KARZ-UPDATED PT 18 PG 76 - Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 12
nice part...
pathetic Sasha...
cont soon dear...
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wow lovely update dear...i felt like two family business, brother and sister are joining together...te way geet gav te presentation, wat to do, in her blood it is running after she is too khurana blood...im waiting to see wen amarnath and rano face to face...geet is jealous oh god...now trip ,..im waiting dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
love Geet's angry glare to the staffs..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm updt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
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Sasha accept that u can't win
Cont soon
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Nice update...loved it ..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago



PART 13


Sasha came to know that Geet has joined KC to get some experience & she had told abt this to Amarnath sir during her interview & was fuming with anger & a strange fear inside the mind.But still Sasha is hell bent to kick Get fm KC company unaware of her power which she possess inside her.


Firstly Sasha thot of insulting Geet in front of everyone & was searching for the oppurtunity.Meanwhile Maan was seeing Geet everywhere now as his heart was craving for her one presence & Geet was also feeling like him but she was trying her best to control her feelings in front of him.


Maan didn't know that Geet also feeling the same as him & tried to talk to her alone to confess his feelings.But Geet was a big duffer that she didn't understand Maan's intentions & misunderstood him.Maan asked,"Geet...tumne kabhi kisi se pyaar kiya hai???"Geet was apprehensive & saw those chocolate brown eyes intently before answering him.


Geet saw a strange thirst & eagerness in his face & said rudely,"Nahin sir...aur waise bhi mujhe in faaltu cheezon ke liye mere paas time nahin hai...!!!"Maan was disappointed becoz of her answer & his eyes showed a strange pain.


Geet observed this & thot,"Kaisa sa banda hai abhi mujhe aise ghoor rahe the jaise woh mujhe kachcha khaa jaayega...jab meine unki sawaal ka jawaab dediya...tab mujhe dard bhar aankhon se dekh rahe hai..shaayad woh mujhe phasaaneki koshish kar rahe hai isiliye aise dekh rahe hai...!!!"


Geet shrugged off her thots but a strange pang she felt inside her heart seeing the painful eyes of MSK but she once again shrugged it off & concentrated on her work.Maan thot cursing her,"Mein bhi kisse umeed rakh raha hoon...yeh toh no. 1 phoolan devi hai..isse pyaar ka shabd ka arth pata hai ye nahin pata nahin...!!!!"


Maan's mood changed to chirpy to dull & sat seeing the file trying to concentrate on his work but couldn't & he turned his chair to his back & tried to control his pain.After sometime Geet's anklets jingled when she moved her legs for which Maan felt peace hearing those jingling anklets.


Maan thot,"Na jaane tum mere liye ek ajeeb si patience laadethi ho apne harkato se...!!!"Maan smiled at his thot & he turned towards her & gave a killing smile to her & concentrated on his work immediately.


Geet was apprehensive seeing his killer smile & she lost in his smile & both eye locked for a brief moment.They broke apart immediately & turned that side.Geet lowered her eyes with shy seeing his chocolate brown eyes which were showing volumes of emotions & she was drowned in his eyes.Maan also felt too but he controlled himself immediately & saw Geet whose cheeks had turned slight pink.


Maan saw those pink cheeks & he had urge to bite those cheeks but resisted.Geet saw him once again & she unknowingly shied immediately for which Maan gave a naughty smile.


Geet thot,"Babaji...yeh aise smile dekear mujhe phasa denge...kyun nahin sochte ki inki yeh smile mere man mein bhari toofan utaa dethi hai...!!!"She was pouting cutely to babaji seeing upwards angrily.Maan saw her pouting & unknowingly a smile crept immediately on his M shaped lips & Geet couldn't help herself admiring that killer smile for she was always become fida.


Geet thot,"Hayee...kitni sweet smile hai...!!!"Geet widened her eyes with shock & thot,"Oye...tu kisse admire kar rahi hai..dekh tu yeh sab nautanki chod...aur kaam pe dhyaan de..theek hai...!!!!!"


Geet saw his killer smile once again but she lowered her eye lashes & saw down immediately.Maan couldn't help himself admiring her silent antics which was making her look even more beautiful & edible to eat her alive.


Maan thot,"Oye choona bhi mat nahin toh no. 1 phoolan devi manjeeyegi..aur tumhaare tai chi skills iske saamne tai tai fish ho jaayega...!!!Lekin tu usse admire toh karsaktha haina...!!!"For which his mind was so happy that he checked her secretly.


On that time Sasha knocked the door & Maan said sternly,"Come in...!!!!"Sasha entered & saw geet there sitting luking the file.Sasha saw that she hd almost completed her file & was fuming with anger.Maan asked sternly,"Kuch kaam tha Sasha???"Sasha said politely,"MK mujhe Gurgaon waali project file ki accounts file chaahiye jo Geet complete kar rahi hai abhi tak...!!!!"


Geet said immediately,"Ho gayi madam...bad do secs deejiye ek baar dekhloongi...!!"Sasha was apprehensive & asked,"Abhi toh meine dekha hai ki tum complete kar rahi thi jaldi ho gayi kaise???"Geet smiled,"Madam...is project ki budget bahut hi saral hai isiliye bahut jaldi ho gayi...!!!!"Geet gave the file to sasha & said,"Leejiye madam..aapki file...!!!!!"


