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Posted: 13 years ago
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"UNSEEN DREAM"
I lost My evrything years back
Yet their was hope to live a life
I was left alone in this world
Yet I was strong to fight back in my life...

I never Dreamed anything in my life
As I feared they will never be a reality
But he came in my life & proved me wrong
As He filled my life with love & his sincerity...

I still remember that night when we meet
and that night turned into a sweet dream
I Never thought I could get so much love
But his Love was endless as I seems...

I got all my happiness back in life
as He made my unseen dream to come true
I thanked god to bring him in my life
as my love with time for him only grew...!!!


I Geet Handa... A 22 years old gal living alone in my unseen dreams world...I had only one best friend Named Maanvi... I was very Happily Living gal years back... I was also used to dream like other girls do & I soo really wished to come them true... But The incident in my life years back changed my whole life into a darkness...
My parnets & my younger Brother Raj were coming from some party & they had an accident... Its the time when my life took a turn... I was having my final paper of MBA next day so I didnt went with them... I got a call from mom that they would be staying there as it could get quit late after party... So I had called Maanvi to come my house & we would study together...Next Day The paper went well But the News of my parents accident shatterd my life that day...
The only support I got was from Maanvi... I was left alone to live my life all alone... I had to struggle very hard to Survive in this world... My result were out and I got first class... Same was with Maanvi... I was sooo happy and tears rolled down my eyes as how I wished I could share this happiness with my parents as it was their dream... Maanvi understood & she immediatly hugged me and said "Geet U made it whatever ur parents desired.. They must be soo proud of you... And By crying U are making them unhappy... Do you want them to feel sad...???" I broke the hug & simply noded for NO & smiled back at Maanvi...
After a month I and Maanvi got a nice job... I was happy with it... I was happy that Maanvi was their for me yet I was longing for some love in my life...My life was bounded with that job,My house & maanvi... I so wished to come someone and take me out of this darkness... But I only wished...
Today was most happiest day of Maanvi & my life as Maanvi was going to get married to her love Abhi... I was so happy for her & was very busy with her parents in wedding preparations... It was almost Dark & The wedding would start any moment still I was not ready... Finally Maanvi scolded me & I was getting ready... Same time Abhi & his parents came & were waiting for Maanvi to come down... I took Maanvi With me... As We were decending steps I saw a blush crept on Maanvi's Face & then I noticed Abhi was looking at her Mouth open... I had a smile on my face seeing them happy & Getting married...
But the night of their marriage changed my life too... I was searching for my earing as I got shock that it got lost some where... And thats when I bumped into Him... I was going to fell down but two strong arms caught me & saved me from falling... I slowly opend my Eyes to see his face & I was instantly loosing my self when My eyes caught his... His eyes were speaking volums... They were having soo much intensity in them that I hurriedly looked down & a small blush crept my cheeks... He straighten himself as he leaved me... Some mins went in silent.. Both were not knowing what to say... Finally I broke the silence...

Geet: Wo.. Oh I m sorry... I was searching for something & then bumped into you... I m really sorry...
Guy: Oh Its ok... It was my fault too as I was rushing outside in hurry... Btw Hello I m Maan...
Geet: Hello ji... I m geet... U r from whose side groom or bride...???
Maan: I m from groom's side I m friend of abhi...
Geet: Ohh Nice to meet u... Suddenly geet remember that she was searching for her earing... Geet self talk.."Hey babaji me to inke chakkar me apna earing dhudna bhul gayi.. aap bhi na babaji humesha galat time pe mujhe kisi se takrate ho..." She made a pounting face...
Maan was lost in her beauty & was smiling when he heard her blabbering something to babaji...
Maan: What are u searching for May I help u...????
This whole scene was watched by Maan's Dadi and she was happy to see Maan talking freely with a gal & She was shocked when he smiled & asked a gal for help... She pinched herself as if to confirm it was not a dream...
Geet: wo actually I lost my earing some where.. I m not getting it... She had lil tears in her eyes...
Maan: ohh Dont worry we will find it.. If not we will get new one...
Geet: Tears rolled down her eyes as she said It is my mom's earing & it is last thing in remembrance of her...
Maan's heart pained to see tears in her eyes... He felt like some one stabbed his heart... He just meet her 10 min before & he felt unknown connection with geet...
Maan: wiped her tears & said Dont worry we will find it...
They searched for mostly an half hour and Finally Maan found it lying near a table... He took it & went to geet...
Maan: Hey geet see I said na we will get it.. I found it near the table...
Geets face was beaming with happiness seeing the earing... She immediately took it from maan & what she did next shocked maan.. She huged him in exitment & pecked his cheek & was Saying Thank u...
When no response came from maan she looked at him... He was holding his cheek where she pecked... She instantly rememberd what she did and a blush crept her cheeks turning her into a light shade of pink...
Geet: wo sorry I was so excited to see earing that I didnt know what I did...
Maan: Smiling naughitly Its ok Geet waise I liked hmm no I loved your way of saying Thank u...
Geet's face turned red when he said those words... But instantly they straighten themself as dadi came there... Maan introduced Geet to Dadi... She took blessing from dadi... She Felt like she was with someone who is hers... Dadi liked Geet sooo much & not delying it... She immediatly said
"Geet would u mind in being my Daughter-in-law...????" Both Maan & geet were shocked & looking at Dadi with their mouth open...
Dadi has naughty smile seeing them like this... Geet lowered her eyes & was blushing very hard... It was true that She liked maan when she saw him but what about maan.. she didnt knw what he must be thinking...
Here maan was also embrassed as he was caught by his dadi... He liked geet when he first saw her... May be u may call it as love at first sight... He was also in delima that if geet will like him or not...
Both at a time said
Geet: Ji pehle unse puch lijiye...
Maan: Dadi usse puch lo...
Dadi had tough time to control her laugh seeing their condition... They agreed for the marrriage... Maanvi was very Happy for Geet as now geet will have someone by her side who is her own... She sufferd a lot after her parents died... She was all alone but now Maan will be by her side...
Finally the Marriage was decided and only one week was left for marriage... Geet was living with maan & dadi in their house... She got so much love from Dadi & maan that she was longing for from after her parents death... She never imagined that she would get the love back that her parents gave to her... Maan fullfilled her each & every dreams the girl has for their marriage...
The marriage ceremony was too gud... Finally Geet & maan were married to each other... Geet got her love of life... She couldn't thank enough to her babaji for sending Maan in her life...
Maan made her all unseen dreams true which she never dreamed off... She was on cloud nine seeing sooo much love in his eyes for her...

