Deceived 2 Link to thread 3 p.1

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OMG I can't believe it My second thread. THX guys for you love and sweet comments. Ritzy and Anu stop spamming, coz I am updating. Love you guys keep showering your love.😳😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thread 1:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2758605/deceived-link-to-thread-2-p-1
Thread 3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2922757/completed-deceived-3-suprise-p-36
Part 24...P1
Part 25...P8
Part 26...P11
Part 27...P25
Part 28...P33
Part 29...P40
Part 30...P46
Part 31...P53
Part 32...P60
Part 33...P68
Part 34...p76
Part 35...P83
Part 36...P84
Part 37...P96
Part 38..P103
Part 39..P113
Part 40..P123
Part 41..P133
Part 42..P140





Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Part 24
G: So that was it Maneet
M:Hmm everything will alright mommy
G:Everything is already alright my sweet son

Before Geet and Maneet knew it they fell a sleep.

Emma walked in to the room without Maan. She presumed he was still on the beach crying over that B****

She walked to the balcony and called Evelien up.

Evelien: hi
E:Mom
E:Honey why are you crying
Emma; I hate geet. he still loves her. I have tried everything to get him. I tried to dress like Geet but that didn't work then I dressed up the way you told me but that didn't work either. I arrenged a candle night dinner and he left. I tried to start a new beginning whit him and he promised me he would try to but instead he blasted at me saying that still loves Geet

Emma cried like crazy on the phone. Evelien felt her blood stolling.

E:calm down darling.
Emma:Calm down it has already been twelve long years still he can't forget that witch. None of our plans are working. I can't believe it. We even made fake photo's and that cd but still how can he still love that witch . I don't get it. What does she has that I don't.
E:Hmm I don't know but we will find a way, You just act all dramatic try a fake attempt to suicide that will have him come to you.
Emma; Yes I will act all dramatic. THX mom
Evelien:GOOd luck baby

Emma came inside and sat on the. Maan stood by the door he heard everything . He walked inside trying to control his anger. Emma saw him and started to cry like a madwomen. He stood up and walked to the shower and banged the door.Emma got shocked by his behavior and stopped crying. Maan opened the shower. He had heard everything. He felt like slapping the the light out of Emma. But he decided it was better to think first before he does something stupid.

Maan's monologue
OMG My geet my misty she was innocent. How could I not trust I am so sorry Misty I promise I will make it up to all the pain I gave you. I will never distrust you again. But how can you be married to Ronald and Maneet nothing makes sense.And the bracelet what was that doing in front of your company. It means you still had it. Crazy girl you still love me after everything I said and all these years. But then again even I couldn't stop myself from loving you, even when I thought you deceived me.Dahm it I threw the bracelet away. need to search it latter.
Is Maneet Ronalds and your son. No your only my misty, it can't be. I hope he didn; t do anything to you. Everybody who hurt will have to pay for every tear of you. Including me he closed his eyes in shame and pain. But Geet you will decide my punisment and I will embrace it with open arms. But first need to learn this Emma and Evelien a lesson. Plan starts no. I love you misty. He spoke those words and walked outside. Ready to start his plan.

M:Emma are you okay
E:Not really
M:I am sorry babes

She looked up to Maan did he just call her babe. That's a good thing right she thought

E:Ehh Maan why can't we just try
M:Your right I am feeling a bit lighter and I am ready to try but then you will have to act like a wife.
E:Sure Maan Emma said all happy
M:Great and by the way Emma and think I am starting to feel for you to.
E:Really but on the beach
M:Emma forget that let's start a new beginning wifey
E:Okay forgetting Maan

Emma ran forward to hug Maan. But Maan sneakily walked two steps away. And Emma banged to the wall. Maan suspended a laugh

M:Darling are you alright
E:Yes Emma said rubbing her head.
M:Good and Maan started calling.
E: maan
M:Just calling the owner of D&G need to take care of your suprise honey.

Emma blushed. Maan felt like puking, but he controled 😆.He walked to the balcony and called his Misty.Geet was sleeping she heard the phone ring. She picked it up.Her voice sounded sore cause of all the crying ,emotional talk and cause she was sleeping

G:Hello

Maan got worried hearing her sore voice.

M:Are you okay Misty

Emma turned around. No worries Emma didn't knew Maan called Geet misty. Geet got a shock when she heard Maan say Misty.

G:I am fine Mr. khurana and it is Mrs. Browns for you.

It pranged Maan's heart to hear her talk to him like that. Well you deserve it Maan he told himself.But Maan didn't had it in him to call her Mrs. brown anymore. It already pained him in the first place, now it hurted him more.

