Milan... A Poetry For Maaneet.. Maan's POV Page 5

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A Very Happy Birthday Sam... May God Bless YOU...
I Luv u sooo much... Hugsss
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Aiee le Sam m all over each and every thread of urs at frst till now :D :D :D aowww I Love It :D :D :D :D dhinka chika!!
Happy Birthday darling :*


now coming to OS :D poetic OS yet again ;)

as always I just wnna say it again, U know it na there is always a special someone for U...always a one who is made for U and only U, fir chahe koi fareeshata ho yaa khuda aapke naseeb main wahi special someone aayega who is meat to be urs no one else! Kya kare destiny hai :) dil to bawara hai...right!!
Let him go if he is ur special someone...he will be ur at the end of day! No one can change that nor he neither U...so let it go...coz agar kisi ko baandhoge he will get suffocated and chocked relation always restriction, ek inhibitation bann jaate...bojh...n humare rishte itne khokhle nahi hai...hai kya? Nahi na so let them free...let the relation breath :)

hushhh philosophy ho gayi na :p LoLzzz

chalo ab mudde pe ;)

it was fantabulous mindblowing owsome and chumeshwari aowww Just Love it...the beging to end the whole poetic way u told a simple story was just mesmerising just beautiful in it's own simple way...U know U one of the 2 ''The best poetss I know...n i feel the flow reading U each tym coz the words the emotions...ur feelings U convey in them...it's always so smooth that it feel we feeling the same emotion...as if it is the same feeling we living in...just perfect...and in one word...hypnotising ur words are...trust me u have a spellbound talent in U n I love this power in u actually respect U for something in here :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is an awesome addition to your wonderful works ritu... awesome.. loved it.
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Haye mere veeru jst nw i had posted comment on ur prev os nd tune mere dil ki tamanna itni jaldi puri kar di dusra os deke... Dats my veeru

Yaar sachi me aaj tune mera dil garden garden kar diya hai... Ek ek word ek ek lyn was written so beutifully nd u knw wat aisa laga k main kisi ki real story padh rhi hu... True yaar smone smwhere is defo made 4 u... Jst lyk 'Geet' gt his soulmate... HAYE!!!

LAFZON ME KAISE BAYAN KARU,
K KYA ASAR KAR GAYE TERE ALFAAZ DIL PAR MERE,
BAS YUN SAMAJH LE KE TERE ALFAAZ PADH KAR,
ZINDAGI JEENE KI EK WAJAH MIL GAYI...

Lolz... Sorry 4 d crap huh... I m nt as good as u... :-P

oh! Veeru once again a big big big bone crushing hug to u 4 dis marvellous creation... Luv u yaar!!! Mmmuuaaahhh

P.S. I want Maan's p.o.v too pls pls pls pls pls...
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fantastic.
must say its brilliant :)
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superb poetry ... loved it
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well you already know how i feel about this poem...it is just fantabulous...
i love the way some simple words come together to tell such a sweet story...poetry has always facinated me and you have just rekindled the passion...
first part which articulates a phase where she looses hope...betrayal blamed on destiny...pain of being alone
And then comes the true destiny...that one person who God made for her...whom she had asked for in her last life...who she had just not found yet.
Finally they come together and magic happens...they complete each other and she relaises that her God was always with her
Absolutely brilliant 👏 and You are a star⭐️
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Its awesome Ritu I had read the first two parts of the poem on FB n the third one I read here...
Every word is perfectly chosen n is presented wonderfully... The poem in itself is a complete story n there is magic in ur writing
Loved it dear, waiting for more poems from u...
Luv ya❤️

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