OS: Kismat se tum humko mile ho...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yuhi baithe soch rahi thi
Apne hi khayalo me dubi thi...
Zindagi ne mujhe bahaut kuch sikhaya
Gum diye par fir khushiyo ko bhi paya...
Meri zindagi ab mujhe kahani si lagti hai
Yaad karu to halki muskan honto pe sajti hai...

Kaha se shuru karu me ye kahani.. thoda dard degi ye par last me halki muskurahat chod jayegi ye..
Mein GEET HANDA, Ek chote gaav ki ladki, par mere maa-papaji ne mujhe har wo khushi di jo ki ek beti ko milni chahiye.
Unhone mujhe school bheja, ache sanskar diye, meri har khawish ko pura kiya. Wo mere aur mein unki jaan thi. Chota parivar tha par dher sari khushiya thi.

Haste khelte din guzar rahe the
Bado ki chav me hum bade ho rahe the
Khushiya hi khushiya thi humare sath me
Par ek tufan aaya aur sab bikhar gaya usme...

Aaj bhi wo raat yaad hai jab papaji ne kaha tha "Beta hum delhi ja rahe hai, humne waha naya ghar liya hai."
Me aur maa bahaut khush the.Par raat ka safar tha aur papaji mujhse baat kar rahe the. Samne se ek car aa rahi thi jo papaji ne bahaut der se dekhi aur fir accident ho gaya. Me to bach gayi par us accident me mere maa-papaji chale gaye. Humesha ke liye mujhe akela kar gaye. Kya karti me..?? Kaha jati..?? Kuch bhi to nahi pata tha mujhe..?? Ye Delhi sheher anjan tha mere liye. Puri tarah tut chuki thi mein. Kiske paas jau..?? kise batau kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.
Par kehte hai na jiska koi nahi hota usko khud babaji raah dikhate hai, Jisne meri jaan bachayi unhone apna card docter ke pass diya tha. Docter ne wo mujhe baad me diya. Uspe likha tha Mr.MAAN SINGH KHURANA. Babaji sach kehti hu naam padhke aise laga jaise me kisi mote aadmi ka naam le rahi hu. haha.. Itna heavy bada naam hai na babaji. Chalo rehne ke liye to mere pass ghar tha mera par mujhe job karni thi apna guzara karne ke liye. Hospital se discharge hone ke baad mein wo naye ghar me gayi. Papaji-maa ke bina wo ghar bahaut suna suna lag raha tha. Par ab to is ghar me akele hi rahna tha aur duniya me akele hi jeena tha. Kal se ek nayi shurvat karungi is irade ke sath me us raat apni maa-papaji ke jane ke gum ko dil me kahi chupaye so gayi.

Suraj ki kirnone mere chehre par apni laali bikher di aur mujhe apni gehri neend se utha diya jo ki meri pehli subha thi ek nayi zindagi ki bina apne maa-papaji ke.

Nayi zindagi ki ye pehli subha hai
Babaji ke aashirwad se shuru ki hai
Maa-papaji ki kami to mehsus hoti hai
par unki yaadein himmat badha deti hai...

Mene wo card liya aur taxi leke waha gayi. par shayad mera din hi kharab start hua. Babaji kya jarurat thi us sadu ko mujhse takrane ki. Are ruko apko bhi batati hu. Wo kya hua na jab me taxi se utri aur company ke andar gayi. Me wo card bag me rakh rahi thi ki me kisise takrayi. Laga jaise kisi pahad se takrayi aur me niche gir jaungi par us pahad ne I mean us aadmi ne mujhe pakad liya aur bacha liya. Jab apni band aankhein kholi to uski ankhein nazar aayi jinme dub jaane ka mann kiya. Jinme ek sachayi thi, ek junun tha. lift ke aawaz se hum hosh me aaye. Mein thank u bolne hi wali thi ki wo sadu shuru gaya..

MAAN: Cant u see and walk. Aankein di hai na bhagwan ne to dekh ke nahi chal sakti.
GEET: (tears in eyes. pehli baar itni unchi aawaz me koi usse baat kar raha tha) Jee Sorry. me wo card bag me rakh rahi thi aur aage dekha nahi. Sorry aur Thank u bachane ke liye.
(And I walked from there without looking at him. And complaining abt him to babaji. Sadu kahi ka)
MAAN: Usko apni baho me lekar mano laga mene sara jahan paa liya. Hospital me use dekh kar pehli nazar me hi usse pyaar ho gaya tha. Fir jab agle din waha gaya to us docter ne bataya wo chali gayi hai. Aisa laga jaise meri zindagi mujhse ruth gayi hai. par aaj use fir dekhkar jaan laut aayi. saansein jaise fir chalne lagi. par khud ke ehsaas ko chupane ke chakkar me meine use dant diya. Mene shayad jyada bol diya. uski ankho me aansu aa gaye the. Mujhe chillana nahi chahiye tha.Me bhi na pagal hu sach me. Dadi sahi kehti hai me na sadu hu. Waise ye yaha kya kar rahi hai...??? ahh Ye ladki mujhe pagal kar degi sach me.

