SS:Piazza di Spagna - Part 12 Upd Aug 2nd

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Doracake

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

Your writing leaves me craving for more! Awesome update Hasini! Awesome update! Waiting for Palki nd my all time fav NYT!

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preetianand21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

Thanks for the PM. Love this fiction.

So Maan himself gave up his facade.

Geet should do something like what Diaz did to with Cruise in the end of Knight & Day. Drug him and kidnap him.

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Nishttha Nath

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

I love this story .. And now that the pretense has lifted, eager to see what happens :)

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Nishttha Nath

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

I love this story .. And now that the pretense has lifted, eager to see what happens :)

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mandymore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

awsome prt..nw geet recognised him

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Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#256

Oh beautiful part!!!!!

I'm thoroughly confused now whether I love to hate Maan here or I hate to love him. Why doesn't he just run away with her somewhere far, unreachable to anyone as he did earlier, I don't know its just so painful between them. Actually I'm so stuck on the thought & hoping for a loving & happy life for these two that I want it to see that coming alive in the SS.

The whole scene was so painful for both. she having those multitude of Questions & doubts and he all the more resisiting the temptation of just letting go & take her in his embrace.

I now want to see what is Geet going to do finally now that she has got an idea about him...

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Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#257

Will be waiting for the Abyss...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: Onir
Oh beautiful part!!!!!

I'm thoroughly confused now whether I love to hate Maan here or I hate to love him. Why doesn't he just run away with her somewhere far, unreachable to anyone as he did earlier, I don't know its just so painful between them. Actually I'm so stuck on the thought & hoping for a loving & happy life for these two that I want it to see that coming alive in the SS.

The whole scene was so painful for both. she having those multitude of Questions & doubts and he all the more resisiting the temptation of just letting go & take her in his embrace.

I now want to see what is Geet going to do finally now that she has got an idea about him...

I actually dislike Maan intensely for taking the decision away from her; but that is generally my reaction when people decide what is best for you. She is not a child; she is a grown person who is desperately seeking to put the pieces of the puzzle together. If he cares so much, he should help her, not let her feel so helpless day after day, month after month and him just watching on the sidelines. Somehow despite his love and protectiveness I find it overbearing. I would be mad as hell at him. Hope Geet is too...

Edited by had2bu - 13 years ago

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mayukha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#259

I can't even express in words what geet is feeling now for I feel like screaming and pulling out every single strand of hair from each person who seems to be taking the so-called "wise" decisions for her. (but again I don't like a bald Maan either 😉)

She is a human, not a puppet and God must ave given her a brush of something called grey cells...aarrgh😡

Finally, it seems like a ray of light to indicate the end of tunnel through which Geet's life is moving..

I am just so glad.

or is it just an illusion of my mind..could it be only a firefly???

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Posted: 13 years ago

#260

Just wanted to give my two cents on the sympathy situation, I do agree that Maan could do a lot more than he is now to subtly assist Geet with her memory, and I really do feel for Geet who is the deer caught in the headlights amidst all this.

But the way I see it, Maan is equally as helpless - being with her is dangerous and he's already risked enough to allow himself those few moments with her in the bathroom when he lets his emotions slip... he's trying to save Geet by attempting (yet failing) to keep himself well out of the loophole and let her move on from him, for both of their sakes.

I do wish that he would take her hand and escape far far away where they can be happy together forever and make beautiful babies, but I can totally understand Maan's situation and predicament which stops himself from doing so.