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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the updates
rehan is like geet and mannat like maan
whom did geet wanna meet atleast once
love the way rehan and mannat conversed and became friends
waiting for the next
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thrilling promo.
Ab aur intezaar nahi hota.
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally read all the parts...

loved them...

love mannat n rehaan...they r like their dad n mom respectively...

lovely promo...

waiting for update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG promo aisa hai to update kaisi hogi
ufff can't w8
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Posted: 13 years ago
Please update soon, can not wait anymore now
Thanks for seasn two of Mera Papa Maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 7

MANNAT AND REHAN WERE SO CUTE AND FINALLY BECAME FRIENDS
THEY REALIZED THAT THEY BOTH HAVE A PARENT MISSING
WHAT IS THE MYSTERY ABOUT GEET AND HER PAST
IS SHE ILL
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Chapter 8


Rano: Leela Mausi Geet k Papa ko phone kijiye..ask him to come as soon as possible (she said in shaking voice)

Leela: Rano Betiya main abhi karti hu (she grabbed phone on side table n called Inder)

Until he came Geet was out of fit

Geet: Maa mujhe jaana hai...(she tried to get up but again fell in Rano's lap)

Rano: Geet utho mat Beta u r weak

Geet : Maa main theek hu..let me go...I hav to take Mannat back (she resisted her mother n got up)

Rano: U r not well Geet..Papa ll go to pick her up.

Inder came within 10 minutes.Leela had already told him.


Inder: Geet how r u Beta ? (sitting next to Geet...he brushed her hair )


Geet: me fine Papa...But I hav to go (she jumped from couch She was teetering in weakness.Rano held her n made her sit on sofa)


Inder: I hav listened u...I ll go to pick her...u hav to take rest


Geet: But Papa


Inder: I hav taken appointment from Dr Gupta on the way back to home...u n ur mom are going to clinic...main Mannat ko le kar wahi aata hu (he got up)

Geet: Papa I m fine…yeh koi nayi baat to hai nahi mere liye is dard main to aab hamesha jine padega (sighed n said in shivering voice)

Inder: No Geet if u want u can come out of it....U don wanna get married its okey hum force nahi karegay.


Geet: Papa what u wanna say.(confused Geet asked if her father gonna drop another bombshell on her...)

Inder:I think u should join office atleast jab tak Mannat school main rahegi…tum sochti rahigi ..aur office main tumhara mann lagega..naye logo se milogi to tumko acha lagay ga.


Geet: Per Papa


Rano: No Geet ur Papa is rite..yeh business tumhara hai tumko he sambhla hai..saara din nahi atleast spend few hours there that much time Mannat spends at school.

Geet: Ji Maa

Inder: But first of all we hav to go for check up.


Geet: Per Papa Mannat ko school se laana hai..I promised her aur main na gayi to uska dil tutt jae-ga


Inder: theek hai hum pehle Mannat ko pick karegay then we ll visit clinic


Geet: Per Papa main nahi chahti Mannat ko clinic le jaao..it ll put wrong impression on her


Inder: Its okey tumko akele nahi jaane dunga..main chalta hu school..hum evening ka time le latay hai..Rano aap Mannat ko sambhal lenna


Rano: yeh theek hai

Geet looked at watch it was 1:00 o'clock...both Father daughter left for school.Inder gav her support.After fit she was weak But for daughter she had to go.



(This is common in patients of depression or migraine.After fit they feel weakness n within hours they again become normal n start their normal life.)


Khuraana Construction

Maan left his cabin in hurry.


Maan: Addi I m going to pick Rehaan.agar kush important hua call me (put on his goggles n without getting answer from Addi he moved)

Addi: Ji Sir

He reached exactly 1: 30 n Geet n Inder were already there waiting in car

At excet time supervisory attendant takes attendance of students n makes them to b in line n brings them toward school gate..

Rehaan: Mannat aab hum friends hai..main apne tumko apne Papa se milata hu wo mujhe pick karne aa-a-gay(he whispered

Mannat: Aur Mannat apni Mommi se theek hai..she ll b waiting for me.(she grinned ear to ear)


Rehaan: theek hai

Attendant was taking signature of parents in front of each student name .Who ever came here to pick their wards.Inder asked Geet to b inside car n moved toward gate n Maan also followed him

First Inder signed attendance register


Attendant: Mannat Handa chaliye beta apke Nanu wait kar rahe hai apki.(lady attendant calls her in loving way n brings her to Inder )


When she heard Nanu was here.She became sad


Mannat: Mommi promised me..wo nahi aayi(her eyes got wet)


Inder: Aise kaise ho sakta hai Mommi promise kare or wo aaye na..she was waiting in car..Nanu ne socha hum apko gate se le aate hai..aap gussa ho humse (he bent on knees n cupped her face)

Mannat: Sachi Nanu..if she is here fir hum gussa nahi (expressions suddenly changed in her eyes..those flooding eyes were now twinkling in happiness)