Geet goes to the reception and say's that she wanna meet MSK. While standing there she notices one notice where it was written a job available for secretary walk in interview. She becomes so happy after reading it.
Geet: Babaji thank u sooo much. Tussi great ho jee.Mein waha line me baithe bore ho rahi thi aur jo interview deke aa rahe the unke chehre dekh kar lag raha tha jaise wo boss koi rakshas hai. hehe. chalo ab mere turn aa gaya. Babaji meri help karna plz.

GEET: May I come in Sir.

MAAN is facing back and says Come in and turns his chair.
He looks at geet & was happy to see her but does not show it.

GEET: Murmuring "Hey babaji ye yaha kya kar raha hai. ab to meri naukri gayi. ye mujhe nahi select karega. par geet himmat mat harna. jo hoga dekhenge.
She comes and sits in the chair.

Their interview continues for half an hour and MAAN was impressed by her simplicity and way to answer the question. He selects her as his secretary. He was really happy that she will work with him( yaar uski lady love jo hai.. wink) Geet says thank you and was going out of cabin when she stops and ask him where could she get Mr.MSK. Maan was like what should he say. The MSK is infront of her and she is asking him that where is he. lolz. He sayz I m only MSK.

After getting to knw he is only MSK first she gets shocked and then starts laughing like mad. MAAN was totally mesmerized by her laughter. But he come out of his dreamland when she stops laughing.

MAAN: Why are you laughing. Am I cracking a joke here..???

GEET: Wo Sorry Sir. I wanted to thank u for helping me at hospital and jab mene apka card pe naam dekha to mene kisi mote aur budhe aadmi ko as a MSK imagine kiya tha. par mujhe nahi pata tha MSK itne handsome hai.
(She bites her toungue after saying handsome. Babaji ye kya bol diya mene. Waise bhi sadu ko gussa hone ke liye reason chahiye hota hai. ab to me gayi and meri naukri bhi.)
When she looks at MAAN nd She sees him smiling and gets mesmerize by that. Both get into their Staring session till some one knocks the door.

GEET joins from the very next day. She was lil upset as her maa-papaji was not their with her but MAAN was very friendly with her and she was really enjoying the the job. Day by day They both were getting closer to each other. Both were knowning to each other well now. Maan was really supporting Geet very well. Maan also introduced her to his dadi who liked Geet so much. She was happy that Due to geet her Sadu grandson was changing. Months were passing so early and it was almost a year she came to delhi.

Today was her maa-papaji's first Death anniversary. From morning she was crying remembering them. She kept a pooja for them and invited maan & dadi for it. The Pooja was done and she cried alot hugging dadi. She was repeating one sentence plz bring maa-papaji back na dadi. I cant live without them. Me thak gayi strong bante bante. Mujhe nahi banna strong. Plzz Dadi bolo na maa-papaji ko wo unki princess ke paas wapa aa jaye. I promise me unhe kabhi tang nahi karungi. Bolo na dadi unko. Maan and dadi were having tears in their eyes. Maan's heart was paining to see his love crying so badly. He says.

MAAN: Geet chalo mere sath me tumhe kahi leke chalta hu.

Maan takes geet to some place. When she opens the door and sees the Name. She had again tears in eyes. It was a Aashram for old age people and orphans with her maa-papaji's name. She hugs Maan nd starts crying a like a baby. Maan makes her stop crying and they go inside. They both had a great time with the people and childern their.

When it was time for their returning in night. Suddenly the lights went off and geet gets scared but after 2 min whole aashram was lighted with candles and maan was on his knees infront of geet.

MAAN: Geet I knw today one year back you lost your parents but today I want to say that I wanna be with u from now on in your evry happiness and bad times. I wont let u suffer alone. Today was last day u had cried.Here after You will not shed any tear. I LOVE U GEET.. I dont knw from when but I really Love u so much. I wanted to confess it early but then I thought of something different. You knw why I have choosen this day..??? I have choosen it so that It would tell you that though u lost your parents but still their is someone who will care for you who will love you as much as your parents. I LOVE U GEET. WILL U MARRY ME..???

