Depth Of Love-MaanEet ff.part 27/pg137

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Posted: 13 years ago

#301

wow what a love...

actually love in this age is very pure...this time they don't know about physical relations nor about money...poor rich difference...it is just purely love only...

amazing and beautiful part...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#302

part 17...awosome
part 18 beautiful...
and part16...gonaa read...
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sdlife19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#303

Superb update dear…

I just love the story..

Their love for each other makes me feel good

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Part 19

Maan: acha kahi nahi ja raha...pehle chup ho jao geet..please...mai mar jaonga...hua kya hai?

Geet kept her fingers on his lips..

Geet : maan...aise kabhi nahi bolna...

Maan rubbed her tears and kissed her eyes...one by one...

Maan: to phirr bolo ki hua kya hai?

He carried her towards the bed and laid her on bed resting her back...covered her with blanket and sat beside her...he cudnt see his meeshti's red eyes...the way to her heart ...her innocent deep eyes were tired...she adjusted herself...maan informed daadi that he'll be at his frends place tonight.

Maan: ab aaram se bolo kya hua ...?

Geet hesitated ...she knew he is short tempered but this was too much for her to take...she didnt know from where to start...somehow she stopped his encounter with daarji but if she ll say anything abt brij then he will surely not leave him..."well thats true!!!!"...so she tried to change the topic acting happily...

Maan: geet itna sochke bolne ki koi zarurat nahi hai...kya soch rahi ho...?

She pouted

Geet: yahi ki aap kitney gusse waley ho...

Maan: geeet baat mat badlo...

[when i write geet with multiple e's ...imagine the way maan use to call her in ghsp..when she was irritating him in out house the first time etc]

Geet: dekha dekha...phirr sey gussa...dusht danav

Maan: kya...kya kaha...

Geet: duuusht...daaanav...mai nahi darti aapse...

Geet dint had to do much efforts ,she dint have to act but she was really happy when maan was there with her...she knew nobody can harm her...no one can separate her from maan,when he is there...her worries evaporated in no time and she continued...

He pinned her both hands on bed...they were fighting like small childrens

Maan: kya matlab...phirr se kaho

Geet stuttered: mmmai aapse nahi darti...keeping her facial expression confident...

Maan loved the twinkle in those eyes...he felt relieved a bit...

Maan: wo nahi ...ussey pehle kya kaha...

Geet (almost whispering): dusht danav

Maan: magar iska matlab kya hai

Geet frustrated : ley...angrej chale gaye aapko chod gaye

she looked away from him...

Maan : geeet... batao mujhe...

She naughtily shook her head...He left her hands and started tickling her...

Geet: maan..nahi maan plsss...stop...iska matlab hota hai...u r wicked ghost...

He stopped at once listening to those words...

Maan: wicked ...ghost...acha...

Geet: hmmm...

Maan: ab batao kya hua...nahi to mai daarji sey jaake pooch leta hu...

Geet eyes widened in shock...

Geet (st):bina baat jane maan maanenge nahi ...she rolled her eyes...

He was about to get up when she held his hand and sit straight on bed hugged him...he kept his one hand on waist and with the other he brought her head close to his heart and looked down to her...he wanted to capture her facial expressions while listening to what happened today..

geet: daarji meri shaadi ki baat kar rahey they

maan held her tight... his nerves were bursting to be violent with just the mention of the word...geet marriage...when he couldnt even hear those words, how geet would have been facing them... their marriage was their life's most sensitive and sacred feeling...they already belong to each other ...and no one can change it...

maan: achanak kaise shaadi key barey me soch liya daarji ne...

he spoke in fury...geet told him how a girl of her town is married and brij wants even geet to get the best in laws and so he asked daarji to search a groom for her...now that was enough to hit maan...why brij has done this...maan was hell furious today ...sameera and now brij..brij had roused the already hungry lion...

maan: brij..

geet feared the way maan took brij's name...

geet: maan lekin baba ne kaha ki wo meri tab tak shaadi nahi hone denge jab tak mai nahi chahti...baba ne promise kiya hai..

geet smiled a little...maan thanked her baba under his breath...

maan : waise geet tumhe pata hai na...ki tumhari shaadi sirf mujhse hogi..tumhe ma baba aur mujhpe vishwas nahi hai?

geet: hai maan...poora viswas hai...wo to baba ghar pe nahi they to mai darr gayi thi...

geet looked up to meet his eyes...she could read them...they were quiet, happy then furious...there were mixed emotions...maan tried not to show his restlessness to what he was aching to do with brij and ended up confusing her...

maan: geet ab tumhari aankho me aansu nahi aayenge...its my promise...

geet gave a big smile and hugged him again hiding her face in his neck...and he looked at moon thinking deep...maan didnt want geet to even have the slightest of the doubt what was goin in his mind ...he cant afford loosing her smile on his actions...

geet again went in playful mode...she don't want to even think about what daarji told her...her baba and maan's assurance was more than enought for her to believe the unbelievable...