I left dreaming when my parents died
but destiny made me dream though i denied...
I never thought My unseen dream will be true
But his love made me all unseen dream again to view...!!!

When they retierd to their room at night Maan instantly hugged her... For Maan life couldent be better then holing his ladylove in his arms... He broke the hug and their was a eyelock... Without breaking the eye-lock maan bend lil down & took her lips into his for a kiss... It was so blissful to kiss each other & know that they will love each other till their last breath...
This was the starting of their love & they know that with each passing moment their love will grew deeper & deeper like deepness of the ocean... Their Love for each other was slefless... Thier Love cant be expreesed in words... yet they say...

Love is a very beautiful feeling
It is a medicine for all the heeling...
We never know when we will fall in love
& we will cheerish our whole life with that love...
Love Never demand something precious from you
It only needs same love that you can easily give...
Love never has any Expectation from you
It will go to any extent to fullfill ur wish that knew...
Lonliness is always in search of this love
When u give him it turns into a blissful love...
When ur love kiss u holding u tight
Everything seems just to be so right...
Indeed Love heals all the pain in life
Loved unconditionally by someone
gives immense happiness in life...!!!
Plz do hit like button if you like it
I would specially Like to Thank Aniee Di... If should have not been there to support me I would have never posted it... Thank u sooo much di... U r the Bestest Di in World...
Luv ya sooo much...
All The credit goes to you aniee di...
Specially Thank u for Pic...

Here are the links for My previous Works...



Zindagi ke Hasin lamhe


Maaneet's Poetic Os: Haal-e-Dil



Milan... A Poetry For Maaneet


Pyaar Ka Silsila



Tum Yahi Ho...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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on your first OS!!!!!!


Congratulation Animations
Chocolate Scrap
to celebrate for this new OS ...
Edited by anshra - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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golu... for you first OS dear...



sending some flowers for you...



and this is for my golu...from bhootni...




here comes the sweet...



chalo chalo...mooh kholo...

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Edited by soniyasharma90 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hugs-desi-glitters-32

for u r new os dear

love u soo much




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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice OS
loved the poems especially...
beautiful piece of writing...
continue writing..
Sehar

Edited by gcddfan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
heyyy
takeee ur thanks back ritu
at once
and thanks (no thanks) to u
for posting it
and giving us all chance
to read it yaar
it was so aswesome
ii loved it totally
and the poems u have added
just added to the effect of whole
OS..
i cant belive its ur first attempt
u have way to go gal
Love it graphics
keep writing
and dont stop here
u can write really well
and it is evident from
ur poems
loved it
fab
do write more
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
wow!!!!!!!! golu...
that was really awesome dear...
kaha tak chupa ke rakah tha aaj tak iss talent ko...😉

keep writing dear...
n sply ur poems...
loved them...
dont finding appropriate words for describing it dear...


muhhhaaaz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep writing honey...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pheewww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finally after 15 mins struggle ...pressed the like button...i dont know why this happens wid me only???😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
Hey Rituja
Brilliant OS so beautiful
The entire journey was explained by u so beautifully
Destiny took away the main support from Geet but blessed her with her soulmate at the right time
Dadi was so fast mauke pe chauka maar diya directly proposal saamne rakh diya so sweet
And ur poems they were like cherry on top of a cake
Amazing work darling
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Big Big Congratulations frm My side on ur First OS 😊 Stupendous Work 👏

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