 UR CMNTS...

IF THEIR IS ANY KIND OF PROB DO TELL ME...

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hnksss 4 ur lovely cmnts.. m here with my nxt prt.. hoping u will also like this

* fingers crossed*

precap-

geet- oyeee... kon hai?????????

oyee sunlo.. jo bhi ho.. ye mera mob hai.. khabardaar agar isko kuch kia bhi to... tumhe pta nai hai mn kon hau...

ek baar bs mil jao.. tumhe to mn chodugi nahi... mere mob k sare paise udaa diye.. haan

samjhte kya ho tm apne aap ko... dekh lo.. jitne paise tmne khatam kiye hai.. mn utne hi tmse vaapas lugi...

mujhe mera mon do.. chaloo jaldi se mera mob vapaas karo...

geet was talking n blaberring without stopping.. n maan was totally lost in her talk..

m a soft romantic mussic was playing on maan's bg(background)

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GEET- oyeee... hellooo... kuch toh bolo... muh (mouth) mei dahi (curd) jma k rakhi hai kya???

jaldi batao.. mere mob se kisse baat kar rahe the itni der se.. haan.. bolo..

dekho jitne paise khatam kiye hai mn utene hi vaapas lugi...

bolooo

phone cuts..

while this she was nt with her frnds.. she goes sm side place n dn talks.. after this.. she came back..

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simran- kya hua??????????

geet- mera phone tha na..

khushi- kya bol rahi hai..

geet- areee yr.. vo abhi mera phone aya tha na

nupur- haan toh????

geet- haan to kya...

mne phone uthaya ... hello kiya.. par koi kuch bola hi nai

nupur- par kyu

geet- miss. morana.. mje kya pta.. mene bhi to vahi bola...

nupur- agr fir ayaa na to... to tu mje mob dena... achhe se us gadhhe ki khabar lugi..

tu fikr mat kr tera mob mil jayega...

when geet came mayank also came 4m liabrary... n was chitchatting abt this exchange mob topic..

mayank- nupur shuttup... ase mat bolo

nupur... houuu.. with open mouth

mne kya kaha... sahi hi to kaha mne.. bechari hmari geet ka mob leliya..

aur upaar se phone karke balance khatm kiya..

aurrr,,,,, usne phone uthya to kuch bola bhi nahi.. aur tm mje keh rahe ho

khushi- haan mayank.. nupur sahi to keh rahi hai...

simran- hyy ho skta hai range na ho..

khushi n nupur n geet--- a ha a ha... haan haan tje kabhi koi galat lagta hi kha hai.. hmesha dusre ki side leti ho...

simran- par aisa hop skta hai

mayank- yup... simi mn tere sath hu...

while this geet's phone rang...she hurridly pick up

geet- hellooo

maan- hellooo..

geet- ye mera phone hai

maan- btw ye jisse baat kar rahi ho vo mera phone hai...

nn who r u???????

geet- mn mn geee

simran intruppts... oyee naam mat bta na..

nupur- hayee... pehle baar simo tune koi dhang ki baat ki hai.. luv u meri jaan

simran with puppy face..

geet- a ha a ha a.. haan.. jaise tmne pucha n mne tumhe apna naam bta diya...

mn jo marzi hu.. tmhe kyaaa... bs mera phone de do...

maan- yaa right.. mje bhi koi shaunk (interest) nai hai.. tumhara naam jaane ka..

n yaa 1 more thng n nt also ur mob. phone.. understood

mje bs mera phone chahiye...

( dont thnk tht this is maan singh khurana.. n he is fighting jst 4 a mob... he wants his mob jst as sm important numbers r in it n sm secert pix r also .. so he dont want any1 to see tht... so he wants his phone back)

geet- haan tohh...

maan- toh kyaa... aa kr mje mera mob vapas do...

geet- achha ggg... mn au.. kyuuu mne phone lotane ka thekaa khol rakha hai jo mn auu...

( did i open a company of returning mob?)

hunnn... mn nai aane vaali... tmhe ana hoga.. samjhe.. mr.nt so smart..

maan- kaise ladki ho.. btw tm ladki lagti bhi nahi

geet with open mouth.. houuu

maan- mn kabse achhe se baat kar raha hu.. aur tm ser (head) par chadd rahi ho

geet- hahahahaha... oyeee.. mn kha tm kaha mn tumhare ser par kab chaddi...

maan- yaa vry funny... angry tone...

geet- agar chahiye to apna mob a kr le jao...

maan- bt y me??????

geet- e looo... to fir mn kyuuu au?????

,je pagal kuttee ne kata hai kya..

