M&G - BEAUTY AND POWER OF TRUE LOVE... note pg 15 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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THANK YOU SOOO MUCH FOR ENCOURAGING ME... THE STORY IS RUNNING JUST THE SAME AS THE SHOW... THERE WILL BE SLIGHT CHANGES ON THE RUN... SO PLEASE BEAR WITH ME...



Story:

The story begins at a town city of Hoshiarpur. There lives a family believed to be the most influential and respected in that town, the Handa family. It consists of Sukhvinder Lal Handa (daarji and the head of the family) who is a male chauvinist, Joginder Lal and Rupinder Handa (tauji & taiji), Mohinder Lal and Rano Handa (papaji & ma), Brij (veerji) [26 years] and his wife Bubbly [23 years, pregnant finally], Rajji [18 years] (tauji & taiji's kids), Titto [14 years] and Geet (Mohinder and Rano's kids). Brij is brainless, head-strong and insensible follower of daarji. Here is our very own free-spirited Geet stuck. Daarji came home that day and gathering every elder to the meeting area discussed about a plausible and probable alliance for Geet, getting angry that even though being 22 years of age there could be no alliance and getting worried unnecessarily for Rajji. In the family meeting Geet is not allowed and Rajji and Titto being kids are also to be away, while the ladies have no say. Geet's father had somehow stalled her marriage issue or breaking her alliances secretly till her graduation, but this time it was impossible. The alliance is from a reputed family in their caste, it is from Dev Khurana. They are supposed to be a very rich and a respectable family. The meeting with the groom's would be the day after and all the family was being alerted to be ready.

The next day, Geet had promised Titto a ride on her scooter as it was her last day at college as well, but due to some preoccupations she could not meet him. She ended up searching for jobs (though strictly against her daarji's rules); still she was browsing the Khuranas' firm details. Something caught her eye, the main and headquarters situated at Delhi is in need of an architect and a designer and since her credentials fit in to the profile she applies without a second thought. She doesn't know why she did it, why did she go against her daarji's rules, she doesn't know; but maybe destiny has something else in store for her. She returned home that evening before her the men returned from work but only to find her baby brother Titto disappointed for not being able to go for a ride with her, so promises to take him the next day (when the supposed alliance is to meet). She then changed, helped her aunt and mother at the chores and when the men returned, she got them water and went to help Rajji and Titto in their studies. Later after dinner and was about time to hit the bed, she thought how to disclose this matter to her emotional mother and father who was always by her side, but this time her father might not be able to handle the situation. On top of it, the alliance which was coming had claimed to take her to Canada after the wedding, which Geet did not approve of. She wanted to remain near by, close to her home-town or rather in her country so that she could visit her maternal house and parents as often as could be.

The day had come when the other party was to come to see the bride and were expected to arrive by evening. In the morning, Geet went to college to get her clearances done and then went to Titto for their scooter ride. During the ride when the two siblings were passing through the fields, they were crossed by a mini van which happened to drag away her fluttering dupatta, but then all of a sudden a minor imbalance created a distraction causing a minor accident stopping all vehicles on that narrow road-path through the fields. The dupatta had got stuck to one of the latches on the vehicle; in the mean time a very rich family of four who were just behind the vehicle saw all this. The man in the family (24/25 years of age) was actually mesmerised by the subtle beauty that had by then started to jump to get her dupatta letting her baby brother to get their fallen scooter upright. The man's mother (a middle aged lady) did not appreciate that a girl and most importantly a nubile one had left her modesty to the winds. The man's sister and the other lady along with them had not bothered the situation; they had just been cribbing about the mess they got stuck in and their time running out. Eventually, Titto got their scooter upright and saw that the man from the posh car and Geet were arguing and she wasn't letting the man help her getting her garment back, so, he (Titto) intervened and lifted his sister above the ground by a couple of feet so that she reached the cloth and then when she was taking it off a corner had torn off and remained there; the traffic also got cleared, but these people met and remained as strangers (maybe not for long). During her confrontation with the man, their hands had brushed and certain chill of fear rushed through her, but the very next moment her heart leapt of joy and a certain cool breeze of happiness flew her locks making her ever so beautiful, as not very far away a young man (around 28 years of age) had entered the town with his own purpose.

Geet and Titto had reached home late in a dishevelled state from the minor accident, though they tried to reach home unnoticed but failed desperately as their daarji and Brij veerji had seen them (while returning back themselves) who are the most feared by one and all due to their stringent "rules" and anger. They all entered their mansion where daarji and Brij veerji were very cross at Geet, but the others were very scared of daarji's reaction, which was to cane Geet on her palms bleeding them and warning her of the rules. Geet was so scared that she was shivering as well as her eyes welled up. Just then as a relief, Sunderbanank the matchmaker entered with the news that the groom's side reached the town and would be over at theirs in an hour after they freshen up. The shocked family was in a fix as the preparations were not complete, so daarji allotted every family member a work to be finished in a jiffy and shooting death glares at Geet he asked her to be taken inside and dressed ready. Titto wept silent tears when Geet was being caned, so was her mother and taiji, but they just took her inside to her room and asked her get ready quickly. Her mother was trying to convince her to stop weeping and her bhabhi or parjaiji was sweet talking her to release herself off tension. On the other hand the young man who entered the town alone had been feeling a certain peace at heart when he stepped in to the place but now he felt a certain prick in his heart as she was weeping continuously, but as he was what he was he just ignored it not finding his answers.

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PART 2

THE SUBSEQUENT PARTS NEED A BIT OF TWEAKING SO THE NEXT WILL BE UP IN 2-3 DAYS...😊 ENJOY!!!

Edited by LadyArwen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Congrats on the new ff...
nice prologue..
hmm interesting!!!!
plzz add me onto ur pm list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome dear
Loved it slot
Cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely dear add me in ur pm list and pm me too
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it...
its just superbbb

well iagree with ritzy di's title

"pyar ki ye ek kahaani"
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome 1st part
i know u told that it is smae s the show but plz not geet and dev comsu***** plz its a request u can show that they had to leave before anything happen with dev and geet atleast we could accept this in FF

plz it a request no *********** of geet and dev plz😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Amazing start 😃
The Prologue was amazingly written.😊
Killing someone's life on the name of Honor is something very hard to digest!!
Some people can never ever come out of their false prejudices.
I'm eagerly waiting for the further parts as in its previous episodes GHSP dealt with some very sensitive social issues .


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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratulations on the FF...
very interesting one, and waiting for the major twist
lovely prologue
interesting character sketch
dear and awesome [first part]
Please don't put Dev and Geet part, or just come up with a twist 😆
Love,
Frankie
Edited by music_girl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome 1st part
i know u told that it is smae s the show but plz not geet and dev comsu***** plz its a request u can show that they had to leave before anything happen with dev and geet atleast we could accept this in FF

plz it a request no *********** of geet and dev plz😭😭😭




even i did not like that part in the show... so don't worry about that... here Dev will be more repentant than in the show for a much less crime... and Geet will be truly and completely Maan's but the doctor has to tell them that...😉😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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well well well guys you don't want me to spill the beans yet do you??? but please please please don't go with my medical knowledge... i'm really very bad at that... i'm taking liberties in all the cases be it medical or otherwise (at some point of time even legal)...

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