M:Sorry but you can call me Maan.
G:I am fine with mr. Khurana
M:As you wish. Wo (He couldn't get it in him to say my wife, but he had to. He couldn't ruin his plan) my wife wants to meet you. I told you she is a big fan.

Geet sighed.

G:Mr. khurana that's why you called me so late
M:It's only 8
G:Realy
M:Yes
G:Hmm why don't call abigail to make a appointment for tomorrow

Emma walked to the shower. so she couldn't hear him so Maan could talk more freely.

M:Alright. Love you misty.

Geet got a shock of her life. without thinking she said.

G:Maan are you drunk.
M:No I am finally seeing things clear and your asking me if I am drunk my smiled. And misty it feels heavenly to hear Maan from your lips after such a long time
G:Chi your disgusting, your married MR.Khurana.
M:I am
G:WHAT
M:Are you sure I was not lying before

Geet felt hope rising in her. Is he back for me. Does he now the truth, does he trust me.She decided to play a bit with him

G:But I am married Mr. khurana
M:With that spineless jerk

Geet giggled.Maan felt great hearing her laugh. Now he was 100 percent sure that Geet was only his. So what was this all Ronald story. Suddenly all the happenis vanished.

E:Maan sweety what's taking you so long. Did she say yes Can we meet her tomorrow.

Geet's monologue
Is that his wife. So he is married. Why is he playing with my feelings, is he out for revenge. I won't give you that satisfaction to break me.

G:Mr. Khurana how dare you talk about my husband like that.

Ohoh he knew she was angry.

M:Sorry I will call Abigail.

Maan hung up. Dahm you Emma he thought

E:And Maan what did she say.
M:I need to call her secretary
E:Yeah you told me that the secretary would call you.
M:Yeah she didn't so I called the owner of the company
E:So her name is Misty
M:No I thought I heard someone call her that. But she told me that wasn't her name and she liked to be addressed like Mrs. Brown
E:She sounds arrogant
M:She is just professional that's all. BTW do you still want to meet her
E:Yes what do I care about her attitude I just want a exclusive dress.
M:I thought you were a huge fan
E:Yes I am maan
M:Fine I will go and call her secretary. I am just going outside
E:Why
M:To arrange a surprise for my wife
E:Oh I love you Maan

Maan smiled, while inside he was feeling disgusted. He walked outside. He called up Abigail and set up a meeting at 4. After that he looked every where but he couldn't find the bracelet. He walked to the reception and asked them or they saw it. While the answer was no Maan asked them to call him on his mobile if they found it.


precap:Maan meeting Maneet
Next:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2884476/deceived-2-link-to-thread-3-p-1?pn=8
Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maan honey you're going to have to go through some major blood and sweat to get Geet to forgive you !
be strong Geet baby don't forgive him so easily
and Maaneet better give Maan a hard time too
Maaneet's such a cutie patootie
LOVED it
and congrats on the new thread !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ohhh dear…. I love you for this update….😆

So now Maan knows….Finally….😉

Yay…Now Emma an Evelien are gonna pay big time….😆

He called Geet - Mishty!!!😲

But Maan has a lot of making up to do…😉

loved the amazing update...👏

Eagerly looking forward to the next update!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG...I loved it...I just loved it...
The update was mind blowing...
So maan at last got to know everything...he got to know that geet was innocent...
But I have to say...maan is such a jerk...he insulted geet thousand of times and now when he gets to know the truth he is actually flirting with her...gosh men I tell you...
And what the hell is wrong with geet how could she flirt back...I hope she does not take maan back this easily...geet has to stay strong when maan tries to charm her again...
waiting for emma and geet to meet..
I do not want geet to forgive maan and her father easily...both betrayed her trust and love and both of them have to pay for last 12 years...
Continue soon
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oh wow...so Maan heard Emma talking...I had seriously wanted Maaneet to play a role in Maan knowing the thruth...you took away role from my cutie Agent M
anyways...no worries atleast he knows the truth...
Waiting eagerly for next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread...

loved the update...

maan finally came to know the truth...n now it is time for payback...

continue soon...
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awesome n beautiful update...

i knw frm d first dat emma n dat evil mother of her is responsible fr all dese...i hate dem...m happy ki maan knw d truth dat his mishty is innocent...m waiting whn he will give dem punishment...

n maan babu bahut mushkil hai geet ko manana...lage raho...

its really amazing...

really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting...
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awesome
finally the truth is out in front of Maan
But Maan darling you have to really work hard to get back Geet
And Geet please don't forgive him easily
And from the precap i am sure that Maaneet will also give tough time to Maan
want a hell for emma and eveline ..in a game that is Maan is playing with them
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa

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