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Guys I've started the new FF which will be add on with my other FF's(BANNER'S CREDIT GOES TO MAANKIMISHTY)







Prologue


"Paritraanaya saadhunaam vinaashaya cha dushkritaam...dharma samsthapanaarthaaya sambhavaami yuge yuge...sambhavaami yuge yuge...sambhavaami yuge yuge...!"This was the last words which came from the lips...Lips...it was baby pink rosy lips which had curved into the smile.This woman has hazel brown eyes,long white nose,baby pink rosy lips,she had the innocent eyes & her face expressed the eagerness of some incident which is gonna happen in her life today.Her name was Mrs.Geet Maan Singh Khurana.She wore sindhoor in her forehead & mangalsutra around her neck.She got up closing the book of Bhagavad gita which she was reading a moment ago & touched the book from her eyes & closed her eyes & prayed a quick prayer to babaji.On that time a man came & stood in front of her cell.The man who was a jailer said politely,"Mrs.Khurana...aapka samay aagaya hai...!Kya aapko koi aakhri khwaish hai jo mein poora kar doon...!"


Geet smiled sweetly to jailer & said,"Meri saari khwaish toh poori ho gayi...ab mujhe koi aakhri khwaish nahin hai...khushi is baat ka hai ki mein suhaagan mar rahi hoon...lekin ek request hai...!"Jailor saw him eagerly while Geet continued,"Mein chaahthi hoon ki mere phasi ke waqt Maan mere saamne naa rahe...nahin toh mera man vichalit ho jaayega...!"Jailor nodded & Geet walked out of her cell with him.Geet walked towards the room where the criminals will be hanged.




Geet went & stood in front of the rope which was abt to be put around her neck.Jailor couldn't see the scene becoz he thought her as his daughter but she was dying is a big turmoil inside him.But he can't do becoz he's doing his duty.Jailor & Lawyer was there.The man one who hangs the criminal saw jailor for signal.The jailor saw the time & nodded then he closed Geet's face with black cloth & her hands were tied back.The rope was put around her neck & jailor saw the time & was abt to give instruction to turn the lever but on that time someone from behind said..."Ruko...!"




SO GUYS HOW DID U LIKE MY PROLOGUE...PLS GIVE ME UR OPINION THAT CAN I CONTINUE THE FF OR NOT



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Posted: 13 years ago
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shocking, geet ko phasi?? continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrax for new & Shocking ff.

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😲 🤢...
Geet ko phansi...

very interesting and rare concept...

please continue...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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geet phasi ye kya ho raha hai



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INDEX

LINK TO MY OTHER FF'S--------->https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2990044/my-works-on-maaneet-updated-the-note-on-pg-15


PART 01-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76?pn=5

PART 02-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76?pn=9

PART 03-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76?pn=13

PART 04-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76?pn=17

PART 05-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76?pn=21

PART 06-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76?pn=25

TEASER-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76?pn=27

PART 07-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76?pn=28

PART 08-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76?pn=32

PART 09-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76?pn=36

PART 10A-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76

PART 10B-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76

PART 11-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76

PART 12-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76

TEASER 02-https://www.facebook.com/notes/rudrapatna-sriranjini/karz-updated-teaser/142651605872065

PART 13-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76

TEASER 01A-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76

PART 14,15-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76

PART 16-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76

TEASER-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76

PART 17A,B-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76

PART 18-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH


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Geet Handa/Geet Maan Singh Khurana

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Maan Singh Khurana


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Aditya Srivastav


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Savithri Devi


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Tejinder Singh Kaur[Teji]


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Lukwinder Singh Kaur[Lucky]


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Brij Handa

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Meera


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Dev Singh Khurana


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Sonali


Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new ff...
loved the concept...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG😲 geet beeing hanged😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg geet nd...🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢
nd where is maan.😕😕😕

intrstng..
cont soonn

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