Depth Of Love-MaanEet ff.part 27/pg137 - Page 16

Created

Last reply

Replies

689

Views

298.1k

Users

121

Likes

3.6k

Frequent Posters

mysteriousmilli thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
Very sweet and cute update dear...loved it...
precap sounds very interesting...
looking forward to know the next...
Varsh.r thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Nilam-

Very sweet and cute update dear...loved it...
precap sounds very interesting...
looking forward to know the next...

thanksss dear...luv u
Little_Mermaid. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
wel come back
awesome update
waiting for prcape😉
anisha_maaneet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago

awesome part dear...

loved it...😳

continue soon...

princes939 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Cute!!!!hate brij!!!!
Ab plz brij ko nikalo is story se!!
Varsh.r thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princes939

Cute!!!!hate brij!!!!
Ab plz brij ko nikalo is story se!!



kyaaa...????abhi to brij ne kuch bhi nahi kiya maaneet ko...?? kuch problem hai is character se????
great_love thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
hey thnxx 4 pm..
its lovely and saddy part dr...
plzzz contplzzz cont sonnn😉nnn. sonnn...
Varsh.r thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago

Hi frens...h r u all?i hope u all are liking this ff..please lemme know if u want something in specific b/w maaneet...and i love criticism for improvement..😆.. so plss do tell me where i went wrong...love u all... thankuu so much..plsss keep liking and commenting..<3

njoy!!!

varsh rai


thanku

5armad, navyanissi, pamil, sheetalvasa, mishgan, nehakapoor7, kabslocks, priyasree,

attitudeshy, MONIJA78, SeemaMartin, qutiegiya, dreamyp, nitya, anna12, maanmania,

manisha259, piyushi, fizza25, icy_magma, angelaraf, Paingel, anky_1205, bhakbhartifan,

esheena, mandy15, prathyusmiling, mannu1988, rosesana, fatema_007, sk_75, anjy-1988v, soorlovemaneet, princes939, seductivepurple, nats024, maaneetmaahi, anisha_maaneet,

love2_soma, dona86, muraadlovesdd, drashti24, priya.shilpa, smallville, ritzy09, NANDY_BRU,

abinash079, ambbiha, mollycoddle, --Ratna--, sindu555, abisamratgunjan, -Nilam-,

shah10, -afsha-, tamanna1391,

please add me if u want pm's

Depth Of Love -14

Geet woke up when he removed her anklet and kissed her forhead,but her eyes were closed,how cud she not feel his touch...she knew he was leaving and that too without telling her ,coz he cant see her in pain..she knew he was doing all this for her,she kept her eyes closed feeling all his movements,as soon as he left..she opened her wet eyes..she gulped her cries till maan was there,and as he left,her eyes cudnt stop her tears,she rubbed her tears and quickly moved towards the window.

She saw him leaving ,he was at the back side of haweli ,and before he cud jump from the long boundary wall, he sensed something and looked towards her window b4 he leaves ...he saw her standing there,he cudnt believe his eyes,his angel was smiling waving her hands,..oh god...it was heart wrenching...he knew she is faking...he looked at her for a while,gave her a flying kiss..she closed her eyes taking his kiss on them,and before he does something insane...he jumped the wall and walked away from her house giving her last loving look...

She went inside checked the phone and the wallpaper.she cudnt help smiling it was mesmerizing pic,they were sleeping together with their eyes closed...she cudnt remove her eyes from his godly face..she kept glaring his pic smiling..and slept in his beautiful dreams.

Geet woke up with his reminder alarm at 6 am.he deliberately set it at this time before supriya comes to wake her up,geet immediately switched off the alarm and read his message..she smiled..a big smile...and moved her fingers on screen...reading the msg again and again.

Supriya knocked her door and she came out of her trance and kept the mobile on silent...maan had iphone 4s..he explained her everything and geet being very sharp and fast learner knows well how to operate the touch screen and all now.She was well aware of most of the basic functions of his cell.she followed her daily routine..her prayer..she took her parents blessing and left for her school with rajji.

____

Khurana mansion

Maan reached his place at 10 am...straight away went to his room as usually avoiding everyone on brkfast table..he felt so contented and peaceful today...closed the door ,laid on his bed, flat and closed his eyes feeling her angelic face...and went to sleep...

Arbaaz: ye is waqt kaha se aa raha hai

Daadi: he went on a trip to kasauli

Arbaaz: kissey pooch key gaya ye..

Daadi: school trip thi ...aur do din sey aapne maan ko ghar mey nahi dekha tab aapko yaad nahi aayi ki maan kaha hai?

Arbaaz gave a frustrating look to his mother..

Daadi: aur waise bhi ab hum aur aap usey rok nahi saktey...ab wo bacha nahi raha..ki uspe koi zor zabardasti ki jaye...now u cant make him move and behave according to you...

Daadi gave him serious looks...as if its time for him to understand their son...atleast now if they could give him what he wants...but daadi dint know,maan had long freed them with any expectation he once had...

