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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing update
amarnath is rano's brother
that's mean maaneet r cousins
update soon

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PART 04


Geet was happy to get the job in Khurana constructions & shared this her mother happily.Geet walked to Kaur industries premises happily while watchman asked seeing her happy face,"Kya baat hai aaj toh humaari bitiya bahut khush hai...!!!!"Geet smiled sweetly to him & said happily,"Haan Bhola kaka...aaj mein bahut khush hoon...mujhe job mil gayi hai...!!!!"Which made Bhola frown & said,"Geet beta aapko itni badi company rehthe huye aapko kiss aur ke neeche kaam karne ki kya zaroorat hai???"


Geet said keeping her hand on Bhola's shoulder,"Arre kaka...ab dekhiye aap watchman ki duty karthe hai...toh aap yeh kaam kaise kiya...!!!!"Bhola answered innocently,"Meine training liye hai beta isme...toh mein yeh kaam kar saktha hoon aisa certificate bhi liya hai meine...!!!!"Geet said sweetly,"Ussi tarah mein baahar isiliye kaam kar rahi hoon...taaki mujhe bhi yeh company handle karne mein expert ho jao...sahi haina kaaka???"


Bhola nodded immediately,"Sahi hai bitiya...!!!!"Geet whispered in his ears,"Bhola kaka...aap maa ko mat bataayiyega ki mein yahan aayi hoon...mein unhe surprise dena chaahthi hoon...!!!!"Bhola said smiling,"Theek hai bitiya...!!!!"Geet took the lift & went to the topmost floor.There all the workers were working silently.Some were gossipping & some were having the fun but when Geet came then they started running here & there with panic.


Geet saw the workers running helter skelter & shouted,"Halt...!"The workers stood in front of her scared of her anger.Geet calmed down & said softly,"Aap log aisa kyun behave karthe ho jisse mein gussa ho jao...dekhiye aap log yahan kaam karne keliye aaye hai...naaki gossip karne ke liye nahin...so better go back to ur works now...!!!!"


Then the people ran to do their works or else small hitler is gonna eat them alive.Geet entered her mother's cabin silently & was abt to scare her but Rano said sternly,"Sharaarate karne ki koi zaroorat nahin mere saamne aavo...!!!!"Geet made a baby complaining face but still she hid herself.Rano turned towards the door & saw around her & thought it was only a dream then Geet said coming in front of her & said,"Boo...!!!!"


Rano was scared & clutched her heart & took a deep calming breath while Geet smirked & said,"Kaisa laga...!!!!"Rano held Geet's ear & twisted it & said angrily,"Aisa laga...!!!!"While Geet screamed with pain & said,"Aaahhh...mumma yeh aapki clay nahin hai jo jis tarah twist ho jaaye...chodiye isse...!!!!"Rano told angrily,"Bahut sharaarati ho gayi hai tu...abhi isse aur zor se twist karoongi toh tumhaari sharaarate kam ho jaayegi...!!!!"Geet said painfully,"Kam ho gayi hai ab chodiye isse...!!!!"


Rano left her ear while Geet rubbed her ear trying to soothe the pain.Rano took some files & started reading it intently while Geet complained,"Mumma...mein yahan aapse baat karne ke liye aayi hoon aur aap file pad rahi hai...!!!!"And she snatched it immediately & closed it & kept it on the table.Rano glared at Geet but asked,"Kya kehne aayi ho???"


Geet's lips widened to smile & said,"Mumma mujhe job mil gayi hai...!!!"Rano's glaring eyes turned to the happy smile & her eyes twinkled immediately,"Kya keh rahi ho...sach???"Geet nodded cutely while Rano hugged her tightly & asked,"Kahan???"Geet said proudly,"Khurana Constructions...!!!!"Which made Rano shocked & her past is abt to come in front of her immediately.