GEET: Yes Maan I will. I thank god for sending u in my life. Maa-papaji mujhechodke gaye par tumhe farishta bana kar mere pass bhej diya. Mere har taklif me aapne mera sath diya. Har mushkil se mujhe bachaya. Thank u MAAN aur I LOVE U TOO.

Uska Pyaar dekh ankhein bar aayi meri
zindagi ne jaise zindagi lauta di meri..
Ab to kisi ke liye jeene ka bahana mila
Uske pyaar me kurbaan hua dil mera...
Zindagi se aur kya maangu ab mein
Bas unke liye ab duaaye har pal mangu mein...
Maa-papaji chale gaye mano zindagi ruk gayi tab
Is farishte ne aa kar usme jaan dal di hai ab...
Har safar ab bas uske sath hi taye karna hai
zindagi ka har pal ab uske naam karna hai...

All the lights came back and all the people and childern their were clapping for them. They were so happy for MAAN and GEET. and Maaneet were so very
happy to get each other as life-partner who will be with each other in evry thick and thin..

"Mumma... Mumma... Kaha ho aap dekho mein aur dadda aa gaye.."
I came back to the present when I heard my princesses calling me. Yes Maan and I got married 4 years before and we have Our 2 years lil princesses "Anika". She was a bundle of joy for me.maan and dadi. She came running and I took her in my arms Kissing her both the cheeks, in return she kissed me evry where on my face. I was jst smiling at her antics. She was like her father. Showering all the love on me.Maan came frome back and he hugged both of us and gave a quick peck on my cheeks and to anika also. I felt complete with evrything. I really Thank god for sending maan and anika in my life.. God took my happiness with maa-papaji but gave double the happiness in form of Maan and Anika.

Zindagi ne ajnabee ke sath mera ajeeb intefaq kiya
Intefaq se hi sahi mere farishte ko mujhse milwaya...
Jab zindagi aap se kuch leti hai to dard hota hai
par zindagi usse kai jyada wahi khushi lautati hai...
Kahi na kahi koi na koi humare liye bana hai
Bas waqt aur uske ishara ka intazar hota hai...
Jo humare zindagi me pyaar ke rang bhar de
Jo Apne pyaar se humari zindagi ko sawar de...
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I wanna dedicate this update to
"My sweet Aniee di, My Shona Piya, My angel Angelic Mishty"

I really want to thank piya for helping me and for lovely banner
If u would not been their today I might have not posted it.
THANK U SOO MUCH PIYA...
I LOVE U...


Here are the links for My previous Works...



Zindagi ke Hasin lamhe


Maaneet's Poetic Os: Haal-e-Dil



Milan... A Poetry For Maaneet


Pyaar Ka Silsila



Tum Yahi Ho...
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kkiddoo thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely dear i loved it amazing
but i have a confusion who did the accident and what was maan doing their 😕was he the one driving in the 2 car ?
Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome os..big hugs to you..it was such a sweet story..she finally got a family..she lost her parents but god got maan in her life..awesome poems..
Edited by leverne - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cngrats 4 the OS sweety... Gud Job 👏
Keep writing...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh gosh
i am not on first page to comment
i am cursing myself for not being there
sobsss
but after reni called me ..i made it a point to reach home soon
and read it first.
i loved it totally
it was awesome
too good
out of words
u r improving
story was simple but yet classy
thanks no thanks for dedicating it😳
i have been missing u soo much
luv u and ur poems and ur os
Edited by anshra - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: payalpari

lovely dear i loved it amazing

but i have a confusion who did the accident and what was maan doing their 😕was he the one driving in the 2 car ?


Payal... It was just a road accident... and Maan was passing by and he saw that and then he admitted her to hospital... :) Sorry waha detail nahi de payi... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishtiritu


Payal... It was just a road accident... and Maan was passing by and he saw that and then he admitted her to hospital... :) Sorry waha detail nahi de payi... :)

ohh ok no probs dear and no sorry too
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: payalpari

ohh ok no probs dear and no sorry too


oops I always forget it... My sweet kiddo... Luv ya... ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishtiritu


oops I always forget it... My sweet kiddo... Luv ya... ❤️

that's ok dear 😊luv u too ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mera naam nhi tha dedication me sob sob... Veeru apni basanti ko bhool gaya sob sob... Koi nahi chalta hai

it was an awesome os veeru moi luved it a lot... My heart went out 4 Geet wen i read abt her parents accident bt den i smiled widely at d tym of entry of maan nd dat proposing part was my fav... Thank u so mch veeru 4 posting such a beautiful os

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