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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update... Loved their innocence
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...so nice and lovely
this story is full of innocence and is very refreshing because of their childhood and now teenager love
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Posted: 13 years ago
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just read ur ss
it s simply awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mindblowing SS...just read all the parts...it's simply awesome...I am totally hooked by geet's innocence & maan's pure love...
eagerly waiting to know the next... please pm me whenever you update...



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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem just love every bit of this ss i just love it



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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..
loved geet's innocence and her cute questions..!
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awesome part dear...👏👏👏

loved it so much...😳

continue soon...😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

Frens,

I ll not be udating depth of love from 7th to 20th this month coz i ll be travelling..I ll try to give one more update by tomorrow...a greattt thanksss to one and all for liking this ss and appreciating it...please continue giving your love,likes and comments...it gives me enthu to write another update...thanku once again...love u all..dil seyyy<3...muaaah..

TC...Varsh Rai

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Depth Of Love- Part 12

Kindly play this song while reading this update..thanks

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BvrfoXn4xYI


jannaton ke dar khule kuch baashinde the chale
le aaye wo nanhi jaan us khuda ka ek payaam
tab se tu hai jahaan mein ban ke raunak yahan ki meri jaan
khwahishon se bhi aage jo khushi ka mile wo armaan'

Maan was really famished...he dint had anything frm yesterday...he cudnt believe how she comes to know what he needs at this moment ...he nodded sweetly...

Geet made him sit properly on bed heading his back to the head rest ...she took the plate kept aside covered ,she dipped the aaloo paratha in yogurt and offered him,he held her hands near his mouth and did the same making her eat first and then he ate from her hands...she was feeding him with all her sweetness which maan could taste in his food..they kept feeding each other...


Maan: u know geet ...parath is tasting sweet..

Geet (confused): maan lekin dahi me to sugar hai he nahi..smelling the yogurt with her sweet little nose..


Maan smiling and shooking his head : dahi me nahi hai lekin meri meeshti ke haatho me to hai na..

geet smiled listening meeshti ...

geet: dhatt...aise thodi hota hai..

Maan: meri meeshti khilati hai to aise he hota hai...samjhi tum...

he answered seriously widening his eyes giving her passionate looks...

Geet brought some more parathas for maan from supriya saying she is feeling too hungry now,she knew he was not done...he was lost in her concern and love for him...he was staring her lovingly thanking god for sending his angel from heaven just for him ...nobody had ever made him eat like this,he would have kept eating all his life if geet will feed him this way...she was busy feeding him...

cham cham jani raatein ye sitaron wale hath
bheeni bheeni khushbhoo jaise teri meethi baat
ujla ujla sa ye tan
jaise mehka ho chandan
baahon mein teri guzre mera ye saara jeevan
teri ada mein masoomiyat hai phir bhi hai shokhi rangeeniyat hai
taaron se bhar doon main aanchal tera,
rab se bhi pyara hai chehra tera.. chehra tera.. chehra tera'

when he was done...geet wanted to have the ice candy which he bought for her...which was almost melted by time they finished with their Break fast...She was sitting between his legs and licking her almost melted candy making mess...she was looking extra tempting..maan couldn't stop observing her lips ,her toungue licking the candy...he was holding her waist and staring her when she offered him ...but he refused coz he wanted to have it from somewhere else..he wanted to help her in cleaning her cheeks and lips with his toungue...

Maan(ST): ye kya soch raha hai maan...ye kya ho raha hai tujhe...her jerked his head to bring his wild senses down...

By the time geet finished she was all mess...her hands,her face was all orange...but she cant help..she loved ice candies like anything...she raised her hands getting all sticky ..she pouted cutely looking at maan rolling her eyes looking at her hands...

Geet: Maan mujhe wash room jana hai haath dhone ...

Maan: haan to..

Geet: mujhe chodo na

Maan carried her in his arms..and took her towards the washroom and washed her hands like he is doing it for a baby..he took out his handkerchief and tied her hairs,then washed her cheeks ,lips moving his hands on her face giving her goosebumps...

Geet: maan mai kar lungi

Maan: chup...kar raha hu na mai..

Geet shuddered ..she closed her eyes feeling butterflies in her stomach and maan was busy moving his hands on her face ,her chin, cheeks, corner of her lips...he was playing with his fingers on her face giving her unknown ticklish sensations...the purpose was left somewhere behind...something else was goin on...their racing hearbeats were also not helping..

Maan was craving to feel her ...only he knows how he was living without her dieing every second...and today when she is so close to him,he cudnt stop himsel feeling his angel...

phool hothon pe khile chand aankhon mein mile
phool hothon pe khile chand aankhon aankhon mein mile
bikhre moti subah ki jaise kirne teri ye muskaan
noor barse nazar se noori tujh mein basi hai meri jaan
noor barse nazar se noori tujh mein basi hai meri jaan
teri dhanak ki pyasi nazar hai
deewanagi ye tera asar hai
roohane rangon ka ye aanchal tera
sapno ki raaton ka ye baadal mera.. baadal mera.. baadal mera'

Geet cudnt take this anymore,she was scared and moaned his name making him realize what he was doing...

