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honeygrape

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

your story has already been accepted hasini...thats what i feel...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

Trust me when I say this, that the comparison will never really go away until I finish up the last part...

Well, its a good and a bad thing.

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crazydream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

BEAUTIFUL UPDAT

Loved the name of chapter "Ouch" n theway u brought an end to it by
Geet saying "ouch ouch ouch"

Geet is totally in a dazed state. She cant even think properly wats goin around her. Well its not her faut as Maan is with her.

Oh Maan offered her to take her to his house. N Geet couldn't even refuse him.
Her voice was stuck in her throat the entire time she is wid hin
N that too is his marvelous home.

She is awed by the beauty of this magnificent house. Even I m liking this house.

So she met daadi so early. Daadi was building hopes for Maans marriage wid her. But was shocked to hear that she is married.

N Maan also kind of stiffened wen he heard her say.

She literally ran away frm his house.

Continue soon.

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meravigiliso

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

me enjoying it to core,as if reading paper back copy of my favourite . great going hasini .

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-Aarya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

If you ever leave a room to question...but for now all my questions are answerd in the three little words "Ouch...Ouch...Ouch..." except one...

When Geet responded "My Husband..." was she deliberately waiting to see Maan's reaction?

But tell you truth I don't remember Meera being so smart in the earlier version, especially catching on to the fact that there was a first aid kit in both the Men's and the women's bathrooms so what was the need for Maan to take Geet to his apartment...

Edited by -Aarya- - 13 years ago

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

part 6
nice part...
poor Daadi...
cont soon dear...

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Sur_10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

I think this wad the last part i had read last time..
I like the way you write about emotions and attraction... Raw and somehow like a haze of energy buzzing under the surface :-)

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

loved how u described the house...indeed magnificent...

dadi's hopes were shattered when she revealed her marital status...

but u can never control destiny...

things will happen...whether u like it or not...

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640638

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Posted: 13 years ago

#219

🤗

As much as I loved the original version of the story and I was a little (microscopically) scared of the new version affecting my deep attachment to the story; I have to applaud you for this new way of telling the story. I love love love the new version Hasini.

Thanks for the update.

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Boogle.Schiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#220

As someone else mentioned, I also didn't expect this all so soon. Though by Geet revealing her maritial status, she did get a whole load off her shoulder. It seemed like the only reason she really told them was to reassure herself...

P.S What happens when the elevator breaks? 30 and 60 freakin' floors to climb!

P.P.S As they say in Essex, I am so jel right now because of the descriptions and pictures 😆