So I have read part 20 ... Penseive 3... just leaves me so mesmerised it was so beautiful ( I know I'm using the same word quite often, but just can't help it...) It had such smooth flowing feelings, gestures, words... loved it.
I really loved all the parts in the previous version whenever the window seating was mentioned, cause each time it lead the couple to discover & bond themselves in a more stronger & better way, and this time too you've mentioned its appearance which will surely lead to those parts where it will have so much importance.
...There was pressure of eagerness bursting through his veins... Lord! When was the last time nyone had given him a hand written letter? - How far from human bonding has he kept himself since long that even such moments has become a rarity for him. So much of self-isolation from emotions ... but yet he has her sudden appearance in life, whose certainly stirring these hidden/closely secured emotions in him ... as in I don't know how to put it... m ay be some kind of light/ force guiding him out of his dark nightmares...
A Tide packet... hahaha 😆 What should I say only this impulsive Geet could have done it. She just bought it in the spur of the moment...
... Don't look for motive behind my everydoing. You won't find one... - This sounds so simple & straight sentence, yet it manages to hit the message it was trying to convey to him.
The white dream catcher is still there loved it...
The whole letter was priceless, ...it was in a way giving him a small part of herslf in written form as it contained her joy, bubbliness, enthusiasm, hope for him also to try & feel the Hot Chocolate feeling
The bonding that they seem to share looks so common among friends yet its more than it, theres some kind of intimacy in it at a all together different level. If you go to see theres nothing that they know much about each others life they are just knowing each other which is a long journey yet they tend to see through each other that words seem to have no place to convey their needs & thoughts, they speak in a way to just fill in the gaps of mutual understanding
... Again don't ask me why, because I don't have an answer... 👏👏
His talk with his Daadi & the hug ... was so emotional yet so sweet. Sometimes it so necessary to do something so simple & small stuffs to experience calmness & peace...
What I loved the most is that he's taking those needed steps to feel what she was trying to convey through her concept of Hot Chocolate... showing that she's already become a very imporatnt part of his life, whose views can lead him to change his routines as well as views towards life...
Sorry for the length just got carried away with the part... but just loved it
1 Done 2 to go...
Edited by Onir - 13 years ago
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