Inder:Sach beta wo dekhiye (he grabbed her hand n pointed his finger toward car..coming out of exit door...Geet waved her hand a smiled)


Mannat: Sachi main Mommi aayi hai..Nanu I lov my Mommi (she cracked a smile)


They were in convo when Maan also came out from exit cradling Rehaan in his lap


Maan: Rehaan beta dekha Papa ne promise kiya tha..aur aa gaye na..(he kieed his son softly )


Rehaan: Wo to aap aate hi..Mere Papa Maan kabhi bhi promise nahi break nahi karte.(he kissed Maan back)


Mannat heard nothin else matter of father son convo.Jst three words echoed in her mind 'Mere Papa Maan'

Rehaan: oh Papa (he hit his own head with hand)

Maan: Kya hua

Rehaan: Papa Rehaan has made a friend first day…I promised her k aap se introduce kar-vana hai..

Maan: She is a girl..Papa hesitate to talk with girlz..but beta 2 kadam aagay…(she teased)


Rehaan: But papa..2 kadam aagay kya meaning Papa.

Maan: nothing waise kahan hai apki frined.

Mannat also told Inder about Rehaan n pushed her toward that direction.Rehaan jumped down from his lap.When he found Mannat coming toward him he laughed aloud.

Rehaan: Yeh Mere Papa hai Mannat (he grabbed Mannat's hand)

Mannat: Aur yeh Mannat k Nanu (Mannat introducted Inder to Rehaan)

Both man looked at each other n were surprised to see each other.KC had Handas new shopping Mall project.so they knew each other.

Inder: Mr Khuraana aap.

Maan: Mr Handa…(both men looked at each other in surprise)

But before they could say more.Mannat jerked Inder's hand

Mannat: yeh Rehaan hai Mannat ka friend (she introducted )

Inder looked at Rehaan n Maan at Mannat.Maan smiled at her

Maan: oh to aap hai Mannat (he understood Mannat was Inder's grand child as she asks him Nanu )

Mannat: ha hum hai…koi aur Mannat to nahi hai yahan..so its sure hum he hai Mannat Handa ( she yelled putting hands on waist )

Maan was speechless lookin at such a smart girl in front of his gentleman son.

Inder: Rehaan apka beta hai Mr Khuraana


Maan: Ji aur Mannat apki grand daughter

Inder: Ji its a pleasant surprise to meet u ..aur hamari Mannat ne apke betay se friendship ki its really great..Warna she is much choosy.itni jaldi friend nahi bannti


Maan: Same for me its great to b in touch with great man lik u .Pehle business k silsile main baat hoti thi..aab inko pick karne ka excuse ban jaa-a ga (he laughed )

Mannat: aap hi baat khatam ho gai...let me speak (she intrupted .She came in front of Maan)…aapko pata nahi lunch main pasta nahi detay..(she looked in Maan's eyes with ful of anger )

Maan: apne mujhe se kush kaha beta


Mannat:apko suntan nahi


Maan: Nahi wo

Mannat: Nahi wo kya…aapne Rehaan ko lunch main pasta diya. Agar Mannat ka lunch nahi hota to wo kya khata.(she burst on Maan in such a way He was not able to think what to say back

Maan: Rehaan ko apne apna lunch diya .But he has own lunch box

Mannat: Ha…hum donno ne lunch share liya..momi kehti hai frinds sharing karte hai…hume Rehaan ko apna lunch diya aur Rehaan ka tasteless Pasta khaya.(she gav reason behind this disclosure why Rehaan had to hav her lunch )

Rehaan: Papa ..Deepak uncle nahi mujhe lunch diya tha…Pasta but wo taste less ho gaya (he made pity face)

Maan: apko acha nahi laga…betay Papa ne check nahi kiya sorry beta agay se aisa nahi hoga.(he put his hand on Rehaan's head)

Mannat: aap rehne dijiye..Mannat ki mommi Rehaan k liye lunch dengai…

Inder: Mannat to much beta..uncle knows what to do.


Mannat: No Nanu ..hume promise kiya hai Rehaan se lunch k liye.(she opposed .Maan was surprised to find such a confident girl)

Inder: theek hai aab chup karo (he put his hand on her mouth Mr Khuraana so sorry…Mannat kuch jayada he smart hai pata nahi kyo..sorry if she hurt

Maan: No no Mr Handa no need to feel sorry..…She is jst lik Rehaan..I m happy k my son has such a carring friend .Plz don b formal..aap fikar na karre..aur aap bhi Mannat...hamara servent Nakul nahi tha..other wise wo sabh dekh leta hai..

ll update after some time.Hop its good.If u find before my pm pkz read n comment.I ll send pms after next update


Lov


Jass


(tense liberties according to rules of contemporary writing)




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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi sweety how r u ...

yahooo meee first at my cry baby post...

now let me read it first than i will comment...
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update... loved maan manat talk... geet ko bahar ku nahi bulya...huuu something fishy dear...
waiting for next part ... come back soon with another dhamakedar update... we r waiting ...

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