Arbaaz: to aap kya chahti hai...mai uskey peeche peeche ghumu aur uski har baat maanu taaki wo mujhse baat karey...mai arbaaz singh khurana hu...mere paas in sab ke liye time nahi...uska har shauk poora karta hu mai...kya nahi hai uskey paas...ye jo paise wo udata hai na wo mere diye hue hai...ek din ye sab band ho jaye na...to dekhna kaise sar jhukaye mere paas aayega wo...aur iskey liye usey mere banaye hue usolo par to chalna he hoga...uski man maani nahi chalegi yaha..

Daadi shook her head...she was afraid they ll have to pay for their deeds...it was useless to even speak to them..she felt maan was right in what he is doing ...

Daadi: talking to u is just a waste of time...

Malaika: sach to keh rahey hai ye...uski zidd dekhi hai aapne...kis tarah wo us ladki ke liye hum sey ajtak baat nahi karta...he needs to understand our standard...har cheeze uski marzi se nahi hogi...ab wo waqt door nahi when he ll take over khurana Constructions ...ye attitude kab tak chalega uska..

Daadi: first you look at urself...come out of ur nasty addictions..then talk abt his adamant behaviour...daadi almost shouted at malaika...

Malaika swinged her hand pushing the plate on ground breaking it into pieces...

Daadi: bus yahi farak hai aap me aur ek achi maa me...ye plate tod kar apna gussa kisi aur ko dikhayega..hume nahi...

Arbaaz: mai bhi dekhta hu maan kab tak hum sey baat nahi karta...

_______

Hoshiarpur

Rajji was totally confused today..geet dint asked her to get into the local bus and follow long route...they were in their school bus today...and geet was in her dream land...looking very different..smiling...making faces...

It was 3 pm when geet reached haweli...she was waiting for his call when she opened his inbox...inbox was filled with some unknown numbers and rest were all from his frends

RexSe*

Vipul

RexSe*

RexSe*

RexSe*

Saurav

Vipul

RexSe*

RexSe*

Saurav

RexSe*

RexSe*

RexSe*

There were many unread messages...by rexse*😉...she knew it is not good to read others personal messages but then it was maan's cell...what's his personal is hers too...she opened the recent msg by rex...

Aaj school nhai aaya..kya yaar...missed you at trip🤣...ok listen...raat ko blue movie dekh rahey hai hum vipul ke ghar,5 in 1 😈...night stay hai ,7 baje pahuch jana...c ya ...

Geet (st): Its an old movie...abhi tak nahii dekhi maan ne...akshay kumar ki movie nahi dekhi...wondering she opened the next msg from rex..

😆😆

A Man to his frend after his suhag raat

Man: what happen😉 why you are so late in getting up..its already evening.

Frend: don ask man...some idiot filled the vasline gel bottle with fevicol...

🤣

Geet dint find anything sensible in the message...first she dint know the heavy word 'suhaag raat'...she was far away from this world where gals do these talks ..even rajji was quite innocent as hers,but raaji had an elder sister,whereas geet was too naive ...she got her periods when she was in eighth...but then she only knew from rajji that it happens every month to avoid stomach ailments ...

She was again and again reading the message...trying to get the meaning...Suhaag raat,Vaseline gel and fevicol etc etc...when her cell vibrated with a message from unknown number...she instantly opened expecting her maan's msg and there it was..

Geet ..its me...maan...calling you...pick it😊

He called her and she instantly picked his call and he rang her anklet bells on receiver...she smiled listening to the music he was playing with them..she wanted to hear him and there he was making her restless...

Geet: maan

he loved the way she utter his name...almost whispering and blushing ...

Maan: haan geet

Geet smiled...closed her eyes feeling him

Maan: kya hua?bolo na...mere call ka wait kar rahi thi?

Geet: sorry meri wajah se aapko late ho gaye ghar pahuchne me...aap school bhi nahi ja sakey

Maan: tumhari wajah sey aaj maine kitni achi nend ki hai pata hai...ek minunte...tumhe kaise pata ki mai aaj school nahi gaya??

Geet: w..w..wooo maan maine aapke frnd ka msg pada

Maan: ohkkk...to isme itna ghabra k bolne ki kya zarurat hai geet...

Geet chirpingly: to matlab mai aapke messages pad sakti huuu..

Maan: haan bilkul...tum jo chaho pado ...its all urs..

Geet: m..m.maine aapke frend ke do msgs pade

Maan: acha ..kiskeyy..

Geet immediately said: Rexse*

It was then , maan realized what he actually permitted geet to read...oh god...he completely forget his inboxes had many uncensored msgs videos and pics by rex...even he hardly read his nv msgs,sometimes he read it and many times he simply avoid viewing his videos msgs and pics...his frends were not the bad boys but were naughty...and at this age guys do share such things ..its good to know certain things at this age afterall;) geet broke his daze asking him...

Geet: aapne blue movie nhai dekhi maan...

Maan was hell shocked hearing the word blue movie from geet

Maan: geeet...no i didn't...u watch blue movie?😕

Geet: haan thodi si...

Maan cudnt believe this...he cudnt think straight...his innocent angel actually watch blue films...

