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Reshu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

kahan ho hamari pyari si update machine😉😉

waiting yaar😍

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Reshu

@mayapari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

so ajj update millega ki nahin?????????????

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

when are you bagging the next update

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Atiffa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

we the innocent readers are waiting for the update

from the update machine

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504887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: mel420

😲 How dare you call me gussel singh whatever that means😆

ha ha you werent talking to me and u were all angry so gussel means angry he he!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: mel420

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awww!!

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princes939

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

U updating??????kb tak??or kitna wait?

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: princes939
U updating??????kb tak??or kitna wait?

I am updating right now just 5 min

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Important note:Guys I have exams coming up so no regular updates. Just think you update Machine is defected for a week or two😉

Part 27
Suddenly Maan remembered something really important.

Maan:Maneet
M:Yes dad

He picked Maneet up and put him in his lap. Maneet looked with big eyes to maan. Maan just loved it when he called him dad.

Maan:Beta you didn't tell me did Ronald and Mrs. brown I mean
M:Oh wo mom is lying she is not married and I don't know the whole Ronald story but what I did get is that mom blackmailed him to play her husband. I think because she was well is angry at you because you thought you now
Maan:Yeah. Thx for telling me now you go. Oh do you have a mobile
M:Yep

Maan took maneet s number and feeded his own number as Dad in his mobile.

M:I will call you tonight and I promise we will soon be one family bye

Maneet and Maan hugged each other.

Maan walked nervously into D&G company.He knocked at the door of Geet's cabin.

G:Come in
M:Hey
G:Take a seat Mr.Khurana.Your wife didn't come. The dress is completed. Abigail said it will arrive in 10 minutes. I hope you have the time.
M:Yes I do. My wife didn't come because I am not married Geet.
G:Listen Mr. khurana I explained you also yesterday to not cross your limits. It's s Mrs. Brown for you and secondly I don't know why you told me that Mrs. Khurana wanted to meet me but I don't care. You can leave like you I don't have time to waste.

Maan sighed.

M:Geet I know your angry but listen
G:Mr.Khurana
M:I AM NOT GOING TO CALL YOU MRS. BROWN BECAUSE YOUR NOT MARRIED. Dahm it stop it. Why are acting to be married and that do that jerk who ruined are live.

Geet looked shocked at Maan. He knew she was married. You know what she didn't care anymore.

G:MR.KHURANA GET OUT.
M:Geet listen I am sorry pleas just listen once
G:Listen Mr. Khurana I don't
M:The voice you heard yesterday's was Emma's

Maan knew that was the only way to get Geet's attention.Geet gave maan a confusing look

G:What Emma is your wife
M:No no way What happend was

Maan told Geet the entire story after she left leaving the part where Mohinder had announced her dad out of it.Geet was sitting there totally shocked. Maan grabbed Geet's hand.

M:I am so sorry Misty.

Geet jerked Maan's hand away.

G:Don't touch me Mr. Khurana
M:Geet
G:I don't care if you legally married or not.

Abigail knocked.

G:IN
A:Ma'am the dress

Abi left

G:Here is the dress and the bill you can leave.
M:I don't except this marriage
G:How many more hearts are you going to break Maan.
M:ME GEET YOU CAN'T BREAK A HEART OF A HEARTLESS PERSON.

Geet slapped Maan.Maan was shocked and hurt beyond words. When Maan said those words. She felt the entire wedding day roll in front of her eyes. Maan distrusting her. Screaming at her.

M:I deserved the slap but you slapped me for the wrong person. You now what she did.
G:I DON'T WANT TO NOW MR.KHURANA IN YOUR EYES EVERY GIRL IS A WITCH. RIGHT?!
M:Geet (maan had hurt in his voice somewhere that pained Geet in her heart)
G:Maan pleas leave
M:The pictures, dvd, Ronald was here and Evelien's plan. She separated us Dahm'it she loved me.

Maan had tears in his eyes. Which Geet coudn't bare.

G:What are you sure.My own sister I loved her so much.
M:I heard everything whit my own ears Geet.

Geet felt deceived by her own sister.

