M&G - BEAUTY AND POWER OF TRUE LOVE... note pg 15

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Hey guys!!! I wrote a fiction but I can't think of a name for it... Could you guys help me in it??? Well I'm very very sorry but the story is quite similar to our favourite and beloved serial "Geet - Hui Sabse Parayi" or should I say same as that but with a TWIST...

Concept:
The story is of a girl who has dreams and ambitions to be successful as a woman... Be it handling only her household or career or both but in a rightful way... But here she is stuck with chauvinist elders of her family where women are nothing but piece of dirt ( me wondering how are they supposed to get kids???😉)... The trials and tribulations she undergoes to stand against all this and emerge as a winner... Her journey from her mother's place to a settled and peaceful life with her loving husband... And the different types of characters and qualities of people she encounters in her journey... This is the story not only of and about the girl alone, but also of the man who eventually and incidentally her husband... His life so purely and utterly misunderstood by people... And his support to his love, his wife...😛😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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INDEX:
prologue scroll down
part 1 page 2
part 2 page 6
part 3 page 7
part 4 page 9
part 5 page 12

P.S. CHARACTER SKETCH WILL BE POSTED AS AND WHEN REQUIRED AND DON'T GET PREJUDICED WITH HOW I WILL DRAW THE CHARACTER...
P.S. HEY PALS SORRY BUT MY FICTION WILL BE A COPY TO THE SERIAL BUT THE LOOSE ENDS LIKE VICKY, SAMEERA AND DEV'S PUNISHMENT WILL BE DEALT WITH...
P.S. PMS I HAVEN'T THOUGHT OF IT YET... BUT WILL DO AFTER I HAVE DONE EACH UPDATE...

THANK YOU VERY MUCH 4-LIONS FOR THE REALLY NICE SERIES... SORRY BUT PLEASE DON'T MIND ME...
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Congratulations Dear
Thanks for taking the plunge and writing on Maaneet.
I love your concept. I feel there are very few stories left which reflect the original GHSP story and that was partly the reason why I wanted to write season 2. I am happy that you are trying to write something close to the orginal story because that is the one which affects me the most.
I will wait for the first chapter and do let me know if you need any help.
Coming to name...hmmm...my suggestion - "Pyaar ki Ek Kahani"
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting ... wud love to read it ..

sowwie cant think of a title now


write soon

love
Sana
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LET ME SAY THE GIRL IS:

Geet Handa: 22 years old Bachelors in Architecture and Designing, a very jovial lady yet always stands for the truth and righteousness. She hails from a very conservative and a joint family where males are supposed to rule and females tormented no freedom of their own.


PROLOGUE:

A young lady who was searching through the forest-shrubs for a certain variety of flowers needed in the morning prayer at the Gurudwara today. The girl had to procure them because the special prayer arranged was for her and she had to get everything ready herself as the prayer required so, when suddenly she heard a loud shriek from not so far away. The shriek was of another young lady who was being chased by angry males laden with swords and fire torches. The young lady or should I say girl who was being chased was requesting pardon for some thing but the arrogant men were hell-bent on killing her. They slashed her dead and buried her into the ground before leaving the place, unknown of the fact that they have a witness.

The young lady who had come to collect flowers from the forest got shocked to the core and stood like a mute spectator through the whole brutal carnage. When she later regained senses she swore never to touch a sword even though she was the best at handling it, she was shaken to wits. Eventually she went to the murdered girl's side who was a bit conscious to speak out her last wish and died in her arms. The girl cleansing herself the last bit of blood from herself so that nobody knows of her presence left for home with a heavy heart.

This young lady (the sole witness) was to keep shut about her witnessing the crime and also to protect the identities of the dying lady's husband and his family as the last wish which she intended to keep as a promise.

Now this whole thing happened before dawn-break, so our story starts when the day starts and all seems normal. The lady who witnessed the murder was none other than our very own Geet Handa and the murdered one is Channi, the murderers include Brij, Channi's brother and a few more whom Geet has recognised.

The whole family of Geet visited the Gurudwara unknown to all this but the turmoil in Geet's mind had to be suppressed to keep her promise so everything got to "normal" by the time she reached home to start a new day with BABAJI's blessings.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratz dear...for a new ff...

all the best!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats dear..

Waiting for your lovely story..

Just cant get out of Maaneet and ghsp..

These stories keep me bonding to their love..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratulation for the new FF
m so happy and awesome start
loved it

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Congratulations for your new FF...

Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrat dear
stor is interesting
plz add me to ur list

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