Cross connection:maaneet ss,part 9-pg 11 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
wow..amazing update.
love it.
cant wait for the nxt update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
amazing update
update next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Interesting story..waiting for Maan condition..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
sound tooo gud
hey pm me dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 5

GEET:Pls sorry,sorry,sorry,maaf kar dijiye,main hope karti hoon aap un logon mein se nahi ho jo ladkiyon ka no. mila nahi tang karne lag jate hai.

In the mean while maan was irritated with her non stop talking and moreover she was not allowing him to reply also.

MAAN(St):raat ke ek baje ek ladki ne mere yani maan singh khurana ka neend karab karne ki zurrat ki.lekin is ladki ki awaz mein kuch jadu zarur hai jiske sunte hi ek sukun sa mil gaya.

GEET: Hello,kya aap sun rahe hai.

MAAN:Hmm..

GEET:Kya aapne mujhe maaf kar diya.

MAAN:Tumhe kya lagta hai,mere itna time waste karne aur neend karab karne ke baad tumhe itni asani se maaf kar dunga.

GEET:Huh...toh phir

GEET:Toh phir mein aisa kya karoon ki aap mujhe maaf kar de.

MAAN:(with msk special grin) tumhe mera alarm ban hoga.

GEET:Okay( without thinking)

(maan smiled at her)

GEET:Kya...kya matlab.

MAAN:Baat bohot hi sidi iska matlab hai tumhe mujhe roj subah utana hoga woh bhi good morning wish ke saat.

GEET:Yeh kitna ajeeb condition hai.aur toh aur agar main maan bhi gayi toh mujhe kaise pata chalega ki unhe kab jagna hoga.

MAAN:Toh kya tum tyaar ho mera yeh shart manne ke liye.

GEET:Ab galti ki hai toh uske liye prayschit toh karna padega.

GEET: lekin mujhe yeh pata kaise lagega ki aap ko next din kitne baje utna hai.

MAAN:Simple iska matlab hai ki tumhe mujhe aage din raat ko call karna hoga aur subah ka time bhi tumhe tab hi pata chalega.aur haan ms.wrong no. Mujhe ab sona hai aur haan kal mujhe sharp 6.AM uta dena.

GEET:Aur kya main jan sakti hoon mujhe yeh kab tak karna hoga.

MAAN:Tab tak jab tak mujhe ye nahi lagta ki tumhe maaf kar dena chahiye aur bhul kar bhi apne iss shart se bagne ki koshis mat karna nahi uska anjam tik nahi hoga.mujhe ek min hi lagegi yeh jaanne ke liye ki tum kaun ho.

Geet got scarred due to the harshness in his voice,can he realy will be able to know who i am and he seems to be dangerous.

MAAN:Okay then good night ms.wrong no.

GEET:(with a shaking voice) good night.

MAAN disconnected the call and was feeling relieved frm the frustration which he was carring after geet's morning call.and he slept with a smile on his face.

Precap:maan and geet's whole day after their first good morning.

HEY GUYS PLS COMMENT AND CLICK ON LIKE BUTTON IF U LIKED THE UPDATE AND TELL ME IF I SHOULD CONT. STORY LIKE THIS OR SHOULD CHANGE THE TRACK.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh ... finally you updated
it was lovely update
please cont soon now
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow this is very interesting concept yaar...

maza aa gaya pad kar...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Awesome story read in one go
loved the cross connection between maan and geet
please update soon and pm me

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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry yaar..like button not working..
loved maan's shart...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
di u updated after such a long time
loved the update
loving the story like this only for now
will be waiting for next ...
update soon

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