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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya


he he will try! Dont cry lol!!
Mel wont update any sooner i suppose bcs she has exams!!

oh yeah, right she's having exams...but yours are finished so...😊 chal tell me which thread of urs should I come since mel isn't ere
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dr
waiting for ur update!!!!!!!!!!!
missin maaneet n maaneet!!!!!!
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey when will I get a full comment me waiting sally
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey try Taylor Swift's Sparks Fly
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: music_girl

Hey try Taylor Swift's Sparks Fly


I don't like taylor's voice sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yeh kya taylor taylor laga rakha hai?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya

Yeh kya taylor taylor laga rakha hai?


😆 which singer do you like
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Posted: 13 years ago
Guyz check this fb page out :https://www.facebook.com/messages/?action=read&tid=id.266976056716408#!/AdevilsDesire

Part 28
G:Hi Sally
M:Hi aunty (trying to make a voice of a girl)
G:Dear did you catch a cold
M:Yes I am feeling that well
G:Oh dear then you go to bed.
M:Well I wanted to but Maneet called
G:Yeh Maneet bhi na. You sleep Sally. Good night or hai tell your mom to have haldi kha milk.
M:Oh no aunty he was just really worried for. He cares a lot you know
G:Ohhoi Kya baat hai
M:hihihi
G:No go to bed
M:Oki Aunty. Bye Good night and sweet dreams
G:Sweet dreams Sweety

Maan's monologue
Is Maneet ki tho well atleast I could hear Geet sweet voice. I will defo have sweet dreams after you wished me goos night Misty.Love you forever.

After Geet hung she started teasing Maneet.

G:Kya baat hai you where worried about Sally huh?
M:No
G:Don't lie to your mommy. Now I defo have to meet this Sally.
M:Why
G:Because she will be mu daughter in law
M:Mom I am just ten
G:In deewanigi the herione got married when she was eleven

Maneet smacked his head.

G:What happenend dramebaaz
M:Nothing now I am sure your going to get me married when I am eleven.
G:It's not a bad idea
M:MOM
G:No go to bed you drama king

Emma walked towards Maan.She saw him smiling.

E:Maan what are you thinking.
M:Huh nothing just dreaming about the foot message you will give me
E:WHAT?!
M:let's go
At night Emma gave Maan again a three hour long foot message until she fell asleep on the couch. Maan stoop up and texted geet.

Maan:
I am so sorry misty

Geet readed it and deleted it.Another message from Maan.

Maan:
I love you misty

She deleted it again.

Maan:
I a missing you misty

Maan:
Sweet dreams Misty

She switched her phone off. She wasn't in the mood off all this. It was already hard for her to stay away from Maan.

The Next morning Maan came back from jogging. Emma was still sleeping she was tired of all the work Maan made her do.Maan decided to wake her up.Maan Style. He grabbed a bucket of ice cold water and threw it on a sleeping Emma.

E:Aaah
M:Good Morning Sweetheart
E:Maan what is this
M:You where not waking up so anyway clean yourself up and make me some breakfast. I want a cheeseomlet and a fres class of orange juice. Hurry up I have to go and meet a company.
E:But
M:And our families are coming today make sure you where something suiteble and tonights dinner your cooking. I want you to cook paste, lasagna chicken curry, roti's, daal,rice,soup,soufle and for sweet chocalate mouse, halwa,puddingrice and a apple cake.
E:Maan so much food how can I cook all this alone
M:Come on sweetheart can't you even do this for your Maan sure
E:Hmm
M:Oh and here is the list so you won't forget anything. And oh yes I will be home at five. Have a lot of work to do.
E:Maan when will we have time alone.
M:Hmm when I am back

When Maan left Emma screamed it out.

Emma's monologue
Eh I am freezing still I acted cool in front of Maan, And he gave me such a long list with stuff to coook. This is immposible. Wait I will go to the beauty salon cat myself ready and order all this before Maan is back he will never know and he will be impressed. Oh he will love me so much after tonight.

M:Emma is my breakfast ready and did you iron me clothes.
E:Yes Maan
M:Eh this is disgusting to call this a cheese omlet anyway make sure the food it perfect tonight. I have arrenged all the stuff so you will not have to go to the market.Oh and I have blocked your credit card I love to have everything in my control.
E:Eh how sweet but I have no money so eh can
M:Oh relax you need no money I have taking care of everything and if you need anything just call me.and I am so lucky that you understand me.
E:Eh Maan I need to buy a new dress.
M:Oh there must be something in you closet
E:But
M:Now now concentrate on tonight's dinner. I have to go now bye.

Emma tried to hug Maan again.

M:No hugs after such a disgusting breakfast.So you better impress me tonight with the dinner.

Maan winked at Emma and left, grinning like a devil.

Emma's monologue
Ehh no money I have to work and Maan is insulting me or giving me work. Ehhh I hate this. I better impress him tonight. Because I can't handle this anymore.And now I will have to cook all by myself.

Maan entered D&G feeling a bit nervous. He took a deep breath. There goes nothing. Abigail walked into Geet's cabin.

A:Ma'am your new secretary is here.
G:Hmm send him in.

Maan walked in with a charming smile on his face, all confidence. While inside he was nervous like a 4 year old child, who is going to school on his first day.Geet looked up and got the shock of her life.

G:What the hell are you doing here.
M:Ma'am I am your new secetray
G:OH No
M:Oh yes I've got the contract
G:Which fool hired you
M:Well Abigail took my intervieuw but you singhed the contract.
G:I can't believe it I trusted her how can she tak the owner of the khurana contructions as my sectray didn't she notice that something was fishy even maneet has got more brains then her ehh
M:Ma'am I know I am the MD of KC but I don't know anything about fashion and that's why I am here. And Abigail understood that and she felt I have the qualities to be a good secetray.
G:You suddenly intersted in fashion your right Listen MR.Khurana what every is going on in her sick mind is not going to work got it I am so over you
M:Ma'am I just here to work
G:Oh Really fine. I will make sure you work
M:You sound like working is a bad thing

Maan giggled.

G:I am happy your amused but I don't pay you to laugh. Here are some files I want you look or everything is correct, make them in order. Go to the archive and do the same with the files which are in there. Get it Mr. Khurana
M:Yes Ma'am but Ma'am I am your employ not your client anymore, so why are you calling me Mr. Khurana
G:Maan take the files and go
M:Hai my name sounds so heavenly from your mouth.
G: EH GET OUT
M:Yes Ma'am btw you look beautiful
G:EHH

Maan mad a run for it. He went to the archive and made some phone calls. James Geet's personal D&G postman knocked on her door.

G:In
J:Ma'am flowers
G:Flowers

Geet took the flowers and looked what was written on the note.

Note:Sorry Misty I know I hurted you a lot
Only and forever yours Dhust Danav

Unkowinly Geet got a smile on her face. But the smile vanished that fast.

Geet's monologue
No Geet you can't go back whatever happens. This time it's not only your life but also that of maneet's. What if he distrusts you again. NO.

Geet threw to note and flowers away. Another knock on the door. It was again James but this time with heartshaped chocolates.

Note:
Love you Misty,
Your Dhak Dhak

Geet did the same with the chocolates. 5 minutes latter. James came with heart shaped balloons, written on it please forgive your Dhust Danav.After every 5 minutes James came inside with something. Geet had it it has been 2 hours now. Her patient was gone. In anger she walked downstairs to the Archive.

precap:Geet seeing maan and maneet together

Next:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2884476/deceived-2-link-to-thread-3-p-1?pn=40

Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome!!
Loved it !!!
Update soon !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh boy what's going to happen when Geet sees them together !

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