G:I am sorry Maan I shouldn't have slapped you

Geet's eyes where also filled up by now

M: It okay.

Maan wiped Geet's tears away.Geet noticed the watch. Maan saw Geet looking.

M:I know you gave it to me Misty

Geet looked up shocked.

G:It doesn't matter what happened in the past. Whatever she did was wrong but she was young and under the influence of Evelien
M:I don't care she isn't young now na but still she won't stop with her dirty tricks. The only thing that matters is that I am not married and I love you Misty
G:I am sorry Maan it's over. You never loved me Maan. It was just a crush
M:That's why I still can't life whiteout you
G:Maan please I am not coming back. leave it's over.It's better this way. That has already been so sick I don't want him to feel guilty and lonly at this age
M:I now your angry. Give me any punishment you want but not this. And dad deserves to now the truth. He is dying inside geet thinking you betrayed him.
G:Maan pleas don't be selfish , not for me but for dad think about him he will die in guilt please.
M:Give me any punishment you want but not this
G:You want a punishment
M:yes
G:Fine life for the rest of your live with Emma and forget me.

Maan decided to leave. He needed to come with another plan. This was not working. He went outside. He saw something really interesting. Maan smirked. Maan walked inside his room happily. Emma felt great to see him so happy.

E:Hey Maan I missed you so much
M:Emma start packing I have rent two places in one our parents are going to life and in the other just the two of us.
E:Ow ho romantic Maan

Ow you don't want to now Maan smirked this is going to be fun.

M:Now go and pack.
E:Maan dinner
M:I already had dinner
E:oh i waited for
M:hmm go and pack
E:Oh alright eh how do I look in this dress

She was wearing a dress just like Geet

M:Horrible doesn't suit you

Maan hit the gym. Leaving a sad Emma behind. The shifted to the place Maan rented.When Emma was putting everything in place. Because Maan said he wanted no servant at ther plas, so that they could have some privacy.Maan went outside to call Maneet.

Maan:Hi buddy
M:Hi dad. how did the meeting with mom go
Maan: She is still angry but you I heard Abigail got promotion
M:yeah I know dad but why are you so excited.
Maan:Well beacause Geet needed a new Secretary.
M:So
Maan:Guess who's got the job
M:eh dad that is not really important now is it dad.
Maan;Well it is I got the job
M:No the MSK is going to work as a secretary. COOL

Maan and Maneet laughed.

M:Good luck dad
Maan:THX promise me you will come tomorrow to office. I am really missing you son.
M:I will dad

Geet walked in.

G:Maneet with whom are you talking this late.
M:sally mom
G:Who is this Sally
Maan; betha de mom ko girlfriend hai
M:SHE IS NOT MY GIRLFRIEND
G:What acha did I say she is your girlfriend😲so that means she is you girlfriend
Maan:😆
M:No wo
G:Maneet your just ten.
M:I know mom
Maan:Tell her about the story deewanigi
M:No I am not telling her about deewanigi
G:Deewangi you mean the story of Muskaan. Hai so romantic. But still that doesn't mean you can keep a girlfriend.

Geet was suddenly in a deep thought.

G:Does Sally love Maskaan's deewanigi
M:Yes mom
G:Well they say childhood love is real love. You now what I want to meet this Sally girl.
Maan:Good luck son😆
Maneet;😡
G:well are you going to ask her to come tomorrow you now on a play date.
M:MOM I am just ten
G:Fine but I still wnat to meet her. Give me the phone

Maneet thought for a while. He smirked. Pay back timen dad he thought.

M:Sure mom. Sally talk to mommy. She loves deewanige to you now. Tell her about twisty deewanigi
Maan:NO Maneet don't
G:Twisty deewanigi that sounds interisting.

Geet Grabbed the phone.

Precap:Someone help Maan😆

Guys check this ff out by Ananya
Rough Ishq: It's a amazing story about Maaneet.
Maan and Geet are all set to destroy each other
They hate each But more then that THEY LOVE EACH OTHER:
So are you ready For some :Rough ISHQ:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2754687/mg-ss-rough-ishq-teaser-page-52

Next:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/54520097

Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago

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