BECHAIN DILL a maaneet ff update on pg 51

puja

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Posted: 13 years ago

😃😃hi guys i am puja 😊

this is my first attempt to write an ff and pls if there is

any mistake then do tel😳😳

BECHAIN DILL

character sketch

maan sing khurana-

a bussinessman, handsom and dashing with attitude...

perfect blend of style n arrogance

loves his family... a sweet and carring guy... but a man can change

samera sing khurana-

a fun loving girl... is the eyes of her brother and proud daughter

of her mother

savitri sing khurana-

a elegent lady... a friend for her daughter and idol for her son

adi-

a nice guy works with maan from 8 years he is also known as

maan's right hand

pinky-

adi's assistant... works with him from 1 year a... fun loving girl

Geet-

a mystry to the world

author's note: if u guys like it then do press like botton and comment😊😛

a big thanks to mayapari😊😃

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puja

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Posted: 13 years ago

INDEX:

CHAPTER -1 -pg.4

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CHAPTER-2- pg-10
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CHAPTER-3- Pg-16

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CHAPTER-4- pg 20

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CHAPTER-5-pg 24

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CHAPTER-6-pg 27

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CHAPTER-7-pg 30

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CHAPTER-8-pg 33

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CHAPTER-9 - pg 39

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CHAPTER-10 - pg41

CHAPTER-11 - pg -47

chapter - 12 - pg - 48

chapter - 13 - pg - 49

chapter - 14 pg - 49

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Reshu

@mayapari

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey dr!!!!!!!!

lovd it...

update soon...

ll be waiting...

n plzzz do color the updates...

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

CS
nice...
cont soon...
sent the buddy invite and pm me...

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello Pooja

Well all the best for ur FF

As an experienced writer I would like to give u some suggestions

Character sketch is good but give some space between the names of the characters

like MSK: Give the description

leave some space and then

Geet...

it would be better for the readers to understand

otherwise it appears more like a paragraph

secondly do use some color combinations in ur updates that would have a better impact

If possible do give a prologue of ur FF it would be better to understand the concept

love-Piya

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Anisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice dear...😊

cont. soon...

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puja

@anvashakhurana

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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks for giving ur precious time guys and i know i should give a colour cobenation but i am from ph and i dont have pc and pls if any one know how to colour then do tel me pls

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nagajyothi

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice dear...
continue soon...

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music

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi mayapari...!

nice PM...

thank you! lovely FF

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music

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Posted: 13 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: mayapari

welcome drlng!!!!!!

😃

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