Sasha took it & examined it & saw it was perfect & she didn't like that Geet is perfect in all the ways & said,"Mere saath aavo...mujhe is project ki construction file bhi theek thak chaahiye...!!!"Geet nodded poiltely,"Jee madam...!!!!!!"But Maan stopped them & said,"Sasha us file ko to tumhe dee gayi thi na..theek karne ke liye..toh woh Geet ko kyun de rahi ho????"


Sasha was abt to explain but Maan shouted immediately,"Kitni baar kaha hai ki apna kaam doosron ko mat diya karo...!!!"Sasha & Geet shivered seeing his anger which made Maan bothered as Geet glared at him with her almiond eyes becoz of his shout.


Sasha mumbled sorry to him & went outside while Geet was abt to go but Maan snapped immediately,"Tum kahin nahin jaa rahi ho,,,,yahan baithkar dictation likho meri...!!!"Geet was apprehensive seeing the bossiness which was on her & she gave a deadly glare but in front of his glare she wasn't a match.Geet saw his glare & shied & cursed inside her mind to babaji,"Yeh aap kya kar rahe mere saath babaji...mein inhe naa keh nahin sakthi...par kyun aap mere man ko itna piglaa raeh ho...????"


Maan saw her face which was seeing upwards & was pouting & a naughty smile crept on his M shaped lips.Next morning the trip to Gujarat was announced and the money was collected for the trip.Geet also gave her money for the trip & Maan who always showed attitude not to participate in these trips gave the money.Rahul was disappointed seeing Maan joining the trip becoz he thot that he'll harm Geet in absence of Maan as these days Maan was walking behind Geet like a bodyguard.


Sonali was fuming in anger seeing Maan change & that too for Geet becoz she hadn't forgotten the insult fm Geet in freshers party.Sonali tried to talk Maan but Maan would leave her halfway giving deadly glare & would join Geet's group immediately.Sonali was scared in freshers party seeing Geet's anger as Geet had squeezed her neck to death for insulting her mother.So Geet would see Maan's plight & would save him Sonali giving a deadly glare to her.


So trip commencing day came & everyone got ready at 4am loading their luggages.Maan came with driver & driver loaded his luggage to the bus & went fm there.Maan was searching Geet & saw in the corner where she was chatting with their group laughing chirpily.


A smile crept on his M shaped lips seeing Geet's laughter & went to them to wish them but he halfway heard Rahul's convo with their gang.Rahul sadi seeing towards Geet fm his corner os his eyes,"Is Geet toh is trip mein sabak sikhaakar rahoonga dekhna!!!"


Sonali nodded to his plan & Maan didn't understood his plan as he didn't say anything to them but Maan decided that he'll protect Geet now.Maan thot,"Tumhaara koi bhi plan kaamyaab nahin hoga Rahul...kyunki Geet ke paas MSK hai...jab tak mein zinda hoon tum usse kuch bhi nahin karsakthe...!!!!"


Maan's joined Geet's gang & talked to them.At 6am the bus started to drive & left the Delhi border to enter Gujarat border.When they reached Gujarat then it was night so they had booked a big dormitory for boys & girls & they went to sleep with the respective rooms.


Maan was worried for Geet as Rahul was planning something to harm Geet & in this Sonali was also there.Maan wanted to see Geet now only but he can't enter girls dormitory so he thot of some plan & he sent SMS to Sonali.


Sonali saw Maan's message & was happy becoz she read that Maan had forgiven her & want to see her in dormitory.Sonali thot of some plan & started scaring girls that someone was saying that this dormitory contains bhoot.All the girls except Geet's gang were scared & ran to boys dormitory with fear.


Sonali tried to scare Geet's gang but she was caught & she was cursed by lecturers & students.Meanwhile Maan was the one who caught Sonali in front of the students making the lecturers to trust him.Man played double game & saved Sonali & gained entry to the girls dormitory.


All the girls started drooling over seeing the handsome Maan while Geet was hell irritated seeing the girls drooling over her Maan.Maan was enjoying her helplessness as she wasn't accepting the feeling of love to him.


Maan took off his shirt & sat in front of the fire giving access to his exposed muscles for which Geet gulped dwon the saliva.Hayee all the girls drooled over his muscles & Sonali was completely pissed off seeing his antics as he was showing his abs to those girls.


But Maan's eyes never left Geet.After sometime everyone slept in front of fire peacefully and Geet slept on Romeo's shoulder peacefully.Maan's mind bothered seeing her head on Romeo's shoulder which has the right only for him.


Maan thot of killing Romeo the then but h saw that she was disturbed in sleep as her head was slipping again & again fm Romeo's shoulder.Maan got up & sat beside her & made her sleep on his shoulder.When she felt Maan's warmth then she felt that this shoulder is for her only...meant & made for her only & she kept her fingers on Maan's right chest & nuzzled insdie his neck peacefully.Maan felt Geet's lips rub against his neck & he felt his skin burn with desire.


Maan controlled his urges while Geet slept peacefully on his shoulder silently.Sonali who was waiting for everyone to sleep so that she can chat with Maan saw the scene & fumed with anger & slept turning that side angrily.Sonali then realised that Maan gained the entry to see Geet taking her help & she cursed herself of trusting Maan.


Precap-Teaser




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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
read all in one go
nice concept
waiting for the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb maan love geet and geet hiding her feelings



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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED IT
Maan is so hayyeee !

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