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Posted: 13 years ago

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As much as all of you claim to have read NY times before, the part where she tells them of her marital status is really in Part 3 in the earlier version (here its Part 6) 😛. In the timeline of the story, Maan does get to know that she is not single on the very first day he lays eyes on her. So I haven't changed anything there...

Isn't it that much more fun when something is forbidden? A subject that slithered in the shadows of the last version, but this time it will not be so silent after all...

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Boogle.Schiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

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@Hasini-Like I said I have a terrible memory, I only remember bits and pieces so most of this really is new for me.

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mayukha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Like I said before, please don't worry about the "non-readers" and their acceptance.

In a way they might even help you with some constructive criticism rather than just the regular "liking it" mesgs.

As for the update, this Meera seems to be more vocal with her thoughts and I am really liking her (I guess all the characters are more vocal in this version).

And let me tell you I am not very good at remembering the numbers or very finer details but I do remember the story very well.

It's like a beautiful song, tune I remember very well and most certainly remember the gist of it but can't say the same about the lyrics.

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Krishna

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Loved the update! Dadi is awesome.

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Shalini

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Posted: 13 years ago

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oh i absolutely love LOVE LOVE it, im so excited that you're rewriting it. the first one was so good and from these 6 chapters you've written so far i must say that you've outdone yourself. i cant tell you how much i love it. your style of writing is fantastic, you're very talented! ⭐️

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hi, thanks a lot for update, it was ... Kind a remembering olden(golden) days. she is going through this confusion state of why on earth she is not saying "I won't come". And the breaking news.

Oh poor Maan, he has mastered the art of concealing his expressions. And its like Geet is doing the job of wildlife observer from now itself. Remember I once told you u picturize the scenes as if we are sitting infront of the characters in there living room and watching whats happenning and simultaneously reading there individual minds.

All this is because of your writing style, it represents such a clear picture that I forget its a fictional story. keep writing

eagerly waiting to taste Hot Chocolate.

And I wanted to tell u another thing, there is a show in Sony(some doctors love story I don't know the name as I don't watch the show) but in yestersdays epi I saw they had gone for trekking for there honeymoon, which reminded me of NYT.

And in a show in star plus , Ipkknd arnav is missing and the girl( I forgot her name) is going crazy, that reminded me of the time when Maan went to Canyon for second time. All are copying your ideas , you should get a copyright😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Ouch... you put him on the 61st floor, all the way 30 or so floors up... too much of a distance for her to cover...😆😆Loved this part ...🤗 I was always in love with his penthouse... the way you had put it forward earlier... but this time you have outdone yourself...so grandiose in its description, yet so soothing with the colours and elegance👏👏A good diversion therapy for Geet ... the view itself took her mind off the pain, & i wouldn't blame her even I would have been the same if such scenic view was present in front of my eyes. A visual treat. I would love to be in such a place... all myt free time at home would be just looking at the scenic view out there from those huge windows...😍The way you described it in words was beautiful it was like a movie being played out... just with words and picture getting formed out in one's mind... & cheery on the top was the pics you added at the end.Also loved the wound dressing part how he was slipping on words giving out his interest & attraction to her due to Daadi's questions... I love this daadi so much... she is too good😊During the whole wound dressing - the description of their awareness of each other so minutely described, each aspect covered . Also her marital status revealation... I was so much waiting for it. You described his sentiments so clearly - from his slight withdrawl and regaining the task at hand, to his reluctance & indifference to help her out later as he his fighting a altogether new conflict... & all this pinching her. She did ponder on whether to make him know her about her marriage was either for herself a reminder or moreso for him to be distant 👏Now is Meera & Geet ion the 29th floor or 32nd floor ... I'm confused coz I think somewhere it was the 29th floor...😕 See here i go again with the number fixation😳😳

Meera is quite observant like in the earlier version. I remember how she had caught hold on how Maan had allowed Geet to call him "Maan" while for others he was always "MK" in the earlier version... but i think here you have shown her observant nature in the begninning itself & much clearer.. as Yash & she are gonna be quite integral parts helping them to come closer..

Looking forward for the coming updtaes ... eager to see how Maan- Geet try to run away from this "pull" towards each other...

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Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: 6th.Element
As much as all of you claim to have read NY times before, the part where she tells them of her marital status is really in Part 3 in the earlier version (here its Part 6) 😛. In the timeline of the story, Maan does get to know that she is not single on the very first day he lays eyes on her. So I haven't changed anything there...

Isn't it that much more fun when something is forbidden? A subject that slithered in the shadows of the last version, but this time it will not be so silent after all...

Yes even i think the more the Forbidden the more the fun... also more the conflict ...

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jenny

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Interesting to read Geet's POV of meeting Maan for the first. Thank god she didn't call Dev.😕

The pool side picture was a perfect comeback memory. I love the picture so much.

Love the part you wrote about Geet's POV living in NY. So this time Meera is renting over from her Maasi not cousin.Even Yash in the same apt. Gym was superb part. Geet's reaction on Maan at gym was well written. Full in detail, she isn't control of her own feeling till Maan came checked on her.