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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element


@bold font: Is that a good thing or a bad thing? But I thought he gave himself away in so many ways at Central Park...These details that Geet has observed are all to his credit, won't you say?

Innocent: How so? Is that from the dog story at the end ?😆

So, the part where she leaves chocolate smears on his shirt wasn't there in the previous part. I had to put that in as a marker, so that she could place him in the dream.

😆 Maan is an open and shut case...He only does such stuff, doesn't have to dream of it.


Most definitely a good thing 😉 that's true, but I don't know, I guess I just like to see it more direct from Maan, like in Pensieve II where his feelings are more shown. That makes no sense seeing as it's a Geet POV update, I know 😆

The dog story and the way she behaves around him, she always comes across as gentle, even though a storm is brewing inside her. I guess it's just her characterisation :)

Is the last line a teaser for what's to come... if Maan is more of an action-taker & not a dreamer... 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
first of all tfd pm...
i have read it till 4 parts...
& will be reading..more...as now a days i am quite busy...
& i have sent u buddy req. do accept me...
t.c.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh wow...😊 Yesreday when I logged out I was so happy after reading the Hot Chocolate update, & toady as I logged in I see that you've updated 3 parts already... yipee me happy.Your on a roll must say... anyways now I'm off to read the updates & will surely comment as soon as possible...
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Posted: 13 years ago

In the dimming light of nightfall, her gaze traveled down his jaw, the tip of her finger reveling in the prick of his raw stubble and as she moved below his neck to the warmth of his chest, placing her palm there to feel the rise and fall of his breathing, he encased her hand into his and raised it to give a full kiss to the inside of her palm that had instilled a revolting restlessness in his eyes; the heat of his mouth searing its way into her flesh.
whoa!!! wat was dat!???

Thus their fingers came to lace, tangled from an urging and a wanting rose everywhere their bodies touched. Her back flexed and she came to fully rest on him, when she felt something cold touch the skin by her shoulder. Her gaze shifted to his chest and there it was...a gooey smear of chocolate dripping onto her...
vaaammmooo!!!!!😳😳...is it you hasini??? phew!!! ahem ahem...dis part ...simply outstanding ( y dint u include dis in my old newyork times??? huh...) gal dis is ..im speechless...ufff and the song...ahaaa...😳...ur da nly person in my life who make me blush(ofcourse ur my nora :D )
chocolate???? uff hot chocolate is done..nw here we go wid chocolate dripping
i mean seriously..dats really a yuuummmyyy update!!! 😳😊
KUDOS to U!!!! \m/
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update
so beautiful
thanx for the pm dear
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hummm. Even I don't understand why people don't leave behind a comment. I normally do... and even if I cannot sometime, I go back to that thread later and leave a note... Anyone who has the time to read a part most certainly should and will have the time to leave behind a couple of lines... but still, people fail to do so... I don;t know what to say to you H. I am absolutely loving the story and I am sure so are many others. I don't know about others, but I will also leave you comments for every bit that I read...</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Comments for all 4 of the last parts early tomorrow morning. Thanks H. Good night.</font>



[SIZE=2]I absolutely agree wid u.
Writers need.encouragement in
Form of comments. Other wise
How will they know that their work is
Worth the time given.
Readers shud comment. All it takes
Is 4-5 lines to support the writer n
They feel appreciated. /SIZE]
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Posted: 13 years ago
"you face your fears...'

so simply put up by him


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Posted: 13 years ago
Yay ! Four new parts up !!
Will be back after I finish reading them :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
So I have read part 20 ... Penseive 3... just leaves me so mesmerised it was so beautiful ( I know I'm using the same word quite often, but just can't help it...) It had such smooth flowing feelings, gestures, words... loved it.
I really loved all the parts in the previous version whenever the window seating was mentioned, cause each time it lead the couple to discover & bond themselves in a more stronger & better way, and this time too you've mentioned its appearance which will surely lead to those parts where it will have so much importance.
...There was pressure of eagerness bursting through his veins... Lord! When was the last time nyone had given him a hand written letter? - How far from human bonding has he kept himself since long that even such moments has become a rarity for him. So much of self-isolation from emotions ... but yet he has her sudden appearance in life, whose certainly stirring these hidden/closely secured emotions in him ... as in I don't know how to put it... m ay be some kind of light/ force guiding him out of his dark nightmares...
A Tide packet... hahaha 😆 What should I say only this impulsive Geet could have done it. She just bought it in the spur of the moment...
... Don't look for motive behind my everydoing. You won't find one... - This sounds so simple & straight sentence, yet it manages to hit the message it was trying to convey to him.
The white dream catcher is still there loved it...
The whole letter was priceless, ...it was in a way giving him a small part of herslf in written form as it contained her joy, bubbliness, enthusiasm, hope for him also to try & feel the Hot Chocolate feeling
The bonding that they seem to share looks so common among friends yet its more than it, theres some kind of intimacy in it at a all together different level. If you go to see theres nothing that they know much about each others life they are just knowing each other which is a long journey yet they tend to see through each other that words seem to have no place to convey their needs & thoughts, they speak in a way to just fill in the gaps of mutual understanding
... Again don't ask me why, because I don't have an answer... 👏👏
His talk with his Daadi & the hug ... was so emotional yet so sweet. Sometimes it so necessary to do something so simple & small stuffs to experience calmness & peace...
What I loved the most is that he's taking those needed steps to feel what she was trying to convey through her concept of Hot Chocolate... showing that she's already become a very imporatnt part of his life, whose views can lead him to change his routines as well as views towards life...
Sorry for the length just got carried away with the part... but just loved it
1 Done 2 to go...
Edited by Onir - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
That's just the irony of this thread - or should I say my threads in general...when there are those who would'nt pen down one word and then there are others who apologize for doing so.

There is a story being told in all your comments. I just wish that more people realize that and tell tales of this story in your own words too.

For all those who put in that time and effort please take a bow...

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