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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome
loved it
MSK encounter with sherni
Cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for the pm dear


do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part...maan bichaara..geet chua ko pakadne aaya...aur sach ko saamna kiya..gud..that he supported geet after knowing truth..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 4
nice part...
well at least Maan came to know...
cont soon dear...
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my geet got job in her uncle's office... my maan came to know te real face of rahul...lovely scenes...oopps im nalinisavitha in fb
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved this geet. beautiful update
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PART 05


Maan took Geet from the hospital while the boy's mother who saw this was so happy that her boss with her in this troubled times...while someone was there also who was listening their conversation & he was Amarnath who had listened Geet's words intently & with the particular word 'guilty should be punished' Amarnath was shocked.


Amarnath then remembered that these words were of Rano's only & he started to feel doubt that Geet's Rano's daughter.Amarnath was desperate to meet Geet's mother very much.Maan took Geet to his car & Geet gave the keys to him & was abt to go but Maan held her hand which was soft & pulled towards here & glared at her angrily.


Maan said glaring at her,"Kahan jaa rahi ho?????"Geet showed the attitude & said,"Aapse matlab??????"Geet tried to free her from his grip but he gripped her tightly.Maan said,"Chalo mein tumhe drop kardetha hoon...!!!!!!!"Geet said immediately,"Koi zaroorat nahin...mein khud hi chali jaaoongi...aur waise bhi aap toh mujhe kidnap karna chaahthe the na...kya pata aap apna iraada na badli ho aur mujhe jhoot bol kar mujhe kahin kidnap karaakar uthaa kar le jaana chaahthe hai??????"


Maan said softly,"Mein tumhe kidnap nahin kar raha hoon...mein tumhe us dico mein chodna chaahtha hoon...tumhaare doston ke paas...!!!!!!!"Geet smirked & said,"Tab toh MSK ne haar maanli...mujhe nahin lagata ki MSK itni asaani se haar maanega!!!!!!!!"Maan glared at her & scooped her up in his strong arms which made Geet shocked with his gesture & made her to sit inside the car.


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Never in her lifetime any man had the guts to touch her like this but this man...even in presence of her cousin brother Tejinder Singh people would scared to touch her...but he didn't say anything & lifted her without her permission.Now she noticed Maan intently...those chocolate brown eyes...long white nose...exact M shaped pink lips...Geet thought a current run down her spine feeling his touch.


Maan made her sit inside the front seat & pulled the seat belt immediately & went to driver's seat & sat there.But Geet still was seeing his stature intently

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Geet saw his bulging six packs abs...his bulging chest which was slightly exposed as he didn't buttoned his first two buttons.He had wore tight shirt which made his body waist to be shaped due to tight shirt.Geet couldn't help noticing those long fingers which had caressed the steering wheel.


Maan didn't had any idea that Geet was observing him & started the car...He adjusted the rear view mirror & drove towards the car.Here Geet's friends were worried not seeing Geet there.When Maan's car came there then Meera,Preeto & Romeo saw Geet getting down from Maan's car & ran towards her.


(My apologies guys...that i had previously used Sonali instead of Meera...but Meera is a positive character & Sonali is a negative character...she first falls for Maan & ends up marrying Dev who loves her truly but Sonali is a greedy girl for money who create problems to Maan & his family.)


Maan dropped her & drove his car immediately from there to avoid their taunt.Geet understood this as she was observing Maan intently in the drive.Maan's eyes was filled with guilt becoz of taking a wrong decision.Meera asked with concern,"Geet...tu theek haina??????"Geet nodded & explained what happened in the hospital.


Meera,Preeto & Romeo were shocked to hear what happened in hospital.Then Meera noticed Geet who was a bit lost in thought abt Maan who had the guilty eyes.Geet's heart was a bit becoming soft to towards him after their meeting like this continuously.Maan on other hand was feeling guilty...he was angry on himself becoz of not recognising his mistake.


Maan drove to the KM & went straight to his gym wearing his tracks & vests.


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Maan exercised aggressively broke the ice everything he did but Geet's words were echoing in his ears.Maan couldn't tolerate his guilt & he punished himself very much.When his anger subsided then he felt peace & calm & went out of gym but he had punished himself so much that his body was scratched & bruised & blood was oozing out from the scratches.


Geet didn't knew abt this & slept peacefully.Next morning Geet & Maan got ready & went to the college.Geet was happy that it was her first day of college.Geet walked inside the premises of her college where all the students were immersed in their own world.Geet had wore the pink color patiala & walked inside the college feeling nervous.But someone was observing her intently.


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It was Rahul who glared a her intently & then he thought of ragging her.But before that he saw a girl who was walking towards the building nervously.Rahul stopped her & said to kiss her on his lips which Geet noticed.The girl refused him then he gave two choices that she have to convince that girl showing towards Geet to kiss him on his lips or else she have to kiss him.


That girl came to Geet & explained the situation to her.That girl pleaded Geet to save her from Rahul.Geet came to Rahul and asked,"Toh mein tumhe kiss karna hai...nahin toh tum is ladki ko nahin chodoge...right??????"Rahul nodded with attitude then Geet had hid something & showed it to Rahul.It was cowdung & Rahul didn't understand what Geet was abt to do.


Before Rahul could sense...Geet smeared it to her lips immediately & said,"Ab mujhe kiss karo...!!!!!!!"Rahul saw her with puzzle & backed off.Geet cleaned her lips immediately & teased,"Kyun...bada hi shock tha mujhe kiss karne ka toh karo kiss...kya huva...tum khud hi keechad mein khade ho aur doosron ko bhi apne keechad mein dakhelna chaahthe ho??????"Rahul didn't say anything & stood there completely blank seeing her sherni avatar.


Geet smirked at baffled Rahul & said to that girl,"Ab tumhe kisise darne ki koi zaroorat nahin...agar yeh aadmi tumhe pareshan kare toh mujhe yaad kar lena...yeh Geet Kaur tumhaare liye haazir ho jaayegi...!!!!!!!"That girl nodded politely & thanked Geet & went from there.Geet smiled at Rahul sarcastically & said,"Rahul behtar hai ki tum apne harkato se baaz aavo...nahin toh bahut pachtaavoge...!!!!!!!"


Precap-Tiff between Maaneet once again becoz of Sonali...😡




Previous Part 04-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76?pn=17



Next Part 06-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76?pn=25
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsem update love the kiss cowdung scene
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh my maan is in guilty and punishing himself..always he will do tis for others sins he will punish himself... my sherni geet gav rahul a nice nosecut.. i loved it...

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