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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#491

Originally posted by: mayapari

yup...
plzzz
plzzz
preety plzzz😭😛

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#492

This update is specially for you mayapari (sorry don't now your real name)

Part 14
G:I hope you succeed Maan.
M:If your wishes are with me. I am sure I will Geet.

Geet smiled.

M:Shall we leave Ma'am.

Maan said opening the door for Geet.

G: Sure let's go.

Maan stopped the car in front of her door. He got out of the car and opened Geet's door.

G:Thx Maan
M:Geet pleas stop thanking me
G:Hmm maybe after Saturday, till then you are a stranger for me. Bye stranger
M:Bye beautiful stranger. And call this stranger if evil Blondie is mean.
G:Evil Blondie😆 Is that how you're gonna call your would be mother in law😉
M:Geet she is not my would be mother in law.Got it, never say that again!
G:Whatever

Geet turned away angry

M:Geet I am not planning to marry Emma.
G:When am I saying you should marry Emma
M:Then stupid how can Evelien be my mother in law
G:Whatever ever Maan

Geet turned away again.

M:Geet Rano is mine would be mother in law.

Geet turned around with tears in her eyes.

G:Promise Maan
M:Hmm that depends on Saturday.Maan smirked.
M:Now go
G:Bye Maan.

Geet walked in with a huge smile on her face.

Evelien:GEET
G:Yes
E:WHERE THE HELL WERE YOU. AND WHAT ARE YOU WEARING.
G: Wo

The door openend. Mohinder was home. He walked into the kitchen.

E:Geet beta were where you?Emma told me you didn't have any class.
M:Hello everyone. Don't we greet anymore.
E:No Mohinder acteully Geet had no class today and I don't where that girl was all day long. I was worried sick.
M:Oh you should have called her to ask her. Anyway Evelien, she went to meet someone special.
E:But Mohinder she went wearing a different dress and she came back with a total different dress.
M:That's because your gave her that a hideous dress. Evelien I think you should let Geet decide for herself what she wants to where. She is a sensible girl you now. And Geet if you don't like a dress just tell Evelien. She won't get hurt, trust me Right Evelien.
E:Yes Geet you could tell me, I wouldn't mind.
M.Talking about dresses. What the hell are you wearing Emma.
Emma: Do you like it, Mohinder papa.
M:Like it I hate it. You're never wearing this again. It's so revealing. Why can't you were what you where wearing before. What was wrong whit those cloths.
Evelien: But Mohinder she is growing up. She needs to wear more girlishly dresses.
M:Evelien make sure she never wears such a dress again. And if she needs to wear more girly dresses, then why doesn't she wear clothes like Geet. Look how nice Geet looks.
Evelien: Alright Mohinder. Why don't you go and get fresh and I will set up the table.
M:Emma go and change
Emma:Yes Mohinder papa.
G:I will go and change to.

Geet rushed out of there. She was not in the mood to be scoulded by Evelien mom or how Maan calls her Evil Blondie😆

In the evening Mohinder came to Geet's room.

M:Geet can you come to the terrace. I need to talk to you.

Geet stood up and went to the terrace, wondering what was wrong.

G:Yes dad.
M:Geet I saw Maan in front of the house.
G:Dad I was planning to tell you
M:To tell me what, that you can't cross a road. Geet I am sure I learned you in your childhood. First to look right, then to look left, before you cross the road. What if Maan wasn't there. I don't no what would happen.
G:Dad he told you
M:Yes he told me everything. I am happy he dropped you home. Nice guy I really like him.
G:Really dad.
M:Yes but I still want to talk to him Saturday. Need to make somethings clear.
G:Right dad. Dad what did Maan tell you about my dress.
M:He told me you hated it, but you didn't want to break Evelien's heart, so you said nothing. And at school you had tears in your eyes.
G:And to cheer me up he brought me that dress.
M: I've got a feeling he really likes my little girl. Btw Geet did go to the graveyard, today.
G:Did Maan told you that.
M:No I saw it on the glow of your face.You always have that glow when you Rano.
G:Hmm you now dad. Maan meeted mom today.
M:Hmm so your mom meet him before I did, not fair. Did she like him.
G:Alot.
M:Geet I am not talking about you. I am talking about Rano.
G:DAD
M:😆
M:Well princess. I am going to my study, maybe you should go to your room to.
G:Yes that I will go after a while.
M:Alright princess.