Geet: maan

Maan : haan...

Geet: mujhe darr lag raha hai..she hugged him..

Maan cursed himself under his breath...he never wanted to scare her with his desires..god knows what is happening with me...geet could feel his heartbeats were racing in the same manner like hers..she kissed his heart to calm him...not knowing it was affecting in contrary...he separated her from himself ... untied her hairs and gave her the handkerchief

Maan: geet poch lo...and he left the washroom..

She wiped herself ,calming her breaths...Somewhere her naive mind was getting their feelings...she knew they love each other and it was their love which is making them end up with such situations...

Geet murmuring:

Geet jhalli... tu kyu darr jati hai...unka haq hai wo kuch bhi karey tujhe...tune kyu roka unhey...dekh naraz hoke bahar chaley gay..

she came out looking for him and saw him sitting on her bed lost somewhere..she immediately sat beside him making a distance...and then slowly moved towards him..held his hand and kept it on her face..

Geet: sorry ...

Maan cudnt take this...sorry..?? but y..for what...??i shud be sorry...i am taking her for granted... he kissed her palms cupped her face and kissed her forehead and kept his head on her lap...

dheere dheere sar chadha tera jaadu aage badha
dheere dheere sar chadha tera jaadu jaadu aage badha
hua khud se juda main phir bhi tujhpe fida main meri jaan
ishq le le tu le le le le, le le mera imtihaan
ishq le le tu le le le le, le le mera imtihaan
soone safar ki tu sohbat hai, bakhshi khuda ne ye milkiyat hai
aaja saja de gori aangan mera, jaise sajaya tune lamha mera.. lamha mera.. lamha mera..

Maan (st)...kya karu mai iska...agar mai tumsey nahi milta geet to mai mar jata sach me...

Maan: Geet mujhe tumsey ek promise chaiye..

Geet: ji

She was caressing his hairs on forehead gazing intently with all her love,her eyes shining...

Maan (in a serious tone): geet tum aaj sey kisi sey nahi darogi...na daarji na maa baba ..kisi sey bhi nahi...hmm...samjhi tum..

Geet: maa baba se nahi darti mai...

Maan: kisi se bhi nahi...koi kuch nhai karega tumhe geet...mai hu na...kuch nahi hoga tumhe...

He caught her hairs in his fist and pulled her towards himself...she bent on his command and he crooked her waist in his arms with one hand and the other playing with her hairs... his face was in her neck and her hairs as a curtain hiding them...he rubbed his lips on her neck and breathed the aroma of her hairs deeply as if he ll be taking this fragrance and her touch with him...and giving his touch of love to her...they were cherishing their mad love for each other..

Well said by someone " Love cannot be done intellectually for the nature of true love itself is madness"

Maan asking her in the same position...

Maan : geet kis sey darr lagta hai...bolo mujhse

Geet softly: kisi se nahi maan...aap kyu pareshan ho rahey hai..

maan tighten his fist on her hairs to control his anger..

maan: MEESHTI


His one word was enough to speak the truth..

Geet: daarji aur brij veerji sey...

Maan : brij tumhe pareshan karta hai??

geet : bus wo aiwai daarji se mujhe daant khilwane k liye idhar udhar ki baatein banatey hai...unhe maza aata hai darji mujhpe gussa karte hai to.

maan roared getting up...no body will scold u from today...i ll make sure that brij will fall on your knees for his life..

geet was scared listening to his words...


geet: maan aap shant ho jaiye please...maa baba mujhsey bahut pyaar kartey hai...koi mujhe kuch nahi kar sakta...mai to dhyan bhi nahi deti brij veerji ki harkato pey..


Maan: lekin mujhe fark padta hai geet...bewajah koi tumhe dekehga bhi to mai uski aankhen nikal dunga...geet hugged him and felt his heavy breaths...it was kind of scaring her..but she cudnt get scared ,she has promised him...

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In living area of handa haweli

sachin: kaha khoyi hui ho supriya

supriya: wo bus geet ko leke he soch rahi thi...pata nahi kal sey ajeeb si harkatey kar rahi hai..aise lag raha hai kuch chupa rahi hai.

sachin: lo phirr shuru ho gayi tumhari chinta...kya chupayegi..uska sara sach to hamarey saamney hai..mai janta hu tum uski bachpan ki baato ko leke ab bhi pareshan ho lekin meri bachchi itni bhi kamzor nhai jitna tum samjhti ho...usne apne appko ko sambhal liya hai...uski tabiyat theek nahi hai isliye tumhe aisa lag raha hai...

supriya smiled : haan aap theek keh rahey hai.shayad mai he jyada soch rahi hu..

sachin: chalo ab geet to aaram kar rahi hai to mai tumhe he kahi ghuma lata hu..

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They were sitting in the same position ..maan's back on head rest ,his chin on geets head...and geet between his legs hugging him and resting herhead on his chest...their eyes were closed...maan was moving his fingers in her hairs ...


It was late in the evening and darkness covering the sky...when they heard a sound of breaking glass..


Next: god helps brij..

part 13

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Edited by varshr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

too gud yrrr...
awsm story.
plz do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update... Very interesting story so far.

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