SS:Piazza di Spagna - Part 12 Upd Aug 2nd

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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

There is more to this update, but I couldn't write past 3.30 AM. Hopefully I can finish it before EOD today.

The abyss is yet to arrive.

Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Waiting in anticipation or nervousness(?) since you said abyss..

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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

@ part 10

now she has a face to remember

she needs to find out what they actually shared

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Boogle.Schiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

Oh goodness...I consistantly felt something clenching my heart when reading this update. Both of them have lost so much, and now that she knows it's him I can't even imagine whats going to come next...you're just great, Hasini.

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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: had2bu
Waiting in anticipation or nervousness(?) since you said abyss..

I'm waiting for comments...

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609931

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

Abyss has negative connotations... Their continous separation seems inevitable but I want them to have atleast one last moment together...

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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Oh! trust me on the one last moment ;) But we are not there yet...

He has held an upper hand for too long, don't you think?

By the way, I was going for anything that appears to be endless or immeasurably deep,such as time,

despair, or shame when I meant an abyss...

And to me, where there is an abyss, one is always asked of a free fall ;)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: 6th.Element
Oh! trust me on the one last moment ;) But we are not there yet...

He has held an upper hand for too long, don't you think?

By the way, I was going for anything that appears to be endless or immeasurably deep,such as time,
despair, or shame when I meant an abyss...

And to me, where there is an abyss, one is always asked of a free fall ;)

Gah such a tease! I can't imagine what could possibly happen next as I didn't see Geet's realisation coming in the previous chapter...

A free fall... ok my brain will explode from trying to work out a hint from this 😆 I never know what to expect next from you, so I'll sit back & (impatiently) wait for the remaining/next update.

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sanjh89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

PAINFUL!!!!!!!!!!!
n ABYSS s to b continud...

xams buks n thn ABYSS...
dunno whr i vl go...

at last BEAUTIFUL as ALWAYS👏⭐️

love

SANJH

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#250

well well...,...geet...maan...hmm..realization...feelings...whoa!!! blown out...:)..hw do u manage these char in your mind??? they bug me!!...:D...ahaa...i liked it...w8ng for another update :P hehehe...greedy!!!