When Mohinder left, Evelien came to the terrace.

E:SO MAAN GAVE YOU THAT DRESS HUH. WHY COULDN'T HE AFFORD TO SEE YOU WALKING NEXT TO HIM LOOKING ALL TACKY.

Geet turned around.

G:Evelien mom what are you saying.
E:You heard me Geet. I DON'T WHAT HE SEES IN YOU. STUPID ME HE DOESN'T SEE ANYTHING IN YOU, YOUR JUST A NICE TOY FOR HIM. HE WILL PLAY WITH YOU AND THEN TROW YOU AWAY.
G:STOP IT Maan is nothing like that, he truly loves me.Geet said while sobbing.
E:STUPID GIRL IF HE LOVED YOU. HE WOULD HAVE LIKED THE WAY YOU WEARING LOOKING IN THE MORNING.BUT HE DIDN'T. INSTEAD HE FELT ASHAME OF YOU AND GOT YOU NEW CHLOTES. MARK MY WORDS HE WILL USE YOU AND DUMP YOU LIKE SOME FILTH.

After saying those hurt full words. Evelien left. Geet fell on the ground crying.

End of the diary
Maneet closed the diary in anger.

Maneet's monologue
I hate you Evelien for making my mom cry. Mom was wrong by not showing Grandpa your real face. Mom should have exposed your real face to Grandpa. Evelien is a bad person, I am sure she will hurt or maybe she already hurted grandpa.

Geet came walking into the room.

G:Enough history for today. Sleeping time.
M:Hmm mom can I come to office tomorrow.
G:Sure but who is going to learn history then.
M:I will learn it there.
G:Fine no sleep.

Geet grabbed the history book and put it in Maneet's bag. She tucked Maneet in and gave him a goodnight kiss.

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Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#493

wowww mel awesome mindblowing update yar

waiting for next update😍

Edited by sona-rai - 13 years ago

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music

@music_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#494

mel, will read UR update then update epi of jOCK and MSWG

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Reshu

@mayapari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#495

thanq sooo much🤗

awesome update!!!!!!!!!!

loved the father daughter talk...

wanna know wat happened !!!!!!!!!!

blondie!!!!hahaha😆😆

nice update cont soon ll be waiting😊

luv yu loads🤗

Edited by mayapari - 13 years ago

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: music_girl
mel, will read UR update then update epi of jOCK and MSWG

NONO forget my update update my jockey

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music

@music_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#497

lovely update dear hate gosh damn evaline and will comment more tommorow!!!

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#498

😃

Originally posted by: music_girl
mel, will read UR update then update epi of jOCK and MSWG

hi frankie🤗 waiting for updates yar😃

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Reshu

@mayapari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: mel420

NONO forget my update update my jockey

ME TOO WAITING FOR THE JOCK...

update soon😃

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504887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#500

awesome update Mel!
loved it!
Wow! Maaneet is back! Thank you Mel!
Whoaa! Now I am dead sure that Maaneet is MaanEet's son with "I-am-the-great-AYM MSK-attitude"!
So Maan be ready to face Maaneet's love or wrath! So better you not be a flirt!
awww poor baby Geet! How much will he hurt her? He is going on with the chant my wife my wife grrr! He is hurting our poor baby Geet more!
OMGGG changed Geet! Hope that affects Maan somewhere too!
Btw what did she mean by forgetting him and all?
awww their past...

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