( did a mad dog bite me?)

maan angrily- hunnn... kkk fine.. kha ho tm

geet- haa.. ye hui na baat..

ab aya na mr. nt so smart mere niche...

maan- vt??????????????

geet- achhaa mn XYZ clg mn hu... vha a jao n mob le jao...

maan- kkk.. i'll cm in 11:30 hrs..

geet... dedh gantaaa!!!!!!!!

nupur- byee god itni der kyuuu... eee jhaali puch usse itni der kisliye???

geet- puch hi rahi hu meri maa...

geet- oyeee.. hellooo... itni time kisliye.. hmmm.. batao.. kahi mere mob se sab kuch nikaal k means baatery , memorycard nikalne ka irada to nahi.. hmm.. batao..

maan- no wayss... i dont need ur thngs

geet- haan toh.. haan toh sochna bhi mat esa kuch karne ki.. jante nahi ho mn kon hu..

maan- mje jaana bhi nahi hai..

geet- nahii tumhe jaldi ana hoga.. varna mn ghar challi jaugi.. vaise bhi mje clg mn dhrna lga k to nahi baithna...

maan- kkk, fine.. mn half hour mn a jauga..

geet- ye hui na baat... to chalo ab a jao

maan- tm phone cut karoge.. tabhi auga..

geet- ismn kya hai... tm cut kardo.. tm bhi na ek dmm jhallee ho...

phone cuts...

nupur- kya hua...

geet- vo a rha hai

simran- bt geet tje es tarah se unse baat nahi karni chahiye thi

mayank- yaa.. u was so rude to him...

khushi- kyuuu... chup karo tm dono.. ek satyawadi harish chander n dusri hmari bholi se bachhi... mata saraswati.. ese hio baat karte hai..

geet- haan.. mne bilkul thik kiya,, hana babaji...hmmm

nupur- vaise kha kya usngeet- vo half hr mn a jayega,,,

after 45 mins... geet was angry..

geet- dekha abhi tk nahi aya...

khushi... eee kahi usne tera mob maar (stole) to nahi kar liya..

simran- chup kr tu... esa kaise ho sakta hai

nupur- kyu.. kyu nai ho sakta...

simran- bcs miss..moraana gg... uska mon bhi geet k paas hai.. samjhi..

geet- haan vaise toh.. ye bhi hai.

khushi- vaah simo... tu hmare sath reh ke hoshiyaar ho rahi hai

simran- shutup... mn pehle se hi hu... m nt like u dumbo...

nupur- vaise bhi ye bechaari dukhi aatma karege kya.. us aru..

khushi- eee dont call him aru

geet- a ha a ha.. jealosyyy... hmmm..

nupur- kyuuu.. mn to aruuu ki bulaugi..

simran- hayee.. aruuu

simran, nupur was running n khushi was trying to cought both of her... mnz dy were chasing..

suddenly geet's phone ring...

geet- dekhaa.. ekhaa..

simran- nahiii.. mne kuch nai dekha.

nupur- kyaaa??????

geet- hunnn... yee bewakuffo... dekho fir phone kar rha hai,... lagta hai sare paise khatm kar k hi dam lega...

geet cuts d call

maan- hmm.. ye kaise ladki hai..

pehle to ise mob chahiye.. n ab phone cut kardiya..

she is jst next to impossible...

so guysss... hws this prt.. plsss do cmnts.. i wait 4 ur cmnts... if any kind of problem.. pls tell me

sab zarur btana ye kaisa tha...

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Originally posted by: simrancuty

prt 1 of my ff-

its morning 6am...

maan wake up daily at this time n warmup n do his marshal arts.. after this.. its 8am he got ready 4 office

dadi- maan kaha hai aap?

maan- g dadi mn abhi aya

dadi- beta aap tyaar ho gaye

maan- g dadi.. mn roz issi waqt tyaar hota hu

dadi- par bete aaj to..

maan- kya dadi.. u knw me.. even u talk abt this...

dadi- bt aap kabi bhi is din ghar kyu nai rehte.. ese ukhde hue kyu rehte ho

maan goes away.. didnt answer dadi

HANDA HOUSE

geet yawning in her bed.. its 8am n she is late 4 clg as always... her mother rano came to wake her up

rano-bete utto

geet- hmmm... sone do..

rano- its too late baccha.. getupp.. she pulls her duvet... n made her sit on bed

geet- hmm... geet eyes close.. n sying goood mrng with her sweet voice

rano- good mrng bachha... chal ab uth ja.. late ho jayega varna.. dekh 9 baj gaye

geet frnshup n gets ready...she wore a babypink clr top with blue jeans... looks flowless... as alwzz...

on dining table.. she cames n sy gm. to her family... n sits to have her breakfast

sudenly phone rings...

geet- hellooo

khushi- oyeee hello ki bachhi .. kaaha hai tu??? bhool gae na.. aj jaldi ana tha...

cuts d call.. have half bread n half glass of juice.. her mom asking her to take care...

geet- byeee

geet doesnt say anythng n rush towards collage..

