Cross connection:maaneet ss,part 9-pg 11

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INTRODUCTION

the life of human no one can plan the future ,a small incident,a person,a call or even a wrong number called by u can change your life.same thing happened to geet a wrong number called by her changed not only her,but some one else life also.

CHARECTER SKETCH

GeetHanda:Daughter of mahinder and rano.18yrs old ,very beautiful,intellegent and bubbly girl who belives in living life fully.

Mahinder handa:very well known buisness man of delhi and owner of handa industries.He is a kind hearted man who loves his children Geet and Brij very much ,he is also a caring husband.

Rano handa:a typical indian house wife.

Brij handa:30 yrs old,handsome.he is the brother cum best buddy of geet,very protective about his sister and fiance.

Dr.kamini malhotra:brij's fiance,28yrs old an emerging gyneacologist of sanjivini hospital.

Pinki sharma:geet's best friend.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmmm sounds good yaar.. post up the first part.. eager to read..
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Part 1
geet:pari pls stop crying like a child.

Pari:Geet you will not understand my condition,u never fell in love with someone.

Geet:may be u r right but crying like this will not change anything.he just left u and that also only for his carrier.i not going to believe this anyway.

Pari:stop it geet! its already hurting me and u r just adding salt to my wound.

Pari started crying again by hiding her face in pillow.geet thought of leaving her alone for a while,after few hours she came back to pari's room. pari's roomate pinki who is geet's best freind is gone home for two days and will return after two days. geet entered pari's room at about 8pm she found her in the same position as she left her.geet din't know how to handle the situation as she doesnot know the actual situation of pari as they know each other only for a month.As geet and pinki joined only a month ago to architecture course .And after lots of buttering session geet's parents allowed her to stay in hostel.Brij virji was the one who convinced their parents after geet's okay to his one condition that pinki will also join hostel.geet use to come to pari's room b'coz of pinki and they became good friend.geet and pinki didn't like to interfere in pari's personal life,but they know she had a bf sid.pari loves him very much.

Geet:pari try to understand crying like this will never help you to come out of this.(an idea struck to geet's mind)wait a min do you have his photo.

Pari:no, but i never kept his photo with me because he is always in my heart.(again started to cry)

geet:oh god stop it not again! Okay leave do you have his number.

Pari:yes,but what you will do with that.

Geet:just give it to me.

Pari:9933XXX5,But what will u do.

Geet:just listen pari i will call him now and u just have to shout at him with all slangs u know. It wil give u great relief.

Geet:be ready its ringing,recall all the slangs u remember.
Some one took the call from other.

Person:hello


precap:geet:oh my god! That means it was not sid and i shouted on a unknown person.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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add me in plzz😉
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sounds interesting
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Part 2
geet:pari he is on the line start shouting at him.
Geet gives her cell to pari
Pari:hello sid i am pari on this side i just want to say that...hmm
geet:just shout pari
pari:hmm(she just start to cry)
geet:oh no pari give it to me.
Pari handover the cell to geet rush towards bathroom
.geet takes the phone
geet:you idiot how dare u hurted my freind.she is an innocent girl who loved u very much and u cheated on her.u son of a b****, u will never get a piece of love in ur whole life,u will die like a dog...
The call has disconnected from other side.
Geet:disconnected any way ,in future he will never think of cheating anyone.
Pari came out from bathroom
pari:geet i just took a decision that i will continue with his freindship may be in future he will recognise my love.
Geet:what!u r saying that u r going to give him one more chance.
Geet:u should have planned this a few min ago, now i don't think he will ever try to contact u.
Pari:geet what have u done,now u r going to make it up for me.
Geet:pari, r u crazy i am not going to do that never
same time pari got a call in her cell
pari:hello sid,i am realy sorry ,i never thought geet will shout at u like this(she was quite for a while)oh that means geet didn't called u.oh its okay then,bye.
Geet looked at pari with confusion.pari started laughing.
Geet:oh that means i didnot called sid instead i called someone else and shouted oh! Thats why there was no reply frm other side.
Precap:pari:i think u should call the person and say sorry.
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Part 3
Geet:that means i have called an unknown guy and scolded him for nothing.so nice,pari all this happened because of u and ur stupid boyfreind
pari:don't blame me for this as u are the one who had inovative area of burning pictures,shouting at person etc.i didn't asked u do it.
Geet:wow! I have done all this so that u will come out of the situation.u are blaming it on me only.
Pari:if anything happened then u have to solve it urself.i am not in a condition to handle all this.
Geet:ok pari no need to worry i will handle it.u go and take rest.
Pari:geet i think u shouid call the person and say sorry.
Geet:but pari i think Mr.wrong number will be very angry .he will definitely shout at me.anyways the mistake was mine then i have to face the consequences.
(geet doesnot want to depress her more so she didn't say anything regarding her bf to her anymore.so after saying good night she left for her room.)
Whole night she was restless thinking how she will ask sorry,what will be the persons reaction.she thought tommarow is sunday will ask sorry frm him tommarow as he will be also free.but least did she know he is such a busy man that he is not free in weekends also.