Rano's mind vision showed the incidents immediately.Rano was refusing the marraige & Amarnath forcing to marry some one else & when she & Mohinder came & stood in front of her married then Amarnath shouted,"Aap humaare khaandan se bedakhal hogayi ho...aaj se hum aapki Khurana banneka haq cheenta hoon...!!!!"Meanwhile Savitri Devi crying said to Amarnath,"Amar beta...koi faisla sochne se pehle ek baar sochiye ki yeh faisla aapke aur Rano ke zindagi barbaad kardegi bete...humein pata hai ki Rano ne galathi ki hai...lekin humne bhi galathi ke haina...humne Rano se ek baar bhi nahin poocha ki kya woh is shaadi ke liye raazi hai ya nahin...ek baar apna gussa chodkar sochiye bete...!!!!"


Amarnath said angrily,"Nahin maa...ab humein sochne ke liye Rano choda hi kya hai???Chale jaayiye yahan se Rano...aur dobara apne shakal mat dikhaayiye...!!!!"Rano was abt to convince his brother but Mohinder had stopped her & had dragged her from the mansion.On the way Rano had met her mother Savitri devi who had presented the Khaandaani Kangan & has blessed the couple with immense love.


On that time someone shook Rano & it was Geet.Geet asked worriedly,"Kya huva maa..aap kahan kho gayi hai...!!!!"Rano gave a fake smile & nodded no to her while Geet praised the Amarnath so much.He's very lovely & caring & is so protective.Rano's eyes welled up immediately listening to her daughter praise the Amarnath Khurana.But she wiped her tears immediately & gave a fake smile.


Geet saw the time in her watch & wacked her forehead & said,"Mumma mujhe jaana hoga...friends ne mujhe party dena chahthe hai...mere naukri lagne ki khushi mein...aur haan mein late ho jaoungi aaj toh aap mere liye wait mat keejiyega...khaana khake davaayi leke so jaayiyega...theek hai...!!!!"Rano said,"be careful beta...!!!!!"Geet sadi kissing her left cheek,"Mein aapki beti hoon mumma itni asaani se kisiki jaal mein phasne waali nahin hoon...!!!!!"


Rano nodded & Geet went from bidding good bye to her.Rano sat on her chair & turned that side & tears started to pour down from her almond eyes.Rano opened her drawer & took the photo frame which had the photo of Mohinder & said,"Aaj mein aapki kami mehsoos kar rahi hoon...mein akele hi is samaaj ka saamna kiya...lekin mein kabhi nahin socha ki mein akeli nahin hoon...aap naa hokar bhi mere har saas mein base hai aisa socha...lekin aaj mein aapki kami bahut mehsoos kar rahi hoon...kyun chodkar chale gaye???"


On that time she got phone & she receives it & she says angrily,"Kya...unhe kisne chudaaya...!!!!"That man one who phoned her said,"Madamji...Maan Singh Khurana ne...!!!!"Rano was shocked hearing the name & she disconnected the phone & collapsed to the chair & thought,"Na jaane aisa kyun lag raha hai ki koi toofan aane waala hai...!!!!"


Here Maan had bailed Rahul & Rahul's father thanked Maan.Maan had assured him that they're gonna win the case & both Rahul & Mr.Malhotra smirked each other.Becoz if the Delhi's powerful businessman Mr.Amarnath Khurana's son is with them then they won't fear anyone.


Here Geet entered the disc with her friends Meera,Preeto,Romeo & Sonali.Romeo saw the girls who were dancing in short skirts shaking their waist to the rhythm & gawked at them.Geet said wacking his head,"Oi drooling hero...jaake table reserve kar mein drinks leke aati hoon...!!!!"Preeto said seeing the Chicken legs which was suppiled to other table,"Aur haan Geet...mujhe food bhi order karlo...waah kitna sona lag raha hai...dikhne mein itni achchi lag rahi hai toh yeh taste mein ktina achcha hoga...!!!!!"