MAAN REACHED OFFICE ON TIME... his wowest entry.. looking dashing with gogles...tht black car..his personality... d way of walking.. all was omg!!!!!

as he entersd every1 saying gm. to msk.. maan didnt answer any1... jst moving his head..

maan- sasha.. cm to my cabin with mr.sethi's file call adi n pinky too

sasha- yes mk

door knocks... 3 of dm cm in... stands in front of maan..

maan- u knw this project is vry imp... i dont want any mistake.. got th

adi- yess sirrr... (stamering)

maan- pinky i dont want any mistake... prepre all thng 4 todys meeting..

3 of dm- yes sir...

maan strt doing his work...

maan- ab yaha se jane ka kya loge

adi- oo... sorrryyy sirrr...

adi, pinky n sasha goes n strt doing their work...

PRECAP- MAAN GEET KI TAKKAR...




part 1
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precap-

maan- be prepared 4 todys meeting, i dont want any mistake...got tht clear...

geet reached collage..

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geet in clg

mayank, khushi, nupur, simran were standing their n waiting 4 geet... with rolled eyes..

geet- kya hua tm sab ko mje aise kyu dekh rahe ho???

khushi- kya yr... tjhe kabhi bhi kuch yaad nai rehta

nupur- bye god.. bhulakad kahi ki..

simran- ab hm kya karenge.. hmara plan to ab flop..

mayank- yup... our plan is nw flop..

geet- hy guys... chill maaro yr.. itna kyu sochte ho... dont wory.. jab geet ho sath to kya darne ki baat..

nupur- oyeee... darr kaun raha hai...

geet- achha meri maa!!!!!!! tu to bilkul nahi darti... vo to bs tujhe acting karni hoti es liye coackroach dekhte hi bechare mayank k uppar chad jaati ho..

nupur with baby face at mayank..

geet= dont worry hm aj hi us 'T' ko maza chakayenge... tm chinta mat karo

( actually T n geet n other gang r rivals... it was like that... it was geet;s 1st day in clg.. as of ragging she has to slap a girl cmng 1st... unfortunately it wa T who was cmng.. so geet to kisi se darti nai.. so she goes straight n slap her tight... as the answer of thi s T also slap geet... 4m tht day both r enemeis.. always try to put other in trouble)

its 'T'... AS TANNY...

ALL WERE???????????????????????? BT KAISE????????????????

geet- bs dekhte jao mn kya karti hu...

*****************

geet - hy T...

T- hy geet... T got confused with her polite bahaviour towards her...

she replies as hyy geet...

geet- hy u were called by d princi...

T- okk thxx...

when T GOES.. GEET SMILED EVILY... AS IT WAS HER PLAN N IT WORKS...

as T enter's d princi office she saw a man ... a champu boy wearing glasses,, check shirt... as full on losser type n champu.. ( u can imagine as him lik e samrat in mjht when he tease gunjan)

T- may i cm in sir

princi- yes... cm

T- u called me sir...

princi- yes... vts this knownsence... vt m hearing abt u..

T- bt sir...

princi didnt let her to speak...

princi- hw could u tanny.. hw u can play with hearts of an innocent boy... y u told him tht u love him n wants to marry him.. bt ur mother doesnt wants this. tm kaise kisiko ese pareshaan kar sakti ho... uu raat ko msgs karna.. dn phone rings dena.. its so cheap... n bla bla bal...

T- bt sirr.. didnt...

princi- i didnt want this type of u... u r resticated 4m clg 4 a weak... i dont want any explanation 4m u.. u can leave nw..

geet n the gang was listening all this... standing outside princi's room.. with hearing this.. geet showed all her thumbsup.. tht deir plan works n T is resticated..

******************

maan is done with d conference meeting with his cleints.. he got tht project...

after his office work.. he moves towards khurana mansion (KM)

DADI- bete aap a gaye... jaye fresh ho ayea..

maan- g dadi.. n moves straight towards his room

dadi= maan aap aise kyu hai?????? aap hmse apne dil ki baat share kyun nahi karte.. aap pehle jaise maan kyu nahi ban jate... vhai mazak karna.. khelna.. aap use bhul kyu nahi jate????? tht day changed ur life.. (dadi thinking)

after having their dinner dy all went to sleep..

geet also go to sleep...

nxt day...

maan was in hurry.. he has to reach smwhere 4 his new project..

.(GUESS???????? which clg... obvious yaar.. geet ka hi hoga.. ismn sochne vaali konsi baat hai)

geet was chitchatting asusual with her gang.. without seeing here n there..

maan was also moving with adi n discussing abt their projecct.. so he also didnt see who's cmng..

n vt happend?????????????

dhadammm... both... maaneet ki TAKKAR...

their mobile phones slipped 4m their hands...

both r having blackberry mobile with same set...


[/quote]
part 2
nice part...

why dont u continue in this thread itself?
Edited by spvd - 13 years ago

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