New York Times Part 31 Updated in Thread 2

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Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#671

Ah ha you updated this... good one.

She's the queen in being embarassed in front of him😆😆

Loved the "Titanic" reference, the additions that she & yash had put in... Hillarious🤣

Even loved her "Merlin" comment, he sure makes her so wanting to know what this mystery of a person that he is. She will now finally go with him for shopping for a shirt that she's ruined.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#672

Ok...I consistently see the titanic scene being mentioned. So, not bad, eh?

I wasn't so sure about adding that part in, except Jyoti had requested it.

Next is Hot Chocolate!

Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#673

Geet, even being the enigma she is herself, finds Maan to be more of a mystery & is dying to see what's under his facade... I'm sure the same can be said from his side too regarding the woman who's stirred him so intensely that he's lingering in their apartment & agreeing to going shopping with them.

I love how you portrayed Geet's conflicting emotions regarding her loveless marriage with Dev - is Dev becoming an example of absence makes the heart grow fonder... I hope not!

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Doracake

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Posted: 13 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: 6th.Element
Ok...I consistently see the titanic scene being mentioned. So, not bad, eh?

I wasn't so sure about adding that part in, except Jyoti had requested it.

Next is Hot Chocolate!

Yahooo

Hot Chocolate !

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hamini_yash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#675

Nice update, H I really feel she is always standing on edge whenever he is around or maybe he does that to all.

I am looking forward for that update which stole my heart , it is like a new emotion, how we feel good , bad or Hot chocolate!!!!

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#676

part 19
awesome...
loved this one...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#677

Originally posted by: 6th.element
It was as if three people were born inside her with that reflection: one that took instant grief for the separate lives they led; one part that felt some relief that they weren't a normal pair; and the third person who rebuked her that it was perhaps time she made Dev that man who wouldn't let the second personality of hers go in searching of what her former disappointed self sought after.

I like how you described this.

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crazydream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#678

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

The trio indulging in play n that too titanic.
Gud time pass foe Saturday nite.
Maan watching her. Omg wat did she utter
""bed n outside'' Alcohol id taking toll on her.

Loved the morning part. Geet shocked to see
Maan so early n that too in a dashing attire n
Her attire too good. Loved the combination.

Oh they are giving cold looks to each other.n. But y.

Loved the way u explained Geet's heart n mind thru
Her three forms.
Yupiee Maan agreed on her insistence.

Continue soon.