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Ruchi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#531

me back…to give looong comments as promised….😉

PART -13

Maanland Haaye…..😳

why do i feel that Maan not talking with her dad has something to do with all these misunderstandings???😕

Loving their college moments!!!😳

Aww Maaneet is so chweeet!!!😳

Time to study history again!!😆

Ugh i just hate the name Mrs. Brown… Mrs. Maan is a much better option…😉😉

Loved the update!!!

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: music_girl
mel, where r u here???

got college till late missing ya a lot

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: music_girl
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BEWARE

I am waiting for an update!

😆 Happy holi to yo to dear I will updating soon

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Ruchi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#534

PART - 14

EVIl BLONDIE….😡

awesome name… loving Maan for it!!😆

aww Maan actually considers rank as his Mother In law….😳

oh god This evilien is getting on my nerves…. 😡

Loved how Mohinder showed her position and turned the tables on that clothes thingy!!!😆

Oh man how can she say such hurtful things to Geet???😭

Awesome update… eagerly waiting to study more History….😉

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: ruchs
me back'to give looong comments as promised'.😉

PART -13

Maanland Haaye'..😳

why do i feel that Maan not talking with her dad has something to do with all these misunderstandings???😕

Loving their college moments!!!😳

Aww Maaneet is so chweeet!!!😳

Time to study history again!!😆

Ugh i just hate the name Mrs. Brown' Mrs. Maan is a much better option'😉😉

Loved the update!!!

glad you liked it yeah your right Mrs. Maan souds better I am sure maneet agrees with you

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: ruchs
PART - 14

EVIl BLONDIE'.😡

awesome name' loving Maan for it!!😆

aww Maan actually considers rank as his Mother In law'.😳

oh god This evilien is getting on my nerves'. 😡

Loved how Mohinder showed her position and turned the tables on that clothes thingy!!!😆

Oh man how can she say such hurtful things to Geet???😭

Awesome update' eagerly waiting to study more History'.😉

loved you colored update thx for your great comments. was missing your long comments yesterday

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: music_girl
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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#538

Happy holi here's your guys holli gift.

Part 15
G:Enough history for today. Sleeping time.
M:Hmm mom can I come to office tomorrow.
G:Sure but who is going to learn history then.
M:I will learn it there.
G:Fine no sleep.

Geet grabbed the history book and put it in Maneet's bag. She tucked Maneet in and gave him a goodnight kiss.

Maneet so badly wanted to read the dairy further, but he couldn't, mom would get suspicious. The next day Geet and Maneet went to the office.When they entered, Geet's phone rang.

G:yes Abigail
A:Ma'am Mr. Khurana called. I fixed a appointment at 4.
G:Alright

Geet started working and Maneet sat on the couch and started learning history😉.

Dairy
G:STOP IT Maan is nothing like that, he truly loves me.Geet said while sobbing.
E:STUPID GIRL IF HE LOVED YOU. HE WOULD HAVE LIKED THE WAY YOU WEARING LOOKING IN THE MORNING.BUT HE DIDN'T. INSTEAD HE FELT ASHAMED OF YOU AND GOT YOU NEW CLOTHES. MARK MY WORDS HE WILL USE YOU AND DUMP YOU LIKE SOME FILTH.

After saying those hurt full words. Evelien left. Geet fell on the ground crying.That's when her phone rang. She looked at the caller id, it was Maan.

G:Hi (she said with a broken voice)
M:Geet are you alright
G:Yes
M:Are you crying
G:No
M:don't lie, did evil Blondie do something
G:She was just being herself
M:Evil

Geet smiled between her tears.

M:what did she say
G:She told me that you don't love me, that you are ashamed of me, that's why you bought those chlotes for me.
M:Geet close your eyes.

Geet closed her eyes.

M:Look deep inside your heart. Think about what I did today. Was it love or something else.
G:Maan I trust you
M:Then don't cry Geet. I was planning to tell you this Saturday, but I think it's better to tell you now. Geet I really love you. And I am planning to keep you a prisoner for the rest of your live.

Geet smiled and blushed.

G:Sounds like a plan, but what if the head officer won't let you.
M:Hmm then I'il stalk him till he says yes.
G:Maan I
M:Yes you
G:I
G:
M:yes
G:I needed to tell you, I told you na I will explain dad everything.
M:HUh
G:😆 Yes about you dropping me. Why what were you thinking I was talking about.
M:hehhehe very funny. BTW Geet I told your dad everything, because I knew you would say nothing about evil Blondie to your dad.
G:thx Maan. Dad preached evil Blondie. It really felt good.
M:Geet I don't want to hear thx
G:then what do you want to hear
M:it starts with I
G:Acha
M:yeah come on say. I know you want to
G: I need to go to bed.😆 Bye Maan.

Geet hung up and ran downstairs. She heard her dad talk on the phone.

M:Hmm that's good news. Alright thx for the information.Alright bye.
G: Dad who where you talking to.
M:It was the detective.
G:detective
M:yes I asked him about Maan.
G:And
M:He is from a goof family looks like a great guy.
G:that's great dad.

Evelien walked inside the study.

E:You look happy Geet.
G:I am really happy.

Evelien gave her a confused look.

M:The detective found nothing about Maan
E:That says nothing Mohinder. It is not a guarantee, that he is not playing with are little girls feelings.
M:No no no trust me Evelien the guy is really serious. I am a man trust me on this one.
E:I do but I just don't wnat Geet to get hurt.
M:Don't worry nothing of that sort will happen. Geet you must be tired go to bed.
G:Hmm good night
E&M:Good night.

Geet walked into her room.

Emma:You look happy
G:I am. Maan is so sweeet and great and
E:Geet get a grip on yourself what if he is just pretending.
G:No I trust he blindly
E:Are you sure, cause I have heard some stories about him at school.
G:What kind of stories
E:Well that he is a flirt. He plays with girls feeling and then dumps them, like there some kind of filth.
G:Any proof.
E:No but Geet
G:but nothing I trust him. I trust him more the myself.
E:Geet is that not a little fast.
G:No, love means trust without trust there's no love. If I love him that fast, then no it is not to quick to trust him.
E:be careful
G:I will and if he does anything wrong you will hit him for me right.
E:yep promise

Both Emma and Geet laughed. And then went to sleep.While Emma went to dreamland, Geet went to Maanland😉.

End of the diary
Maneet heard a knocking on the door.

G:Come in.
Maan:Hi Mrs. Brown.
G:Hello Mr. Khurana. Pleas take a seat.

Maan sat down. Maneet stood up and walked towards Maan.

Maneet:Hello remember me.
M:Hi yes I do. Maneet right?
Maneet:Yep
G:Maneet go study your history

Maneet walked back to the sofa, but he wasn't planning to read the diary. Not when Maan was sitting here right in front of him.
Maneet's monologue
Sorry mom history has to wait, the present needs me today.

He acted like he was reading, but actually he was listing to there conversation.

M: I looked at the sketches. I think me wife will like dress 3 a lot.
G:you mean this one:

M:yes this is the one. It will look perfect on her.

Geet smiled.

G: I am sure it will. She must be really beautiful. I loved meet Mrs.Khurana

Geet said like really meant it.Maan was take back by her comment.

Maan's monologue
Maan she doesn't love get that straight her your thick head. That's why she is so cool about it. Show her you don't care either.

M:I am sure she would love to meet her favorite designer to. Maan said with a cold smile.

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Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago