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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
this is very cute romantic story
o no 7 to 20 no update i can't live without ur update
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Frens...some of u hadnt read my note in last update I suppose.please Don't wait for the next update till 19th coz m not in my city nd cudnt update:( even m missing updating DOL.I ll defiinitely update on 19th,tc frens,sry nd love u all...happy valentines day@-}>-
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey read all the parts in 1 go
awesum ss
one in a million
jus superb
update soon well 19th is k
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
its really amazing...two teenagers behaving like grown ups...im thinking wht dey will do whn dey will b adults...haan?
i really loved it...
thank u sooo much fr d lovely update...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maanluver

hey read all the parts in 1 go

awesum ss
one in a million
jus superb
update soon well 19th is k

oh reallyyy?? thanksss a lott dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
missing u tooo dear.love u
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awesome update...
its really amazing...two teenagers behaving like grown ups...im thinking wht dey will do whn dey will b adults...haan?
i really loved it...
thank u sooo much fr d lovely update...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...
[/QUOTE thanku dear! will update soonabtc
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heyyy!!!!
Just read ur ff in 1 go!!!
Awsome nd just 2 much cute!!!!<3
Vil b waitin 4 ur next update!!
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Part 13

To the sound of breakin glass they were alert...

Maan : geet ye aawaz..

Geet : shayad brij veerji ke room sey...

Maan(ST): brij ka room ...he raised his eyebrows in a doubt...

Maan: brij ka room kaha hai...aur itni zor ki aawaz yaha tak kaise aa rahi hai

Geet: is room ke adjacent me veerji ka room hai..

Maan: geet ek min

Maan stood up.. rolled his eyes suspiciously...and moved towards the direction from where they heard the sound of breaking glass...he was very sharp...he knew in his age what guys do and he wanted to check if brij was upto his dirty games...geet saw him moving towards washroom..

Maan summoned geet in washroom in a low voice

Maan: geet

Geet: babaji ye mujhe washroom me kyu bula rahe hai phirr sey

Maan: geet...yaha aao..

Geet: jhalli tu phirr sey darr rahi hai...jaldi jaa...

Geet: haan maan...

Maan: ye window brij ke room ki bhi hai kya...

Geet: haan veerji ka washroom hai yaha..kyu..

Maan stood on the water closet jumped hanging himself keeping his hands on the wall on which window rested..

Geet's heart skipped a beat..

Geet:maan ye aap kya kar rahey ho...gir jaoge...

the window was really too high...it was risky ...but not for maan

Maan: shhh ..geet 1 min..kuch nahi hoga mujhe...

he opened the window slightly which was small ,a type of ventilator which was of no use and kept closed at the top of the wall... and there he saw what he wanted to...his doubt was correct...he smirked...he took out his cell phone with one hand and clicked his pics where his frends and brij were sitting smoking and drinking and playing cards in washroom...

geet dint knew what he was upto...she was nervously staring him not knowing what to do raising her hands, trying to hold his legs ... she saw him using his phone camera...

maan was not saying anything or brij and his frens cud hear him coz he was in close proximity to them..he captured him drinking smoking and playing cards very nicely...and safely get down closing the window... smiling wickedly...

geet(angry): ye kya kar rahey they aap...gir jatey to...aise glass ki aawaz aayi aur aap kood pade...hey babaji

maan: bilkul gir jata ,,,,agar tum mera paer pakadne me successful ho jati to...

she made a big O shape mouth and turned her face sideways...

maan was reluctant sharing this image of brij to his geet..

he held her shoulders making her look at him...she innocently obeyed

maan:geet mai to mazak kar raha hu ...acha ye batao... brij ka mobile no. Hai tumharey paas..

now geet knew maan was upto something risky...

geet: ji

she gave him his no. And he saved it..

maan: geet tumharey paas mobile phone hai

geet: nahi...m not allowed

maan: hmmm..geet ..ye rakho mera phone...

geet was not sure what he is doing: mujhe iski zarurat nahi hai

maan: lekin mujhe hai...ab se hum isi pe baat karenge

hearing this..her eyes filled up..

Geet: matlab...

Maan: meeshti mujhe jana to hoga na..par is baar mai ek pal ke liye bhi tumhe khud se door nahi mehsoos kar sakta...

He hugged her tighter...she again crushed his shirt in her small fist...she was scared to even think abt this part...

Maan: tumhari pal pal ki khabar lunga mai tumsey ..

She pulled herself facing him...

Geet: is phone sey...she pouted...nahi chaiye mujhe...

Maan: geet...jab bhi meri yaad aaye bus ek baar bol dena...mai nahi aaya to tumhara maan nahi...

She kept her finger on his lips ...

Geet: aap mere maan ho..

Maan: aur tum "sirf" meri geet ho...

Geet: waise aap waha kya kar rahey they...kya dekha aapne brij veeri ke room me...

Maan thought for a while and then he opened the picture gallery of his phone to show her what brij was upto...Geet eyes widened ...

Geet: chi...brij veerji apne frends ke sath ye sab kartey hai...

Maan Looking at her shocked face...

Maan: meeshti ye age he aise hai..sabhi ladkey bigad jatey hai...

Geet looked at him and then away knotting her dupatta,worried and murmuring...she was confused.."ye age he aise hai"...maan understood what she is thinking...

Maan: MEESHTI..sabhi sey mera matlab hai...sab kharab ladkey...mai nahi karta ye sab ..

she was not complaining but concerned for him...

Geet: wo baat nahi hai...mujhe pata hai aap nahi kartey lekin baba kehte hai drinking and smoking is not good for health...aap apni health ka dhyaan rakhna bus...mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye...

She was time and again proving him wrong...she always surprises him...he really needs to understand her a lott... the way she understands him...maan cudnt thank god enuf...

Geet: ab aap in snaps ka kya karenge...

Maan:geet tumhe uske barey me sochne ki aur khaas kar darne ki koi zarurat nahi hai...mujhpe bharosa hai na...?

She hugged him tighter ..clinging him...and he got his answer...


Geet: maan..dadi kaise hai? aapke maa baba?

Maan's body stiffend on her question...how can he tell her...only his parents are responsible for their separation...he hated them...he never wants geet to even know abt those mean people...this mean world...he will keep her secure from them..she was wondering if she asked something wrong ,she could feel his tensed muscles...he tighten his hold around her and she hugged with equal response, their soul clinging to each other...promising to keep each other safe from any turmoil in this world...bcoz for them just being together itself was being away from any disruption one can do to them..

Maan: dadi theek hai geet...aur

She sensed his hesitance...

Geet: aur unhe pata hai ki aap yaha hai???

She changed the topic...if he is not comfortable answering anything ,how can she force him?...she will wait for the right time...

Maan: geet school ki trip thi...aur mai jhoot bolke tumsey milne aaya hu...kyunki...

He cudnt answer why he had to lie to meet his angel...but cudnt gather words to tell her...as if she wants to know..she moved her face away from his chest to look at him...giving him a naughty smile...

Geet: achcha...koi baat nahi... is age me to ladkey aisa kartey hai..jhoot boltey hai ...

Maan couldn't believe this...his meeshti getting smarter...he touched his forehead with hers...and lovingly answered

Maan: achcha... taana maar rahi ho..

Geet: nahi to...lekin ek baat hai...aap mujhse kabhi jhoot nahi bol paogey..

Maan: tumse jhoot bolna he nahi hai

Geet: bolegey bhi to mai aapka jhoot pakad lungi...

Maan shook his head ..he dint know how to handle this love all of sudden,this purity ,this innocence,this sweetness in his life...he cudnt even think what he wud have done if geet was not in his life...what if he wud have left without meeting her...only the thought of not having her by his side shakes him inside outside...he had no anwer to her pure confidence in her eyes...

Maan: uski zarurat he nahi padegi meesthi...kyunki jo bhi mai bolunga tumsey wo sirf sach hoga...aur ab bus mujhe apni baton se itna pagal mat karo geet ki mai tumhe tumhari marzi ke bina tumhe yaha se utha ke ley jau...

Maan(st): tumhe pata nahi hai ki tum meri tadap kitni bada rahi ho geet...

They were lost in their world when supriya again knocked her door...

Supriya: geet...kitna soyegi...darwaza khol...

Kya ho gaya hai is ladki ko

Geet glared into his eyes with a questioning look getting lil scared...when maan asked her to open the door pointing towards the washroom telling her he will be there ...

Supriya: tu theek to hai na..poora din room me ??...aise bhi kya bimar padi hai...??

Geet mumbling: mai theek hu maa...wo haan...mai to pad rahi thi...

Supriya: tune kuch khaya hai subah se..

Geet smiled: nahi maa ...bahuut bhookh lagi haiii...

Supriya: theek hai aaja neeche...mai khana lagati hu..

geet: maa mai upar he khaongi..mujhe tv dekhte hue khana hai...

when supriya left the room...geet locked it and before she could turn ,maan caught her hands and pulled her towards himself backed her towards the wall capturing her between wall and himself...his eyes were upset..

maan:phirr sey dar gayi geet ...tumhe laga ki mai phirr chala jaonga maa ke aatey he...

geet looked down

maan: mai tumhe chod ke nahi jaonga geet...please meri baat ka vishwas karo...ab kabhi nahi...

he cupped her cheeks and kissed her eyes...

They again had their meal and it was time for maan to leave...

Maan: geet ab brij tumhe pareshan nahi karega...phirr bhi agar wo tumharey paas bhi aaye na to mujhe batana...aur haan kal sey khana maa baba ke sath khana...waise meri meeshti to mujhse bhi acha jhoot bol leti hai...

Maan tickling her...haan geet...matlab tum mujhse kabhi bhi jhoot bolke mujhe buddhu banogi...

Geet: maan maan...please ...mai aapse nahi...maan...plsss...mat karo na...laughing...

She hugged him to stop his tickle...panting heavily...and he carried her in his arms making her sleep on bed...

Maan: geet ab mujhe nikalna chhaiye...mujhe subah tak delhi pahuchna hai...

she hld his hand tighter ...he kissed the back side of her hands..

geet (whimpering): mujhe darr lag raha hai...aap subah jana plss..

maan promised to give himself totally on her demands..he will follow what she wants him to do...and here she was requesting him...he didn't like her requesting...he was burning from inside when she said "please" to stop him...

maan : aansu nahi geet...ek bhi ansu nahi ...tum chahti ho na mai subah jau...to bus keh do...

he laid with her on bed on his back...and she was sideways such that her face was touching his shoulders and she rolled her hands round his arms...maan was conscious on her moves..till she adjusts herself in sleeping position

maan: ho gaya geet...

geet: ummm

maan: ab so jao...

he rubbed her hands talking also making her sleep... knowing she will be more upset if he ll leave when she awakes...he captured their face in sleeping position...and set it as their wallpaper image in phone ...and set a note as a reminder alarm at her waking time...

"geet ...dont be upset...i ll call u as soon as ill reach...cant leave you with ur eyes wet...m sorry..and strictly remember my meeshti shud not cry and get scared ...just close ur eyes and ill be with u... take care<3"

He took her anklet again which she was wearing...kissed her forehead and left with heavy heart...

Next: oopsss...nonveg msgs in maan's cell


part 14

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Edited by varshr - 13 years ago
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welcome back hun...missed u...lovely update Maan is getting naughtier but loved their cute romance

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