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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: hamini_yash
It was Zara Hatke😉

Quite glad that all the improvisations are working for you girls!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

Nope...wasn't there in the last version. In fact, both parts 8 and 9 are not there in the earlier version.

loving this version more n more😊...glad to see you back...and thanku so much for giving us two updates in one go...

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hamini_yash

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Posted: 13 years ago

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loving this new update, when you said that they are going for coffee shop I thought you will make her spill coffee on him, but then remembered it happens after she says he is complicated.

This was not zara hatke , very much hatke, infact it gave me a jhatka that she really did something like that, true to words, you competing your own writings .

Keep going ,

keenly waiting for more

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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#304

part 8 and 9

Mr. Fibanocci !!! love the name

but i would call him FABanocci :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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The new additions to the story are filling in their characters in a more complete way. The earring scene is what I was reminded off when I read the pencil goof up. Her correcting him and him not blasting her for it, new scene, very well done. Loved it.Thanks for the update

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 9

Originally posted by: 6th.element
how her thoughts always came back to him - work or otherwise

And then there is the fact that no piercings were going to erase the memory of that touch...

I really liked this. Thanks for the double update Hasini. The wait is always worth it when it is you I am waiting for.

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 13 years ago

#307

Thank you for re-writing it.

amazing one than NYT#1

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Krishna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#308

Loved it! That was very much hatke! Can' t wait to read more about Geet and her piercing. lol

Loved part 8 too. Smooth, Geet..

I love the song. One of my faves!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#309

Read Pensive, See-Saw, Zing all at once... and loved each one of them.

Maan could not help falling in love with Geet despite knowing the fact that she was taken. And same with Geet. as much as she tried, she could not help with her feelings for Maan (more evident in this recent version). You would think that they were wrong in having such feelings for each other given their situation. But there is a sense of innocence and helplessness in their feelings for each other which is sooo captivating. I cannot help the blush that creeps up on my cheeks when I am reading about them... and sitting by myself at work, people will think I am crazy H... 😕

I have goosebumps... just sooo love it.

The pencil scene, Mr. Fibonacci, Zing, awesome additions...