Romeo said sarcastically,"Haan...is foodie Preeto ko toh sirf khaane ki padi rehthi hai...!!!!"He was still stalking those girls who were dancing shaking there waist.Sonali said,"Tum dono bas karo apne cat fights aur...!!!"she wacked Romeo's head & said,"Jaake table reserve karo ...aur mein aur Geet dono drinks aur khaana order karthe hai...!!!!!"Romeo said glaring at Sonali,"Oye...aap dono ko toh mein maarne ki cheez diktha hoon kya????Har waqt mere sir par marthi ho...!!!!"


Sonali answered him sternly,"Woh issiliye maarthe hai kyunki tumhe toh sapnon ki duniya se baahar laane ka yahi ek tareeka hai...ab jao aur table reserve karo...!!!!"Romeo nodded rubbing his head & went & reserved the table.Geet & Sonali came back & sat in front of Preeto & Romeo.After sometime the waiter kept the dishes in front of them & Preeto's eyes became round.


Preeto complained to Geet,"Yeh kya Geet...yeh sab toh jaanwar khaane ki cheez hain...agar aap koi punjabi khaana order kar lethi...!!!!!"Licking her lips hoefully becoz Geet had ordered green salad,pasta,soup & sugar free chocolate moves.Geet said with amusement,"Preeto...tumne toh kaha tha ki tum diet kar rahi ho...toh ab kya huva...!!!!"Romeo teased,"Haan...aur kisine yeh challenge bhi kiya tha ki mere sir par baithegi yeh...aur mein iski weight resist karoonga lekin yeh kya huva...!!!!!"Sonali also teased,"Haan...tumne toh yeh bhi kaha tha ki tum mere dress mein fit hojaaogi dieting karke...ab kya huva saari mehnat mein paani pher gaya...!!!!!"


Preeto glared at them & started eating the carrot sticks grumpily.Geet,Sonali aur Romeo started laughing for which Preeto glared at them & ate the salad making cute complaining face.They finished their dinner & all the 4 started dancing for the music fanaa.




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On that time Maan & his friends entered the disc & made to stop the music.Every head turned towards Maan Singh Khurana & their friends.Every person who stood went from the disc except Geet & his friends.Maan came forward & stood in front of Geet & asked seeing those hazel brown eyes,"Tumhi Geet Kaur ho...!!!!!"Geet didn't answer and was abt to go dragging her friends but Maan held her hand tightly & pulled towards his hard frame.


Maan said immediately,"Mujhse bachke jaa rahi ho...???"Geet said sternly still struggling,"Nahin...mein toh apne doston ko bhaga rahi thi yahan se...kyunki mein nahin chaahthi ki woh log humaare maamlon mein khaamakha pade...!!!!!"Maan saw those hazel eyes which had the power to hypnotise him...make him act on her accord...those twinkling hazel eyes had the power to MSK to act on his accord.


Maan left her hand & Geet turned to her friends & said,"Aap log baahar wait karna...mein abhi aati hoon...!!!!!!"Maan laughed softly & said to her friends,"Wait karne ki koi zaroorat nahin...kyunki mein aapke friend ko kidnap kar raha hoon...aur jab tak Rahul ka case solve nahin ho jaatha tab tak...tum mere kabze mein rahogi...!!!!!"Romeo laughed loudly & said,"Kidnap...aur isse...bhaisaab aapki dimaag toh theek haina...isse kidnap karna...aur chooha pakadna ek hi baat hai...!!!!!"


Maan didn't understand what Romeo said but after one hour he came to know that she's chooha...!!!!Becoz everytime he held her then she would wiggle out somehow from him & would run away.Maan,Rahul & his friends were exhausted & was breathing heavily with tiredness.Geet came to Maan & stood in front og him but Maan held her hands to catch her but Geet was too fast & she did the tactics which made Geet to wiggle out from the grip.


