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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

thanks guys for this lovely response u all gave to BECHAIN DILL

a big thanks to mayapari😊😊

chapter-5

suddenly a sweet but strong voice came

wait


and every eyes turned to look at the most beautiful face

a face which has its own glow

a face which can make any man turn down on their knees!!!!!

for that sec everything got stopped

and a voice came

this is ms handa

Ms GEET HANDA

owner of HANDA CONSTRUCTION

and every eyes turn to look who spoke and it was the ceo of HC

cameras started to click photos and reporters were trying to ask her Q as

Geet walks to the stage and

she told

Geet-

as the board member said that the company who will get this

project its owner should be present and as some time before no

company was won so there was not my need and as the project goes to hc

so i am here the owner of hc and as told by board member the owner of

winning company should be there so i don't thing that i had disobeyed

the board member

listining this every one got impressed

and they came to know how specific she is with her words and board member

also had to change their decision and the project was given to both KC

and HC

between all thes every one missed out MSK whose whole world got stopped

and he didn't move his eyes from her as if he will close his eyes and

she will be gone he didn't listen any thing not a single word what geet

told or other as if his world had stopped and he came back to reality

when adi shook him

plzzz listen to this song for the feel

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uUCkBIelSjM

music ..

and their eyes meet

Koyi fariyaad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise
Koyi fariyaad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise
Tune aankhon se koyi baat kahi ho jaise



as maan looks into geet eyes it was so deep as if there is so much in

tat beautiful eyes

as if her eyes was telling him some unsaid word

but as the whole crowed clapped their eyelock broke and maan and geet

sign the contract and then board member congrats them and

then geet started to meet every one and the party began in the honor of HC&KC

Jaagte jaagte ek umr kati ho jaise
Jaagte jaagte ek umr kati ho jaise
Jaan baaki baaki hai magar saas ruki ho jaise



as geet moved to go washroom maan got restless as if something was

missing he started to find geet his eyes were roaming in every corner as

soon as he saw geet coming out from washroom he took a breath of relief

he was looking at her as if it had been ages since he saw her

as maan was lost in the old days thought he by mistake pushed a person

and walked away

it was looking as his body was alive but there was nothing to feel

music...

as maan was walking towards a client he saw that geet was going to

fall he ran to save her but geet blanced herself and showed her hand

to maan who passed his hand and said

Geet-

mujhe koi sahara ki jarorat nahi and left from there to meet

other person and maan said to himself

Jaanta hoon aapko sahare ki zarurat nahin
Main sirf saath dene aaya hoon


Har mulaakat pe mehsoos yehi hota hai
Har mulaakat pe mehsoos yehi hota hai
Mujhse kuch teri nazar pooch rahi ho jaise




as a board member was talking to maan he saw geet and called her as she

came maan keep looking at her but geet was looking to board member (bm)

and bm asked her why she was not coming in front of world

and geet look at maan and he can see how her eyes were asking him Q

which he can and never wil be able to give ans

music...

Raah chalte huve aksar yeh ghumaan hota hai
Raah chalte huve aksar yeh ghumaan hota hai
Woh nazar chupke mujhe dekh rahi ho jaise
Woh nazar chupke mujhe dekh rahi ho jaise


maan moved from that place he was feeling that geet eyes will tear him

but as he started walking

geet was seeing him from corner of her eyes

maan could feel that geet was looking at him but as soon he turned

there was no geet

as soon as geet saw him turning she hid herself and maan joint adi who

was with the client

Ek lamhe mein simat aaya hai sadiyon ka safar
Ek lamhe mein simat aaya hai sadiyon ka safar
Zindagi tej bahut tej chali ho jaise
Zindagi tej bahut tej chali ho jaise


and maan was left their he was standing as if everything was running

fast but he had stopped

music...

Is tarah pehron tujhe sochta rehta hoon main
Is tarah pehron tujhe sochta rahta hoon main



after maan came down from the floor his thought ran to the day when

he was thinking how to propose geet and...

Meri har saas tere naam likhi ho jaise
Meri har saas tere naam likhi ho jaise



how mera,dev,gunjan,samrat all friends used to tease them that his

every breath is written in geet' s name

Koyi fariyaad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise
Tune aankhon se koyi baat kahi ho jaise
Jaagte jaagte ek umr kati ho jaise
Jaan baaki baaki hai magar saas ruki ho jaise

and as the party got over and geet was going she can't stop herself to

once look at him and as their eyes met maan felt like there is

something in her heart that her eyes were telling but before he can go

to her she walked away and he left towards his room but with her yaddein

as if he was alive but his happiness was lost

music...

author's note-

guys pls do give long comment i felt like crying seeing so😭😭😭

less comment pls do press like button and do comment

sorry for late update!!!!!!

Ll post the next part soon

luv ya

puja😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
wow dr awesome update!!!!!
loved it...
waiting for the past!!!!!!
hmmm tis time long update very good!!!!!!
ll be waiting for next update!!!!!!1
the song was also apt for the situation dr!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
awesome update
finally they met
waiting for the part
update soon
kkiddoo thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
awesome waiting to know more about their past
maangeet_rocks thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
Awesome update... 👏
Dgo mam was in love with geet once and it seems that even geet was in love with maan in the past...
So what happened between them???
Why is geet acting all aloof with maan???
Waiting for the next update...
Continue soon... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
nice
Nivedithachand thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
Really nice puja !!!! Waiting for the next !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Nice part.
Waiting 4 d past.
Pls cont soon.
TanuDDian thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
heey just came across ur ff...
its just awesome love it...
add me in & pm me dear...
continue soon
mysteriousmilli thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely one...
waiting to know more about maaneet's past ...
please continue soon...

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