BECHAIN DILL a maaneet ff update on pg 51

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

awesome n superb update

finally they meet

but i'm curious to know that what happened in the past

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: kamiya
awesome n superb update
finally they meet
but i'm curious to know that whathappenedin the past
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

hii guys thanks for the lovely comment and likes
a special thanks to mayapari

chapter-6

in a room of the hotel geet was sitting ,and reeding a file when she heard a knock

geet- come in

knock knock

geet-i said come in

a man open the door and said

man - r u sure

hering this voice geet turn too look and a shoked geet said

geet-adi

adi- yes

geet-tum yaha i mean ao andar ao

adi- geet kasi ho

geet-i am fine adi, aur kuch kam tha

adi-apa ni bhan sa mil na tha

geet-adi

and adi came forward taking geet in a frindly hug and said

adi- we missed u geet,kha chali gai thi tum

geet-kya kar ti adi darji ka chala jana ka bad sab khatam ho gaya (hidding her teir)aur bak9i sab kasa hai

adi- pata nahi kisi ka pas fursat kha thi ki dos to ka bara ma jana ya mil la

geet- tana mar raha ho

adi- kya karu jab tum na asu chupna sikh liya hai mai tana mar na to sikh hi sak ta hu

geet- adi yasa...

adi- kuch mat bol geet jhut bolna tuma nahi ata chor ma ya batana aya tha ki India ki flight book ho khuki hai

geet- mugha pata hai

adi- by geet

and adi turn to leve as he rich til get he turn towards geet and said

adi- usa tumari jaru rat hai

aned he left, geet to her self

geet- tum kuch nahi janta adi aur nahi mai chati ho ki tum log jano kyu ki mugha pata hai agar tum log ko pata chal gaya to tum log us sa naf rat karo ga aur ya mai nahi cha ha ti hu

after living from geet room adi gose to maan room only to find a sharted maan sitting on floor their was no teir in his eyes but the saddness can be seen and adi called him

adi-maan

as maan look at adi he know adi was cooming from geet room and he could not stop him self asking from adi about her

maan- kasi hai wo

adi- tum khud kyu nahi jaka dakh lata ho,plz maan jao aur geet sa mil lo

maan- nahi adi ab phala jasa kuch nahi hai

adi-(shouting)for good seek maan tum kuy nahi samaj ta ho tum na kuch nahi kiya us Din...

maan shood his hand to adi and stand ahd again the face of maan was changed into the face of the gr8 msk the eyes of maan which where having the emotion were covered with the eyes of maan sing khurana

adi- enough maan u cant always run and hid bhind this feak maan who edonot have any emotion

maan-aditaya sing be in ur limite and donot forget that i am ur boss

adi-sorry sir

maan- did u book the tiket for india

adi- yess sir and ms handa as been informed

maan-ok u may leve

as adi went maan said to him self

maan-sorry adi but mai apna karib kisi ko ana nahi dasak ta ma kisi ka layak nahi ho na dosti nahi payar aur nahi ak acha...

precap-INDIA

author note - i know guys it was a pakau update but it was important to show the boding which they had once and soon some new character wil be entring and soon we r going in past so be redy for masti + franks + dosti +...

bas yar sab ak hi ma bata do kya

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Edited by anvashakhurana - 13 years ago