Maan:kisne cd laakey di tumhe uski...😡

Geet: kisi ne nahi..tv pe aa rahi thi...to i watch... thodi si...😕

Maan(st): TV pe!@#$%^&*()... 😕 He wondered if hoshiarpur local channels are playing blue movies ...and here his frends are doing so much hardwork to get the dvd

Maan: geet u shud sleep early at night and shud not watch such movies...

He said it ever so strictly

Geet: w..w.w.o i like the sssong...she was stuttering while speaking...

😆

Maan was again lost in his thots...since when did blue movies started having songs...😕oh god ...they must be playing hindi ones and it might have songs..he was fuming on them...😡

Maan: whatever...just don't watch such movies...it is not good meeshti...

he was worried for her... Geet thot may be maan is refusing coz it has kissing scenes and gals wearing short clothes thats why he is shouting..

Geet: ok...i ll not...

Maan: better...

Geet: maan

Maan: hmmm...

Geet: w..w..wooo i like chiggy wiggy song...can i atleast listen to it...

Maan held his head,ohhh shit shit shit...what he was thinking,,she is talking about akshay kumar's blue and here i am getting all wrong...he cursed himself...maan ..u dirty mind...rex tu gaya,,,tera naam aatey he koi theek tarah se soch he nahi sakta...how cud he even think geet cud watch such stuffs..

Maan: yyyesss...geeet...ofcourse u can...

He knew if he's gonna clear his doubts to her...he ll be into even bigger mess with her questions...

Geet smiled...it was her fav song...she had it in her desktop and use to play it...then geet read the msg to him that rex wants him to come at vipul's place for a blue movie...and maan realized she asked thisss...actually geet was getting all wrong here..😉...

Maan took a breath of relief and took a jug full of water and started gulping it ..his mouth was all dry... when geet again threw an atombomb...

Geet: maan suhaag raat matlab kya hota hai...

Maan coughed spilling all the water on his clothes...

Geet: maaan..kya hua..aap theek to ho naaa...

Maan keeping himself stable

Maan: haan geet mai bilkulll theeek huuu...😭

Now he knew where these questions were popping from...he was planning rex murder today..

Geet: kya hua maan...aap ki tabiyat to theek hai na...

Maan: geet tum ye sab kyu pooch rahi ho...kuch sms pada kya tumne rex ka...

Geet: rex nahi rexse*

😉Maan was crushing his pillow as if it was rex's neck...

Maan: haan wahi geet...just call him rex...and not rex sssee*...he had difficulty speaking that word..ok...

He spoke almost frustrated with rex

Geet: ummm...aap phone pe kitna chillatey ho... mujhe kuch nahi kehna aapse...😭

Maan:😲 geet...sorry... mai kaha chilla raha hu...acha bolo tum kya pooch rahi thi...

He calmed himself...deciding first to cross this stage and then will do something abt it..

She read him the entire msg and maan's mouth fell..he dint knew how he ll be explain her such a low thing...she doesn't even understand suhagraat ...

Geet: maaan...

Maan: haan geet...suhagraat matlab ki shaadi ke din jo night hoti hai na usko boltey hai...

Geet: but maan why one uses Vaseline gel on sr..

He had to open up a little bit else he cudnt explain this...

Maan: geet..after marriage gal and boy kiss each other so to have the soft lips they use gel so that one shud not feel the roughness on cheeks...

He took a deep breath feeling relaxed...and patted his back on his explanation...

next: will update soon😉

part 15

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2741747&TPN=43

Edited by varshr - 13 years ago
anisha_maaneet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago

awesome part dear...

very funny😆

continue soon...

keenu_kk thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
lovely prt dear
ossum one
poor maan dear

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter

1 years ago

Something About You- MG || (Part 92|Page 111)- Last Part

Something About You Hi all Lovelies, I am starting to post a new wonderful story called 'Something About Love'. The credit for writing concept...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pumpkinseed

5 months ago

Maaneet Stories Updates~ New Part Updated~pg 44~30.07.25

You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: SillySoni

1 years ago

Dolent - Maaneet FF - Chapter 17 page 25 - 31/12/24 Dolent - Maaneet FF - Chapter 17 page 25 - 31/12/24

Hi, as the title suggests this story is going to be full of sorrow, but because it's my FF there will be unconditional love as well Whoever...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: WaveTeal

1 years ago

My First Crush * Maaneet TS * 🔺🔺UPDATED @ Page 6 || 28th Mar My First Crush * Maaneet TS * 🔺🔺UPDATED @ Page 6 || 28th Mar

M y First Crus h INDEX ~ A Maaneet Tale ~ CONTENTS : SHOT 1 - PART 1 Page 1 ~ Scroll Down PART 2 Page 1 ~ Scroll Down SHOT 2 : Scarlet Flames -...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Simimaaneet90

2 years ago

Maaneet SS Saviour#2 Part 9 updated on Page 12/28-04-2024

Hello everyone I am back with this one as well……. This is open so you can read but this will be on the vlog, this is open but please do comment...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".