Will be Cont soon...
Edited by Fandeep - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome concept...
really loved it...
thank u sooo much fr d lovely update...
waiting fr nxt prt...
continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congarts on ur FF
awesome concept...
continue soon & add me in dear
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PART 4
On the other side a young handsome man is sitting in his office ,taking his black coffee.he seems to be very furious over something,just a few minutes ago he shouted over his accountant for a small mistake.Already he was frustrated over his secretory for disturbing him while doing work with her nonscence talk.over that the wrong number.
Maan POV-he was very much frustrated,he was working on Mr.chopra's project when his secratory disturbed him and wasted his time..Again he was trying to concentrate on the project,then he saw his phone ringing,a unknown number.when he recieved the phone and said hello.he heard sound of a girl who with hesitation said hello.before he could say anything he heard the sweetest voice of a girl who is encouraging her friend pari to shout at him.he was shocked as the girls just die to get a glimpse of him and this girl want her friend to shout at him.then he realised the girl with sweet voice is now in the line and she is shouting at him .he was not able to controle his anger, his face had a shade of red due to anger.He disconnected the call.
Now he is sitting in his cabin and drinking his fav black coffee.


Let me introduce u with our one and only MAAN SINGH KHURANA.The most eligible bachelor of Delhi.MD of khurana construction ,the buisness tycoon ,every project taken by him is a huge success.he is the heartthrob of city.he lives with his dadi ,his elder brother dev and sis-in-law nayantara and his niece rahul in the palatial khurana mansion
In khurana mansion
Maan is in his room after his work out session.
Maan:how dare she,she messed with me .now she will see what happens when some one mess with maan singh khurana.
Maan went to his bed to sleep.

In hostel
geet is not able to sleep,she is moving in her bed from one side to another.she checks the time 1AM.
Geet:hey babaji aap hi bataiye mein kya karoon.jab tak mein us Mr.wrong number se maafi nahi mang leti mujhe ye guilt feelings sone nahi dega.
She finaly decide to call him at 1AM only other wise she will be not able to sleep.
Maan was in deep sleep when he heard his phone ring.he checked the time 1AM.
Maan:ab yeh kaun hai jo is wakt call kar raha.he sits in the bed,when he is going to press the recieve button he notice the caller ID showing Ms.wrong number.in the morning when he recieved this wrong number he saved it with this name .
Maan recieved the call with anger
maan:hello
geet:sorry,sorry sorry ,sorry ,sorry...pls aap mujhe maaf kardo subhah ke liye.woh jo bhi maine kaha tha woh aap ke liye nahi tha kisi aur ke liye tha.aap sirf ek bar mujhe maaf kar dijiye,mein nahi toh zindagi bar apne kiye par pachtati rahungi.mein kabse sone ka try kar rahi hoon lekin mein apne guityness ke wajah so nahi pa rahi hoon.

PRECAP:
Maan:teek hai main tumhe maaf karne ko tyar hoon,lekin sirf ek condition per...
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Edited by Fandeep - 13 years ago

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