Geet said breathing heavily,"Aap mujhe kidnap karna chaahthe hai...lekin usse pehle mein aapko kuch dikhaana chaahthi hoon...!!!!!Chaliye mere saath...!!!!!"Maan winked at Rahul & Maan sat in the driver seat but Geet said to him,"I'll drive...it...!!!!!"Maan thought that she's coming with them willingly & he will take her to the farm house & tie her there but this plan was also flopping but he waited patiently.


Rahul saw towards Maan & Maan assured him while Geet took to Maan's dadimaa's hospital & dragged Maan's hands to ward number 130 which was special ward.Geet said,"Dekhiye...!!!!!"There a boy of 10 yr old fast asleep.His leg was fractured & he wore the oxygen mask & was breathinbg peacefully.When Maan saw the scene a pity aroused inside him seeing the boy's condition & thought,"Who's this & why did she took us here????"


Geet answered his confusions,"Yahin ladka hai jisse aapke dost ke bike se takraaya tha...oh am sorry my mistake...aapki dost ki bike isse takraayi thi...baate toh aap badi badi karthe hai Mr.Khurana lekin asliyat dekhne ki koshish keejiye...aapke friend toh wahan se bhaag gaya iss accident karke...darpok bankar...aur ab yeh mujhe kidnap karne ke liye aaya...hai yeh toh khud hi darpok hai aur mujhe...!!!!!Aur yeh aapko bhi saath leke aaya hai...yeh toh hasne waali baat hai...!!!!!"


Maan saw Rahul's face with anger while Rahul bowed his head with shame.Geet said immediately,"Ab agar ab bhi kidnap karna chaahthe hai...toh zaroor kidnap keejiye...am ready...!!!Aur aap yahi soch rahe haina ki meine us din aapko chehra dikhaaye bagay apna naam badal kar kyun mein aapse woh race jeetha kyunki mein aur time waste nahin karna chaahthi thi...isiliye meine aapke paise jeeta aur is bachce ka ilaaj karvaaya...kyunki kahin na kahin aap bhi is jurm ka hisse daar hai...!!!!!Aapne socha ki dilli ki saari property...saara roads aapki hai...aur aapne woh racing competition rakhdi...ek baar bhi nahin socha ki aapke is race se kitni zindagiyaan barbaad ho jaayegi...isiliye mein woh race jeetha aur meine isski ilaaj karvaaya...!!!!!Mr.Khurana...meri principle hai ki guilty should be punished...aur aap bhi isme shaameel hai...!!!!!"😡


She was abt to go but Rahul said immediately,"Maan usse pakdo nahin toh mujhe par jhoot boldegi...!!!!!"Maan shouted at him angrily,"Kis liye usse pakdoon...kyunki tumne galathi kee hai isiliye...ky tumhe ek pal ke liye bhi daya nahin aayi is ladke ko dekh kar...ab mein tumhe supprot nahin kar saktha...ab agar tum is par haath bhi lagaaya then u have to face my wrath...understand...u better understand...!!!!"And he dragged Geet from there but Geet shouted to Rahul,"Oi Rahul ab agar tune inhe nuksaan pahoonchaane ki koshish ki toh tum Geet Kaur ka saamna karna hoga...samjhe...!!!!"😡


Precap-Maan's guilt while Geet's first day in college.



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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Awesome , superb and mind blowing geet make him realize what his friend did with that small boy and maan feels guilty wowowo..love it dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsem update geet showing maan the boy condition geet choohanaan guilty



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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
superb part dear...
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oyeee hoyeee... nw collg dayss... going nice...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update ,loved Geet like a sherni😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome n beautiful update...

loved it...

wow maan geet chuha ko pakad nehi paye...wah bhai wah...i enjoyed it a lot...n laughing like anything...


continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting fr nxt update...

n thank u very much fr dis lovely update n also fr d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tiakashyap



kk 4 maan ki mishty
frm tia..😃😃
😃


aww thanks thats really sweet of you! 😆

Love Mishty
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wow suprbbb
lvd it..
geet make him realz ki uska frnd kitna bda.______
lvd it...

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