geet: maan...u really sing well...aur aapne kitna acha guitar bajaya...

maan: tumhe acha laga geet...

geet: bahut acha...aapne kab seekha?

his music starts with geet and ends with her...he sings only for her...his every word has an essence of his meeshti in it...

maan: jiski zindagi me sirf geet he geet ho use music seekhne ki kya zarurat hai...

she blushed and looked down he rested his forehead on her...he touched his nose with her ,moving in a to and fro motion...she pulled him on bed and turned to adjust herself between his legs ,her favourite place...maan hugged her from back keeping his chin on her shoulder and closed his eyes..

geet: maan mai aapko bahut tang karti hu na...

maan turned her face to look into her eyes piercingly...

maan: phirr se kaho

geet understood he dint like her saying this...she went gloomy thinking for how long they ll have to meet like this...y cant she be with him all the time...maan could feel her restlessness...he didnt want her to feel low anymore...she already went through so much today..he made her lie on bed ,her face was sparkling with moon light...maan laid beside her on the top...he was mesmerized with the beauty beside him but with a tint of sadness...he couldnt stop loving her more and more...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E0aj0mqwvcM (must listen song frens...its really bful)
Gum sum chaandni ho naazni ho

Ya koi hoor ho

Dil nashin ho, dil kashin ho

Ya jannat ka noor ho

Masha allah ,masha allah,masha allah

They were looking into their eyes deeply ...no one can understand their love...their love was beyond their age, their feel and beyond any logic and rationality...
It came on its own accord...they didnt have to act or try to do something...it happened.. it was their flow not only in this life but every life they took birth in...they were meant to be together ...This is the depth of their love...

Tum sabah ho, ya ghata ho

Khekasha ho saiba ho

Subha ki pehli kiran ke jaise

Beba ke alhade pawan ke jaise

Khusboyein tum lootathi ho

Masti mein chur chur

Masha allah ,masha allah,masha allah

With their closeness ...strange feelings were arousing in them...maan was aware of what he was feeling ...but geet was still trying to get those sensations...surely they were pleasurable but not complete...their rapid pulsating heartbeats ... maan cudnt help looking at geet's breast moving up and down making him insane...

Tum hayaa ho, tum ridha ho

Tum wafa ho, tum nasha ho

Khamoosh nazare, sadoou jaise

Tumhare baathein duwaoou jaise

Har nafas mein tum samaye ho

Phir bhi ho itni door

Masha allah ,masha allah,masha allah

Geet traced his eyes looking at his object of attension and fluttered her lashes...he traced his fingers on her neck and collar bone moving down raising their heart beats...her legs folded in response of the tingling sensation he was giving her all over...maan looked into her eyes which were closed by now,her face,drinking her beauty ...he lingered his fingers on her breast giving her sweet yet painful sensations...he gave a little pressure when geet shivered and hugged him tight...resting his face on her front ...maan came out of his ecstacy... feeling her instant reaction and he realized his boldness...

She was calming herself holding him and maan let her do so...he carefully rested his face on her front feeling her soft self and closed his eyes...but he kept a check ,he didnt want to loose his control again...first time geet had experienced such emotions,she didnt had the language for this feel ...it made her dizzy,they hugged each other and slept...

In the morning ...maan woke up early but geet was fast asleep...it was her sleep out of bliss and contentment...maan looked at her lovingly ...she had a slight smile on her face which was enough for maan to know that she wasn't scared but actually somewhere in her sub consciousness even she wanted this and loved it...maan left her a msg in cell that he is in hoshiarpur and will meet her before leaving and departed after opening the door ,she skipped her school and slept over time...supriya and sachin checked her ,adored her...it was strange she never over slept...

Here maan was waiting for brij to leave the haweli...geet woke up after a while...she looked for maan...he was no where to be found and the door was open...she rushed to her bed and took out her phone frm under the pillow ...she had a msg from maan..her lips curled into a smile..he is there in hoshiarpur...but then where is he...she thought

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feeling sleepy...cant write more...sorry...

part 20

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2741747&TPN=66
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PLEASE READ:
Precap: maan beating brij and i'll try to give a long update ..may be 3yrs leap..so that we can njoy a mature romance...:) we are still to go with geet's innocent questions arsing in herfrom rex's msgs and videos 😳...[give suggestions]...THANKS FOR READING...

Edited by varshr - 13 years ago

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Anna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#305

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lively-piia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#306

lvd it...

brij ki dhunai...eagerly waiting 4 it

cont

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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#307

awesome update
i m loving it

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Saru

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Posted: 13 years ago

#308

My like button not working :(
Awesome update !!
Loved it !!
I'm all for the leap!!
Update soon

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---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#309

wowww

now you think about their romantic kiss to

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love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#310

awesome n beautiful update...

i loved it...d bonding b/w dem is really woderful...full of purity n unconditional love...

its really amazing...

m waiting fr brij to b beaten by maan...n also waiting fr deir mature romance...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

continue soon plz...