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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: crazydream

Seriously Gifting Tide. Only our Geet can do dat.

A hug frm Dadima... I was reminded of Jadu ki
Jhappi. Lol. I knw its a bad comparison.

I m not finding suitable words as I m seriously
Not gud at it.

Geet disclosing her fear n Maan trying to remove
It. I think the story of the dog was new addition.

Yup! Perhaps only Geet could bring herself to do it...

😆 Not at all. It was just his own way of showing how she has him wound around her finger. He doesn't even have to think doing what she'd told him just once in the store...

Nah! All is good and you are doing a good job at it.

Yeah! that was needed given that it leads to the final update and all..

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Originally posted by: walkintomylifex

Part 22: I love how mellow Maan has suddenly become, as if Geet's presence brings a calmer aura around him. But why is Maan feigning such a chilled out attitude around her, we already know he's falling for her & falling hard ;)
I love the way Geet's falling in love! That sounds so silly but every little attention to detail regarding him is embedding its way into her soul. She's so delicate around him because he's always bringing her on edge, she just sounds so innocent.

chocolate on his shoulder, chocolate on her shoulder in her dream... I see what you did there H 😉

Will we get a similar dream to end all dreams from Maan's side? 😉

@bold font: Is that a good thing or a bad thing? But I thought he gave himself away in so many ways at Central Park...These details that Geet has observed are all to his credit, won't you say?

Innocent: How so? Is that from the dog story at the end ?😆

So, the part where she leaves chocolate smears on his shirt wasn't there in the previous part. I had to put that in as a marker, so that she could place him in the dream.

😆 Maan is an open and shut case...He only does such stuff, doesn't have to dream of it.

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What coincidence... as I was reading the most recent update, I found the need to call my husband too... and he is not answering his phone as well. Maan, stop doing this to all of us married women... 😉

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Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun
What coincidence... as I was reading the most recent update, I found the need to call my husband too... and he is not answering his phone as well. Maan, stop doing this to all of us married women... 😉

Read it in the order, Priti :)

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Originally posted by: 6th.Element

Is that a typo?

Haha H. Nope. I meant I clicked the "Like" button anyway...

I am going to catch up on the updates now and will leave my comments tomorrow morning from work... Can U beat this H, I catch up on NYT first thing from work every morning... I find that it makes my days better 😉

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Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun
Can U beat this H, I catch up on NYT first thing from work every morning... I find that it makes my days better 😉

Of course, I can...I can't count the many Sunday night forgotten dinners...

😊 Good, but not so good for me until someone drops a comment on the thread.

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Hummm. Even I don't understand why people don't leave behind a comment. I normally do... and even if I cannot sometime, I go back to that thread later and leave a note... Anyone who has the time to read a part most certainly should and will have the time to leave behind a couple of lines... but still, people fail to do so... I don;t know what to say to you H. I am absolutely loving the story and I am sure so are many others. I don't know about others, but I will also leave you comments for every bit that I read...

Comments for all 4 of the last parts early tomorrow morning. Thanks H. Good night.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wonderful update H,

though the dreamy sequence was well written, I feel sad for the turmoil Geet is going through right now, by not able to control her soul and mind.

This Karwa Chauth segment is new right , maybe Dev's reply for this voice mail is a shocker to come for her.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Loved the poem... I can feel the emotions
Thru it. Well suited for this circumstance.

Geet having the erotic dream. Very well
Described. Now I think she has understood
Dat she has fallen for him. But fears frm
Her feelings as she is a married woman n
Its wrong.
I can feel her pain.

She is contacting Dev to get a grip on herself.

Emotional update but loved the way u put frwd
Geet's condition, pain.