New York Times Part 31 Updated in Thread 2

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hamini_yash

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Maybe they are going through phases of " falling in love" and maybe they both know where there thoughts would lead them to if they don't get control now but still they say Ishq par zor nahi, ...na bhujaye na bhuje...(LOL I forgot the rest)-Mirza Ghalib , but there situation reminded me of this.

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#312

part 9
nice part...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#313

These are the lines from Mirza Ghalib's poetry...

Ishq par zor nahin, hai yeh woh aatish Ghalib

Jo lagaye na lage, aur bujhaye na bane

[Love can't be tamed, it's like a fire that overpowers everything else

At times, it doesn't start even after repeated tries; but once started, it's impossible to extinguish]

Funny, I only caught it as the lyrics of Satrangi Re from Dil Se and didn't know that it was written by Mirza Ghalib saab. The irony is, if I did get his poem right, then, it is not even about love.

Great start for a day...😊

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Boogle.Schiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Out of all things, I didn't expect Geet to get a piercing to wipe out Maan's touch. Is this her way of desperately hanging on to a thin string which is slipping out of her fingers too quickly? It seems so. She's quite impulsive; I feel, and Geet too knows, it will constantly remind her of him and his touch much rather than not...

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Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Yipee you updated not 1 but 2 parts...

just done with part 8..

loved their see-sawing, " Never date your boss..." 😆... yup also " boss is never wrong..." but what can she do if the said Boss can not just put her in place as others coz he's really lost it when he's around her...👏loved the whole meeting scene...

Also that line where she ponders that wishing half her worries vanish after waking up from sleep... I so wish it comes true atleast few times...😊

The whole yellow pencil & its search and finding process too good... Wonder what was going in Maan's mind during the whole helping to find the pencil task...

The last line... super loved it...

off to read the next... will comment in some time on the same...

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Doracake

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Posted: 13 years ago

#316

Hasini any chance for an update tonight????????

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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

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May be tonight...but now is not a possibility.

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Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Loved the 9th one too... what a Zing feel its left for her...

😲She has gone to such graet extent of peircing, so unexpected.

I just love this Meera what a friend, I always loved her character. She's so concerned for Geet, also i suppose she knows something about her marriage unlike the earlier version.

This part showed Geet's desperation to avoid thinking,feling something that is forbiden & be away from so that she doesn't cross her bounds... " ... that I was far from home and can't afford to wander off here..." She is so much in a mode of inner fights.

ZING..was truly felt with its after-effects, its gonna be a constant reminder to her of his touch.

loved the whole new dimensions you are bringing into this one, your outdoing yourself here, last tiem round when I read NYT I felt it was BEAUTIFUL... but now its beyond that... & i know you will never dissapiont your readers, you will keep the interest level always high...

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kavs123

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Posted: 13 years ago

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plsss gv us dis more regularly,,,,,,,,,,itsss tooo gud!!!!!!!!!!!!

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hamini_yash

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Oh yeah that was full poem

Anyways what grabs my attention more in this line is the intensity of fire which is more than love itself i.e there feelings are that intense, that it overshadows the fact that it is leading to Love.

Thanks for the poem.