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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#781

Hmmm ... Prelude to a dream... mesmerising... I felt so good on reading it, it just left me dazed( actually not getting a better word) It just left me craving for more. Can't put in words what or to say how brillantly you've perceived the whole concept of their Promise to walk together in their silent gestures & worded feelings... so intimate yet so not confining... just gives them the freedom to express & live the moments yet not forcing to abide...

His interpretation of geeting the shirt as her gift ...but one would have been your gift... yes indeed makes her feel so much at ease yet so special.

The almost hug between the two cause of the dog incident... was sooothing & such a reassurance to her.

I had been in love with the earlier Central park version, & now too the whole scene description was awesome, the interpaly of words, the description of the surroundings was such beautiful I could so much so picturise it... I'm again in love with the whole scene.

... you face your fears... there are no shortcuts.. - yup very true, it is such a good way of his to be there for her yet making her understand that finally its she herself who can actually help herself. Mostly unconsciously training her for some future issues that she may have to face. Afterall he's been dealing with his own set since long, & now unknowingly she's helped him out of it.

Was he mentioning Naini while talking about the pets being there at his place?

The whole leading-following, being ahead-left trailing, the chocolate strain just near his heart, the dramatics involved in the hand holding & fingers slipping away... the wholeness in it... beautiful.

Loved it ...

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#782

Just read the read the part 23... dream to end all dreams... for now I'm just speechless.

Can't just word my thoughts now.

How do you manage to each time just give a bang on part, beautiful poetry of feelings...

will comment more on this one when I get few words to express myself & my perceptions on it...

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MaankigopiMadhu

@MaankigopiMadhu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#783

Wonderful update ;] About time this 'Dev' comes into picture .. Awww poor Geet ❤️ Greedy person that I am ... cannot wait for your next update .. hehehehehehehehehe ;] 😉😆

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nayyariqbal

@nayyariqbal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#784

Simply mind blowing! loved this version of CP picnic than the previous one (no offence).

Maan is definitely conscious of his gestures/touches - while Geet's are more done subconsciously.

He is giving it away no doubt but is also gauging her feelings.

None the less - it is very interesting to see a naive Geet and a conditioned Maan!!

Definitely looking forward to their future conversations at the window seating - especially the charms in Pandora's bracelet.

Great going... keep it up!

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UNICORN75

@UNICORN75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#785

Hasini,now I clearly understand as why you started rewriting NYT.This version has so much depth that the earlier version looked much rushed through especially the earlier chapters.NYT was always my favourite FF.Read it atleast 4 times.😃😃

Geet's reaction to the erotic dream is so understandable , a desperate reach to connect to her husband .

Wished I had saved NYT, feel the need to read furthur

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Ubiquitos

@Ubiquitos

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Posted: 13 years ago

#786

Part 23 made Geet's feelings clear with d song nd all later on while part 22 was beautiful and flowing, loved atmosphere there !

Wonder what Geet will do now?

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Deepa

@spvd

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#787

part 23
nice part...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#788

wow amazing thank you for pm

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Saams

@Saams

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#789

Thanx Hasini 🤗 I had gone back to read the old NY Times and found it removed.
I was wondering how I am gonna get to read it again.
well,here you are rewriting it. Thank you so much dear😳

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#790

Hummm, hot chocolate was not very different from the earlier story... But I remember that their drove in the AM last time. This time, they just got to see it... this was somehow more realistic.

Let me be honest... I read a lot of comments about the "Tide" she gifted and after having read "Red wine", I knew what to expect. But there was this tinge of anxiety because I thought she had gifted him only a Tide... I am glad she got him the dream catcher as well... If I try and restrict myself to just this part, I can also tell you that i was happy with her comfort level with him... she was ok with having spilt wine on him... so what, really... He has never been and will never be just her boss... and her subconscious acceptance of it brought a smile on my face.

Well, in today's day and age, I would also treasure anyone writing me a handwritten note... really. I cannot even remember the last time when I got one... so, I understand why Maan would treasure it.. ROFL... But, it was a very cute note. When I read the "I don't know why I got you the dream catcher" or the "bad dreams" of his that she referred to, even I cringed my forehead. I had to think back to see if he had disclosed anything at all to indicate that he has had "bad dreams". I could not think of anything... so she even knows him intuitively... great.

I agree with a few people who said that they were glad that Maan made plans to go to central park. I think that was something that had me disturbed in the last story. Maan acting this way is alright, but knowing that Geet is married, I would find it odd if Daadima tried to hook them up. And I absolutely enjoyed their time in central park.

Humm... I am hoping Maan has such dreams too... I think that Maan might not, because he is comfortable with his feelings for her. She is trying to fight it, and that makes it more difficult for her. I can completely understand why she had to call Dev at that instant...

U know, I have to accept that I can read this story just on Maan and Geet, and also because I have an inherent hatred for that character Dev (I honestly don't know why :P). I cannot imagine me supporting Geet's thoughts on a man different than her husband in anyone else's case. I would be sympathizing with the husband of such a character... and here I am all support for Geet and her dreams about Maan... The last bit if more for my consolation that I am not a bad person... ROFL. Don't get me wrong, I am no saint... I am married and can appreciate another cute man if I see one, but I will hope that I am never in the shoes that the character Geet is in at the moment.

So, forgetting all that, I absolutely loved all the parts...